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Chapter 6: Trapt
Joanna was awoken by the thunder of a big storm. a. She noticed Jonathan wasn't in the chamber.
"Damn…where is he? Wasn't he supposed to be so tired he would sleep for an entire week?", Joanna said more to herself than to anyone else.
A lighting illuminated the room and then Joanna saw through her mirror a silhouette with a kind of…knife…approaching. She mentally hoped she was hallucinating.
"Boo"
Joanna faced the person and punched him in the face before realizing who it was.
"Oww, damn ! Joanna, are you crazy?", asked Jon as he massed his cheek that was punched by Joanna.
"Oh shit…I'm sorry. I was sure you were some kind of assassin or something. I thought that I saw someone with a knife", replied Joanna with a sorry look.
"Of course! There's a lot of assassin walking in a maian ship with a knife", retorted sarcastically Jonathan.
"Please Jon, I know I was wrong…you don't need to make stupid comments. Anyway, what was that shiny thing you were holding? ", asked Joanna with an annoyed tone.
"I was only holding a spoon", answered Jonathan.
"A spoon?"
"Yeah, I needed it to eat my ice cream bowl I almost let fall on the floor when you punched me", said Jonathan as he showed her a bowl full of ice cream.
"What?! You're eating ice cream during the night?", asked Joanna with a confused tone.
"Yep…I woke up because of the thunder and I realized I was hungry so I went to the kitchen and made a big bowl of ice cream", explained Jonathan.
"…You shouldn't eat during the night. It's not good for health, you'll grow fat", retorted Joanna.
"Come on Jo! Do I really look like someone that needs to loose weight? I lost something like 25 pounds when I was on the Skedar planet. I must regain it", replied Jonathan.
"Maybe… but you really should regain your 25 pounds in muscle. It would be more useful than fat", Joanna replied back.
"Do you really think I've become weak as I was on the Skedar planet? I was hunting Skedars you know. This was the only activity I could do on this boring planet", responded Jonathan.
"Really? Why were you hunting Skedars?", asked curiously Joanna.
"Because I needed to eat", answered Jonathan.
"You mean…you were eating Skedars?!", questioned Joanna with a puzzled tone.
"Yes, there weren't anything else I could eat except for sand and rocks", replied Jonathan.
"Oh my god! That's terrible! After you went away from the place where they tortured you, you were obligated to eat Skedar flesh to survive?", asked Joanna.
"Yes, I was. This is why I eat 2 times more than before I was on the Skedar planet. I enjoy the food we make on Earth…it's tastier than Skedars", answered Jonathan as he began to eat his ice cream.
"I think I'll return to bed now, I'm tired", commented Joanna.
"As soon as I finish this bowl of ice cream, I'll return to bed too", replied Jonathan as he finished his bowl of ice cream.
Shortly after Jonathan rejoined her in the bed, she approached him and put her head on his chest. Then he put his arms around her and looked at her curiously.
"Jo…why did you rescued me? And why did you killed so coldly those guards? I never asked you to do such things…I didn't wanted to do things like this. You'll have to hide like me, now you're an outlaw Joanna", Jonathan said.
"I don't care if you killed those people or not…the only thing that is important to me is that you didn't wanted to kill them. You didn't have any control on what you've done. And I'm sure there's something wrong with the proof they showed to me. When I asked the stupid scientist to take a look at it again, he didn't wanted to! I wouldn't surprised that they organized a plot against you", answered Joanna.
"What if I truly killed those people? You could have freed a killer", commented Jonathan.
"You were the one that told me you would never have done such things if you wouldn't have been drugged! They could sentence you to death for something you don't even remember! This is unfair Jonathan! This is why I've made my own justice. I've already lost you twice…I don't want to loose you another time", replied Joanna.
"…Thank you Joanna. I cannot count all the time you were there to save me", responded Jonathan.
"This is what you get for being Perfect Dark's lover", replied Joanna with a slight smile.
