OK after countless hours of meditation and finding my center. I'm finally updating. Thank you. thank you all.

Chapter four

Sorry for how short, bad, make you wanna die, chapter this may be. Thanks to all those who reviewed

Siliven: Three things. One: you said I was stupid for chapter two. Then you apologized for chapter two when I revised it, but I had already sent chapter three in before I read your review, so I called you a bitch before I read your review. And you know I was gonna apologize for that, but I changed my mind. Two: if my story is so bad, then why the hell do you keep reading it? Ummm? Three: if you write as good as you say you do, then why haven't you posted any? And don't say I write badly and unimaginative cuz, I don't post my best stories and poetry on the Internet. Also I don't want any of your stupid pity. You know I pity you. Who cares if my characters are ooc, it's my story and I can have the characters any way I want to. That's kinda the purpose of If you're reading this, then my story must not be poor pitied. So pretty much your whole apology was one big fat lie. You're one reason why I don't trust people.

Kmc99: Thanks. Glad you liked it. Don't worry Starfire won't become evil.

Sheeta-33: did you enjoy it that much? Wow. Thanks for the spelling.

Kaila: Merci Beacoup (many thanks) don't you hate that what's gonna happen? What's gonna happen? Feeling you get and you think about it for a long time. Please send in ideas if you have any, cuz one idea, like, triggers some creative spark in my mind. Weird. Thanks for the permission for the poetry, but I really don't want Siliven to die. –In background one mini-devil is sharpening a scythe and a monkey rubbing his tummy- "but boss you said that Siliven was gonna die in the park at 10:00 tonight." Says the little devil. "Umm…well…" "yea, and you said I could eat all the chocolate they owned." "Shhhh." –focusing back on kaila- ummm…They're lying. Bye.

Blonde shadowcat: glad. I got the idea for the necklace for one of my friends, cuz she has one just like it. I know, everyone seems to be in 8th grade. It's weird.
Robingirlwonder: glad you can't wait for the next chapter, cuz you'll have to. Mawaaahhhhhhh. Your story rox too.

Queen-of-Azarath: thanks for the spelling. I have closed captioning on my T.V., but it is so messed up. Ex. Girl becomes grill. Used in a sentence, " your little holly is such a cute grill." And grill becomes girl. Used in a sentence "slap some steak on that girl for me" get my draft? It really sucks that 'Bunny Raven' won't air until January, so that means I can't see the new season till about February. -Muttering- stupid good for nothing cartoon network. -Back to you-it's a BB raven story. So thanks for the review. Au Revoir, Reine D'Azarath(good-bye queen of azarath. French)

And a thank you also to:

Misunderstoodgrl

Yumi-clone

Lost Inside

Kilala63

Clueless90

Solodancer789

Angelinajfan322

Charles102

Princess angel rose

Cheezysquirrel

Rose: seeing that you LOVE red x/starfire pairings I am gonna write an –bumbadabumbumbum- alternate ending for you. Or maybe I'll write you a one-shot or maybe your own story. Heeheehee. Tell me what you want.

Sorry I didn't write you all separate but I am really lazy.

Ummmm. This chapter was written in pieces not all together, so it is kinda scattered. Sorry.

You all probably hate my guts. Well almost everyone does so I'm used to it.

I'M SO SORRY FOR THE WAIT I'VE JUST HAD MAJOR BRAIN DEADINESS. SORRY ONCE AGAIN.SORRY SORRY SORRY! PLEASE DON'T SHUN ME-MONKEYS AND MINI DEVILS LAUGHING AND THROWING PAPER AND FRUITS AT ME- NO PLEASE STOP. WAHHHH. – MONKEYS AND DEVILS STOP- GOOD –MONKEYS START DANCING THE CONGO LINE WHILE EATING MY CHOCOLATE- NOOOO! – ATTACKING MONKEYS. MONKEYS SCATTERING. "HELP US SOMEONE" SCREAMS A MONKEY AS I BIT ITS TAIL. GIVE ME MY CHOCOLATE YOU LITTLE BEAST!!! -"UMMM… FRENCH STAR MAY BE A WHILE. SO UMMM… HERE'S CHAPTER FOUR"SAID THE HEAD MINI-DEVIL as it gets its fork like tail gets bit by a wild monkey. It lights on fire and grabs the nearest forkie thing and starts running after the monkeys

