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Jinx accidently drinks a potion that transform her ina 5 years old child, she doesnt remember the Titans or the Hive, she had the memory when she was that age, the Titans doesnt have more choice than take care of the little Jinx and find out how to make her normal.
CHAPTER 2 Jinx is getting smaller
It was 3:00 pm i the Tower the titans were eating
"Hey Beastboy probe these"
"Are you kidding thats meat"
then the alarm titan sound
"Titans lets go, problems in the city"
The Titans run to the T car.
Meanwhile in a street the ex Hives were making destruction
"Jinx i was wondering, if that potion that you drink if will affect you in an hour, coul these potion are of affect slower too" ask Mamoth
"No, these potion can affect instantly and is not necesary to drink it just throw it, but the problem its that the effects of the potion only last in some minutes and other in hours but theyre are that can be permantly"
"Great" said Gizmo
"And now i need 10 more minutes and i will be very powerfull"
"Hey those snouts are coming" said Gizmo
"Prepare to attack patern Epsilon"
The exhive were separating, each one had two bottles with potion, and a bag with more potions
Beast boy turns into a tiger and he was going to attack
"Hey green moron receive this" said Gizmo throwing the substance and hitting to BeastBoy inmediatly the liquid turns into glue making the green boy stuck
Raven and Jinx were figthing in a Kun fu style, Jinx had a bottle and throw the liquid to raven, but she uses her power to avoid it
Robin evade a punch from Mammoth
"Hey why dont fight with someone of you own size" said Cyborg who was running to tackle him
"Receive this" Mammoth throw a bottle hitting Cyborg and he instantly freeze, or paralyze
"Hey what did you did to him"
"The same what im going to do, yo you" Mammoth throws another bottle
Robin cath it and he throw it to him, tha potion was trying to catch but he failed, the liquid freeze Mammoth all his body was covered with ice.
Starfire was shoting to Gizmo but he was to quick with his wings.
"You need to practice more loser" Gizmo throw a bottle but Starfire catch it
Then something hit to his bag and he loses control
"Thanks Robin" said Starfire
"Is nothing lets go to help the others"
Gizmo and up and down and in seconds he hit the ground and he gets unconcious
Jinx was the last she look how their partners failed, but she was happy to see what Cybor deserves for breaking her heart. But she knows that the effect of that potion will dissapear in some minutes
"Wait" said Jinx
"What, you want to give up" said Raven
"No but in seconds the effect of a potion that i drink it will make me 10 times more powerfull"
"What?"
"Now its happening" the body of Jinx was glowing in blue, but then she feels a headache
"What what its happening oh no i drink the wrong bottle" Jinx feels that she was shrinking
"Raven you must help me i put the antidote in the in the..." Jinx was falling getting sleppy
"Hu? Raven what is happening" said Robin
"She she..."
"She looks adorable" said Starfire that saw a little version of Jinx, like she was 5 years old
To be continue.
Jinx accidently drinks a potion that transform her ina 5 years old child, she doesnt remember the Titans or the Hive, she had the memory when she was that age, the Titans doesnt have more choice than take care of the little Jinx and find out how to make her normal.
CHAPTER 2 Jinx is getting smaller
It was 3:00 pm i the Tower the titans were eating
"Hey Beastboy probe these"
"Are you kidding thats meat"
then the alarm titan sound
"Titans lets go, problems in the city"
The Titans run to the T car.
Meanwhile in a street the ex Hives were making destruction
"Jinx i was wondering, if that potion that you drink if will affect you in an hour, coul these potion are of affect slower too" ask Mamoth
"No, these potion can affect instantly and is not necesary to drink it just throw it, but the problem its that the effects of the potion only last in some minutes and other in hours but theyre are that can be permantly"
"Great" said Gizmo
"And now i need 10 more minutes and i will be very powerfull"
"Hey those snouts are coming" said Gizmo
"Prepare to attack patern Epsilon"
The exhive were separating, each one had two bottles with potion, and a bag with more potions
Beast boy turns into a tiger and he was going to attack
"Hey green moron receive this" said Gizmo throwing the substance and hitting to BeastBoy inmediatly the liquid turns into glue making the green boy stuck
Raven and Jinx were figthing in a Kun fu style, Jinx had a bottle and throw the liquid to raven, but she uses her power to avoid it
Robin evade a punch from Mammoth
"Hey why dont fight with someone of you own size" said Cyborg who was running to tackle him
"Receive this" Mammoth throw a bottle hitting Cyborg and he instantly freeze, or paralyze
"Hey what did you did to him"
"The same what im going to do, yo you" Mammoth throws another bottle
Robin cath it and he throw it to him, tha potion was trying to catch but he failed, the liquid freeze Mammoth all his body was covered with ice.
Starfire was shoting to Gizmo but he was to quick with his wings.
"You need to practice more loser" Gizmo throw a bottle but Starfire catch it
Then something hit to his bag and he loses control
"Thanks Robin" said Starfire
"Is nothing lets go to help the others"
Gizmo and up and down and in seconds he hit the ground and he gets unconcious
Jinx was the last she look how their partners failed, but she was happy to see what Cybor deserves for breaking her heart. But she knows that the effect of that potion will dissapear in some minutes
"Wait" said Jinx
"What, you want to give up" said Raven
"No but in seconds the effect of a potion that i drink it will make me 10 times more powerfull"
"What?"
"Now its happening" the body of Jinx was glowing in blue, but then she feels a headache
"What what its happening oh no i drink the wrong bottle" Jinx feels that she was shrinking
"Raven you must help me i put the antidote in the in the..." Jinx was falling getting sleppy
"Hu? Raven what is happening" said Robin
"She she..."
"She looks adorable" said Starfire that saw a little version of Jinx, like she was 5 years old
To be continue.