Jonathan kissed her deeply and held her tighter. Joanna was glad he did. Each time his lips touched hers, she always forgot about all the worries they had.
"No matter what , I will always be happy…because you're by my side", Jonathan said after he broke the kiss.
"And so will I… Before, I was sure I could be happy without having a lover. I thought that my career was more important. I realized that I was wrong. My career and my reputation aren't of any value anymore. Now I understand that I've never knew what was true happiness before I met you…and learned to love you", replied Joanna.
"Stop that Jo or you'll make me blush", said Jonathan with a grin Joanna couldn't see.
It was her turn to kiss him passionately. They didn't heard the footsteps that were approaching.
Elvis was slightly panicked because of the thunderstorm but he was fascinated at the same time. After he heard Joanna talks with Jonathan, he thought that he could come to their chamber and ask them what was happening outside. He wasn't sure if he was disturbing them. He was sure he heard them talk a few seconds ago so he opened the door. He was surprised to see that Joanna had her lips on Jonathan's lips.
"What the", began Elvis.
"Elvis!? Wha…what are you doing here", asked Joanna with an unhappy tone.
"I heard you talk so I thought I could enter", answered Elvis with a confused tone.
"Elvis…you should really knock to the door before entering…it's a kind of…human habit", replied Joanna.
"Really? I should write this habit in my notebook then", Elvis said to himself.
"Anyway, why did you came?", asked Jonathan who was less irritated by Elvis' presence than Joanna.
"I…I was wondering what was happening outside…Is it dangerous?", asked Elvis with an anxious tone.
"Outside? It's only a thunderstorm. It's true that it could be kinda scary the first time you saw this but we aren't in danger. You would only be in danger if you were outside", explained Jonathan.
"R-really? Are you sure there isn't any danger?", asked worriedly Elvis.
"Don't worry Elvis. You have the same amount of chances to be caught by a lightning than winning 150 millions", answered Jonathan.
"Lightning? What is a lightning? And what do you mean with those millions?", questioned Elvis with a puzzled tone.
"That means you will NEVER be injured because of what is happening outside. It should be finished very soon so you can return to bed, Elvis", answered Joanna with an irritated tone she tried to hide.
"Why do you look so unhappy Joanna?", asked Elvis.
"I don't know any humans that like to be disturbed during the night…especially COUPLES", replied Joanna with the irritated tone she wasn't trying to hide anymore.
"Couples? Why couples?", asked Elvis.
"Ask Nathaniel or Sarah tomorrow, they're specialist of humans beings", retorted Joanna.
"O…okay…Goodnight", Elvis said.
"Goodnight Elvis", replied Jonathan because Joanna didn't have the intention to say anything else or she'll probably explode.
Elvis closed the door behind him. Jonathan looked at Joanna with a slightly surprised tone.
"Since when are you so grouchy with Elvis?", asked Jonathan.
"Since he disturbed us", replied Joanna.
"I prefer not to think about the reaction you would have if he would have come in an even more intimate moment", commented Jonathan with a mocking tone.
"I prefer not to think about what worst could have happened or I'll have nightmares about it", replied Joanna.
"Skedars don't give you any nightmares but the thought of Elvis seeing us could give you some? You're really weird Joanna…", commented Jon with a puzzled tone.
"Shut up would you…we should take rest now", replied Joanna impatiently.
"Okaaaay, goodnight darling"
Cassandra's office, early in the morning
"Putting this man into jail wasn't a good idea Mr Wallace", commented Cassandra as she sat on the chair of her desk.
"I didn't wanted to be accused. The problem is that I don't have a bloody idea if I've done it or not. I wanted to get rid of this worry so I put the blame on him", explained the young man.
"It's true that you really look the same. I've thought of a plan …because of some very clever scientists. This plan will only work if you agree to help me", Cassandra said.
"It depends on what I'm supposed to do", replied Jeffrey.