"Dude what took so long!!!!" screamed Beastboy once they got out of the jewelry store. "He totally whooped our butts." Beastboy then kissed his. (ewww. He did that in Wavelength too.) "Man! Robin! Hate to say this but he is right." Chipped in Cyborg "WHERE WERE YOU?" he then yelled. Raven used a bubble on each of their heads to shut them up. "HEY" yelled Beastboy and Cyborg, but you really couldn't hear them. Hence the bubbles. "Robin what happened? Where were you?" robin sighed. "I was out looking for where red x might have brought Starfire" "did you have any luck?" in the background Beastboy and Cyborg are trying to remove the bubbles "darn stupid fricken moth…" Beastboy was muttering.(I could say what he was saying but this isn't rated r. there is like 10 other things he would say. back to robin and raven) "no it led to a dead end." Robin said while hanging his head. Raven, not being one for comforting others, tried her hardest to convince Robin that it isn't his fault. "Robin look, red x kidnapped her, but that isn't your fault, he's just a psycho (people call me that too) and he's stupid, cuz he forgot one little thing" "what's that?" robin asked. "That I can read minds (no shit sherlock. What took you so long. I don't know either.) The next time we see him I'll just read his mind and we'll find Starfire easy" "but… What if he blocks out his mind or something?" "Don't worry he won't know. I doubt he's that smart" "but I knew that you were in my mind before. And I was stupid enough to make the suit" "robin. Stop shooting yourself down! So you made the suit. Who cares??!! It's like what starfire told you. ' Your no longer the one in the suit' so stop pitying yourself!!!" raven practically yelled at him. She then decided to leave, cuz she didn't want to say nothing else in fear that it would hurt robin.

Red X's hide out

Starfire is just sitting there pondering. 'I need to find a way out of here.' Then it hits her like a ton of bricks. She lifted her hand and rummaged through her hair. Then she pulled a bobby pin out of it.(OK I know she probably doesn't wear them, but just bear with me) she then jammed it in the key hole on the chains on her wrists. Click. She heard. She then did it on the chains on her ankles. Click. 'Finally I am free.' Then she stopped. 'My powers. I can not fly out.' She pounded her fists on the wall. (A thing she probably got from robin) she then thinks. ' I must be strong.' Trying to prevent tears coming out from her eyes. She then got up and walked to the door of the room she was in. to her surprise and liking, it was unlocked. She decided that if she was to escape she better do it now. 'I will escape without my powers' so she walks down the twisting and turning halls till she spots some stairs. Then she goes down them, but they lead to a dead end. So she walks back up them. She finds another, but they lead to a dead end too. She then finds three more, but they all lead to dead ends. She collapses on the floor and starts to cry. 'mu…st… st..ay…stwahhhhhh' After about a minute she gets back up and tries to find an exit again. She turns down a hallway and spots a door. She walks to it and opens it. A bright light, (being the sun) causes her to shield her eyes. ' I am free' she ran outside. She smelled the air. Then she started to walk.

-Ten minutes later-

' I am lost.' Starfire indeed was lost. She started to sniffle. "At least I am away from red x." she said aloud. As she walked down the trail in the park.(sorry I didn't mention that. Ohh yeah. It's dark and no one is around. Or so she thinks) "wow not only are you cute, but smart too." A figure said out of the shadows. Starfire turned around, and saw red x standing there. She started to whimper. She backed away, only to be stopped by a tree. Red x had her cornered. Red x grabbed her. Starfire screamed but of course no one heard her. Red x grabbed a tranquilizer gun out of his pocket (Does the suit have pockets. And here is another question. If you look at their super hero costumes, how the hell do they go to the bathroom without taking them off. Sorry off subject.) he the shot it in starfire's arm. She started to get dizzy. "Sorry to do this to you, but I need to." He told her. "I am gonna have to lock the doors on you now." In Red X's arms she passed out. Red x then picked her up bridal styles and pressed the button on his belt. They disappeared.

Hooray. I'm done with this chapter. Ohh and umm do to complaints from the government- I sent some devils to destroy every thing that bush owns. (Sorry all you bush lovers but IHATE BUSH!)- My devils are in jail now. And my monkeys well let's just say there umm injured.-Looking at millions of monkeys lying on the ground, and some ambulances driving up.- so umm I really need to control my temper.