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Toboe's Pup: First off we would like to thank Light-Eco-Sage, gohan11, Daxter's Gurl, and finally Shadow-of-flames for reviewing for our first chapter. Even though I spelled like every other word wrong.

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Toboe's Pup: hope you enjoy this next chappy

Chapter 2

A dark figure hovered over a table in a dimly lit room.

"Just a few more hours' dear brother. In just a few more hours' you will live. Then you can get that Freak for what he did to you." The voice sounded male. He stepped back to admire his work. The man on the table looked older by 5 years. It was hard to get the remains, but harder to get a place to perform the making of the body.

The body was made of a liquid metal (think terminator 2 bad guy) and DNA from the younger man. The only parts to survive from the actual body were the brain and the heart. The young man walked over to a huge machine. He grinned remembering how easy it was to set up lab. The old weapons factory had been abandoned when the tower had blown up with that fat ass Krew.

"Now to add the thing that will give you life." Pushing a button, the young man watched as the purple substance flowed into the body. With the Dark Eco in place all he had to do was wait for the machine to get charged up.

"Soon, soon he will know our pain." The man grabbed the hand of the other man, a tear falling onto the two brothers' hands.

(jumping to another scene)

Jak's eyes went wide in terror at the evil glint he saw in Keira's eyes. He quickly shook his head, while she nodded. Grabbing the hottest hot sauce ever made (A/N: you guys choose the hot sauce) in the world, she poured the bottles contents onto his tongue. Jak's eyes teared as the sauce burned his tongue. Ripping his tongue away from Keira, he ran to the sink, stuck his mouth on the faucet and turned on the cold water.

"Next time I tell you to put your tongue away you might want to listen." Keira laughed. Jak just grumbled as he attempted to cool his tongue.

"Keira, Jak's bad mouthing." Daxter said with a grin.

"I am not." Jak lied.

"You'll sleep with Max if you don't behave." Keira threatened.

"You wouldn't let me sleep with the dog……….would you?" Jak asked. Keira looked at Max then looked back at Jak. Jak knew he was fighting a losing battle. To try and win her over, Jak gave the best puppy eyes he could give.

"Night sweety." Keira said, giving Jak a kiss on the lips. Jak kissed back, but that would prove fatal. As he was in la la land, he heard the soft clicking of a bedroom door. Snapping his eyes open he saw that the bedroom door was closed and locked. Knowing what fate awaited him, he turned to Daxter.

"Sorry buddy. You should have listened." Daxter said. He walked into his room then locked his door. Jak turned his head slowly to meet the Crocadog's eyes. Max wagged his tail faster. Sighing, Jak started for the dogs' room.

"Damn women charms." Jak grumbled.

"I heard that." Keira yelled, "Maybe another night with the dog will work."

"No I was just joking." Jak sighed as he walked into Max's room. Curling up in a little ball, Jak tried to fall asleep. Max curled next to Jak.

"Well, it can't get much worse." Jak said to Max. Alas, he had spoken to soon. For as soon as he finished speaking, max did the unthinkable. He let out a 5 minute long, nasty, and probably chunky, fart. Jak went green in the face. He felt something warm on his chest. Jumping up, he ran to the bathroom. After scrubbing himself raw, Jak went to his room and pounded on his bedroom door.

"Please Keira, I'm sorry let me back in." Jak pleaded.

"Not tonight. Go to Daxter's room." Keira said. Jak walked over to Daxters' room to start begging.

"Dax, please let me sleep here." Jak pleaded.

"What's wrong with the dog?" Daxter asked. Jak grumbled his answer, blushing lightly. "I can't hear you."

"The dog sharded on me ok? Now can I please sleep in you room?" Jak pleaded, as he blushed a deeper red.

"You DID wash yourself, right?" Daxter asked, peeking through the door.

"Yes I scrubbed myself." Jak said. Daxter let him in his room only AFTER checking for shit. "Thanks buddy."

"You owe me BIG time." Jak just nodded sleepily and passed out on the bed. Daxter jumped on his friend and curled into a ball and fell asleep.

(Back to the weapons factory)

The time was approaching. Soon his brother would live. When the power gauge reached full, he threw the switch on. Electricity flew everywhere in the room. The body arched as it was hit with the voltage. When the man threw the switch off the body went still. Then it opened its eyes. It slowly sat up and looked around.

"Where…..am I?" It asked.

"You're in the land of the living brother." The man said. The creature looked at his sibling and smiled.

"Thank you brother. That freak put you through trouble. I will kill him. The FREAK will DIE!" The man promised.

Whiskers: whoo another chapter done.

Toboe's Pup: So did you guys like it? Hope ya did

Whiskers: cause its going to be a while till we can get the next chapter up.

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