"I'm sorry to tell you that if you agree to help us, the work you've done before won't be of any use anymore. The man called Jonathan must be proved innocent of what you accused him", explained Cassandra De Vries.
"If everyone learn he's innocent, I'll be accused. I don't want this to happen", replied Jeffrey.
"If you help us, we'll be able to give you a new identity…if you know what I mean", responded Cassandra with a smirk.
"…I see…I think I get it", replied Jeffrey with a smirk.
"So you agree?", asked coldly Cassandra.
"Why not?", asked Jeffrey.
"Good…tomorrow, we'll execute our plan. Until there, you must get ready. I know some professional that could help you. I also have a few recorded video of him, you'll have to act exactly like he would have acted or the old man won't trust you", instructed Cassandra.
"Fine…I'll be ready tomorrow morning", replied Jeffrey.
Elvis' ship, 11 am.
Nathaniel and Elvis were sitting on the couch and were busy watching TV. Sarah was sitting next to them and was reading a novel.
"Look Sarah, they're already talking about Joanna and Jonathan. She won't be happy to see that they recorded her", commented Nathaniel.
"She probably expected this…she knew she wouldn't have the time to destroy the cameras", replied Sarah.
"Are they talking about me on TV?", asked Joanna as she appeared from nowhere.
"Joanna? We didn't heard you come", Nathaniel said with a surprised tone.
"…I think it's a habit from the mission I'm doing to walk silently", commented Joanna.
"Where's Jonathan?", asked Nathaniel.
"Sleeping", answered Joanna with a slight smile.
"Do you want some breakfast? I can make some for you", Sarah said.
Joanna thanked Sarah as they went to the kitchen. Elvis looked at her leave the room strangely, then he looked at Nathaniel.
"Nathaniel, can you tell me why the human couples are irritated when we open the doors of their chamber without knocking before?", asked curiously Elvis.
"…You…really want to know?", asked Nathaniel.
"Yes"
"Ok…I'll tell ya…it's one of my favorite topic", replied Nathaniel with an evil smirk.
"So I suppose you won't try to prove Jonathan innocence anymore?", asked Sarah as she was cooking.
"I don't see the importance anymore but Jonathan really want to know if he's the killer or not. I understand his choice. We're supposed to visit the scientist holding the proof today. Jonathan planned to bring more convincing argument to him than I did", answered Joanna.
"Don't you think it's a bit dangerous for you to go there? Just getting outside could be dangerous for you and Jonathan", commented Sarah.
"We're agents after all. Danger doesn't scare us. You don't have to worry, we'll be careful", responded Joanna.
"Fine. Now eat some breakfast, it'll give you more energy", replied Sarah her usual slight smile.
"We shouldn't knock on the door, I don't think we can trust him", commented Joanna.
"Yeah, you're right. I'll use a passkey to open the door", responded Jonathan as he took out a small piece of metal.
Jonathan was easily able to open the door. They silently entered the small laboratory. The scientist was tapping on his computer and seemed very concentrated. Jonathan quickly caught him by the collar and abruptly put him against the wall.
"What the hell!"
"Hi…you probably have a doubt of why I'm here", Jonathan said.
"No…I don't have any idea", responded the scientist innocently.
After he saw Joanna just behind Jonathan that was pointing at him with a gun, he quickly understood.
"Oh no! Not you again!", exclaimed the scientist.
"Do you have a name or should I call you mister the scientist?", asked coldly Jonathan.
"My name is Hal", answered the scientist fearfully.
"Fine, Hal. You probably guessed that I am the one everyone is looking for because of you", retorted Jonathan.
"Yes, you look like him a lot…I'm sorry but I'm not supposed to show you the video", replied Hal with a trembling voice.
Jonathan didn't wanted to waste his time with the scientist. He held Hal's neck with one of his hand and took out his DY-357 magnum with the other. Then he pointed the gun on Hal's head.
"Now will you change your mind?", questioned Jonathan with an annoyed tone.
