I think ill update once for every three reviews... this way I know I'm not typing just for my cats to read, and ill have more time to come up with ideas. Hopefully the results will be longer more intriguing chapters with whatever YOU guys like.
There was very little room under the Dumpster she dragged herself under after falling. A fowl smelling liquid lay near her. She knew they would find her if she stayed put, but she couldn't exactly get up and run either. Her leg was badly sprained when she collided with the wall. If only they would leave for a minute, then she could crawl to a basement window a few feet away from her, open it, and be gone. She waited for what seemed like eternity. She knew they wouldn't leave until they found her... and surely will in such an obvious place to hide. The only other obstacles in the alley were a fire escape, a broken bench dragged off the main street, and a few trash bags.
They wouldn't attack her out in front of pedestrians? Would they? If only someone would walk past she could jump out and walk with him or her, but to where? She didn't think anywhere would be safe. It seemed useless to do any thing to escape when, to make things worse, a stray dog saw her in presumably his territory. The pit bull / rotty mix galloped to her hiding spot growling, barking, and showing his dominance. She felt things couldn't get any worse. Footsteps were hurling towards her hiding spot, familiar footsteps; they stopped right at the Dumpster before threatening the dog off. She heard a gun cock and the man bent over ready to shoot his supposed target...
"Erica?" The man asked puzzled, it was her uncle josh "what are you doing here?" He asked completely dumbfounded before pulling her out from under the Dumpster. He noticed her terrible condition immediately. Quickly putting two and two together he found that it was her they have been hunting. He half carried her to the window and let her in as heavy footsteps drew nearer.
She heard her uncle talking to a younger man about 20; the same man that was on the roof top AND first attacked her. She was to disoriented to make out what was being said but she also had questions, like "how did her uncle know them?" And "why would he?" She was to exhausted to do any thing but sit there, to weak from not eating and sleeping to understand what was happening; soon she slipped into unconsciousness.
The end of the third chapter already? It seems like their getting shorter...
Should I include any of the S.T.N-J characters in the story as in a 'transfer' scenario? If so who?
Note: Amon and robin are still alive in this one if I decide to use them.