Me: Hey! I'm back with a new chapter! But first, the reviews (thank you! Thankyou!)from my one-shot: Life greatest obstacle.
Blackdranzergurl: Sorry I made you cry...hugs I know I make many people die but I was feeling for it.
Max: Like you ever had pity...
Lashing cries: That's great! Joseph and Mariam are my fav. characters too! I make most of my stories on them. Oh by the way, I love Frozen tears, I'm waiting for the next chap!
Joseph: sing-song voice I have a fa-an! I have a fa-fan!
Spazzy's girl: Thank you for the whole review! I was blushing...
Me: And now, for my only reviewer of chapter 2: NinjaMatty! You kept you're opinion from me on MSN, it was a good idea. So...you wanted Mariam to get rapped? laughs
Mariam: Can I say something?
Me: Of course!
Mariam:Speaks as loud as she coulds YOU ARE CRUEL WITH ME!
Me: That's the fun with her!
I won't bother now, good reading!
-Hello little fellaw, what ya doing?
-Meow!
-Oh! You're hurt! said Mariam as she took the kitty's paw
-Meow...
-taking the cat I'll bring you at my home maybe the boys will want to keep you.
-How should I call you? Hmmm, Creamy? No. Cherry? Na, too strange...
-Evil laughs What a young pretty lady like you is doing out at this time?
Mariam turned her head to see a man in the 40's all dressed in black walking in her direction. Mariam got backyards of two steps, prudently.
-What do you want?
-Me? I told you: What a pretty young lady like you is doing out at this time?
-That's not of your buiness.
TheCat jumped on the ground and started to growl
-Go away, you nasty hair ball! HAAAAA!
The Cat had scratched and bited the man on leg. The man gave it a violent kick and the kitty ran away. While this, Mariam ran away too. Heading for home, she was thanking the little kitty.
-Hey! No so fast! said the man as he entered in a car
The car cut Mariam's road. The man opened Mariam's door side and tried to catch her, luckly, she had the time to jump out of his touch. The Saint Shield climbed in a tree. The car's man headed to her hide and made the tree fall. Mariam, who was still on the tree when the car hit, lyed on the ground, unconscious. The man took her under the shoulders and caried Mariam to the car. As he put her in, one of her bracelets fell on the ground. The vicious took and stared at it.
-Well, well, well, look what prime target I get. The Saint Shield girl... After I'd kill you, everyone will be affraid to walk on the street, my pretty. Laughs the man said as he sat in front of the wheel, looking inside the bracelet.
Mariam heard that, well, she heard that he planned to kill her. She had to come at it, this morning, MariamForest wouldn't be of this world anymore. Tears of pannick was rolling down her cheeks, at the time that her life was about to be better, the maniac got her. A cellphone rang...
-Hello? Oh, it's you, Sylvia. So have you captured any boy this night? One kid escaped you... Me? Yeah, I caught one of our target. You can cross MariamForest of the list, she'll be dead in less than one hour; just to let me do my thing...Staring at Mariam No, she can't hear me, she's in a deep sleep...
The car stopped in a dark place, the man get out of the car. ''Perfect'' Mariam heard
I stop here! I don't know Mariam real last name; if you know, tell me! Now I let say your opinion on Mariam's fate.
Review please!