"…O…Okay…b-but d-dd-don't tell anyone or I-I am g-gonna be in big t-t-trouble", answered Hal that was finding it hard to breath.
Jonathan let him go but let his gun pointed on him. Hal sat on a chair and tapped something on his computer. He put a kind of DVD in the computer and after a few seconds, the video began to play. Jonathan and Joanna looked at it carefully. The video ended.
"Make it play again but more slowly", ordered Joanna.
"O-okay"
The video played again but in slow motion. When the man that was supposed to be Jonathan faced the Skedar camera, Joanna told Hal to put the video on pause.
"Can you put a zoom on his face?", asked Joanna.
"I…I don't think I can do such things", answered Hal.
"Are you sure you can't?", asked innocently Joanna as she put her gun on Hal's head.
"I-I'll try", replied Hal with a terrified tone.
It seemed to be very easy to put a zoom. However, it wasn't very big.
"I want a bigger zoom", ordered Joanna.
"But I…"
"Shut up and just do it if you don't want to die", retorted Joanna with an annoyed tone.
Hal made a bigger zoom. Actually he made the biggest zoom he could because he didn't wanted Joanna to threaten him again. Jo and Jon looked at the image carefully. Jonathan put a hand on his mouth as he noticed something.
"Joanna, look at the left eye!"
Joanna looked more carefully at the left eye. It was…green.
"It's…IT'S NOT YOU!!!", exclaimed Joanna.
"What!? You mean this guy and the guy from the camera aren't the same person?", asked Hal with a surprised tone.
"No…I don't have any green eyes, they are brown. That means the man we see is Jeffrey", answered Jonathan.
"Oh my…I understand now why he didn't wanted me to show you the video more than one time…What have I done?!", replied Hal.
"So you didn't knew about Jeffrey's plan?", a asked Jonathan.
"…No…I'm sorry…I-I didn't wanted someone innocent to go in jail", answered Hal.
"It's alright. If you didn't knew, I can't truly hate you for that", replied Jonathan.
Joanna looked at Jonathan with a surprised tone. She couldn't believe Jonathan wasn't angry with that stupid scientist.
" Now that you were able to escape…what…what are you going to do now?", asked Hal.
"I don't know…Maybe that we should search for information about Robert O'Donell. It would be good to be able to prove he's a liar about the Skedars", responded Jonathan.
"I don't like this guy either. To make me forgiven, you can ask me everything you want about the DNA of everyone. I even have a sample of Robert O'Donell's DNA", replied Hal.
"Really? Are you able to know if he's a Skedar disguised into a human?", asked Jonathan.
"Trust me, I already checked. He's not a Skedar. I was sure he was but it seems he isn't", answered Hal.
"…Okay then, we'll leave", said Jonathan as he turned on his heels.
"You-You don't want me to help you?" questioned Hal.
"If we need information about people's DNA, we'll directly come here or we'll send someone else. It's safer like this…any other ways of communication could be intercepted", replied Jonathan.
"Okay…nice to meet you Mr Thatisnotakiller", Hal said.
"Nice to meet you too…You come Joanna?", Jonathan said.
"…Yes…", answered Joanna.
Joanna and Jonathan left the laboratory.
"This stupid scientist called Hal is a nice a guy after all", commented Jonathan.
"I don't understand you. He's completely unbearable. He's a kind of stupid coward that always try to hide us the biggest amount of information he could even if we threaten him. And he has this kind of annoying voice…", replied Joanna with an irritated tone.
"At least he's trying to help us. Let's just hope Jeffrey won't know everything about this. He doesn't look like a man that can show mercy in any way to anyone", responded Jonathan.
"Yes…but his help is not necessarily needed. Siegfried is supposed to be a scientist too", responded Joanna.
"Siegfried is a scientist but Hal seems to be a specialist in DNA…something that Siegfried isn't. Every help we will have will be useful", answered Jonathan.
"I wonder if Siegfried know him…probably not", commented Joanna.
"You ask me if I know a scientist called Hal that is expert in DNA?", asked Siegfried through a CI communicator.
"Yeah, do you know him?", asked Joanna.
"He's a stupid, idiotic moron, a fucking asshole, everything you want!", exclaimed Siegfried through the communicator.
"Wha…are you sure you're alright?", asked Joanna with a surprised tone.
"Huuh, sorry. I don't control myself when I'm talking about that sucker…He was the first one on Earth that dared to call me Sick freak. And he's sure I'm a blockhead just because I'm not short, skinny, with glasses and that I don't pee in my panties every thirty seconds", explained Siegfried.
"Where did you met?", asked curiously Joanna.
"In an international science exhibition. He hates me since I yawned when he talked about his researches on DNA", answered Siegfried.
"I see…do you think we can trust him?", asked Joanna.
"Probably…he's too thick to organize a plot against you", answered Siegfried.
"I'm glad to hear you say that. Jonathan is trusting too much people, I wanted to be sure he isn't going to turn like Herbert", explained Joanna.
"No chance this is going to happen. No girls would want to control him…the girls he knows the most are probably the one in the XXX site", replied Siegfried.
"…Eww…Anyway, thanks for telling me those information"
"No problem"
Joanna closed her communicator. Only a few seconds later, it beeped. Joanna sighed and answered.
"Jo, this is Velvet"
"What do you want?", asked coldly Joanna.
"I wanted to know what happened!", exclaimed Velvet through the communicator.
"They're saying all the pertinent information on TV you know", retorted Joanna with an annoyed tone.
"Joanna, I'm sorry about what I've said to the police officers. I know I've made a terrible mistake and I paid for it. I already lost Nathaniel, I don't want to loose my sister. Will you forgive me someday Joanna?"
"…I don't know"
"Will Jonathan forgive me someday?", asked Velvet.
"I'm a bit angry at him because of this. He told me that it wasn't nice from you to tell such things to police officers but he's not angry at you anymore because he knew you didn't wanted to harm him", answered Joanna with a slightly frustrated tone.
"What!? He…he forgave me!?"
"Yeah…Jonathan is affected by a terrible illness that is called the Imartless virus", replied Joanna.
"…I find it hard to understand you sometimes…I've also called because the email address of the CI received a strange message", explained Velvet.
"Oh yeah, that's true. I completely forgot to bring a computer on the ship. What is it talking about?", asked Joanna.
"It says: We find out a way to prove your friend's innocence. If you want further information, come to the Tower of London tonight at 3 am. Being able to enter the bloody tower at this tower even with all the cameras and the guards will prove that you really are from the Carrington Institute", Velvet said.
"…It could be a trap…", commented Joanna.
"Yeah…I know…You should talk to Jonathan about it but if you decide to go, I suggest you to not bring Jonathan with you, he could get arrested", suggested Velvet.
"I'm an outlaw too so I can also get arrested if it is the police", retorted Joanna.
"You're Perfect Dark Joanna. Even if the police would want to catch you, they wouldn't be able to", replied Velvet.
"I don't know Velvet…", Joanna said with a hesitant tone.
"Do what you want. Just be careful okay?", replied Velvet.
"…Ok…"
"If you need my help, don't be shy to contact me. Good luck", said Velvet just before she closed her communicator.
"But I want to go! You're not my boss after all. This person has information about me", retorted Jonathan.
"You don't understand! It's too dangerous! It's almost sure it's a trap", Joanna said with a worried tone.
"You think that if this e-mail comes from the police and they planned to capture us, you would be able to flee but I couldn't? It's not because you have a I don't have that I cannot do anything without being captured. I'm not that thick Joanna!", exclaimed Jonathan with a tone that was becoming angrier every seconds.
"Jonathan, stop being angry like this... I don't want to hurt you but even if you're high-ranked you often get in trouble. Must I remember you that I was the one that saved your life on the Area 51? After the plane crashed? In Datadyne corp when we were attacked by Skedars? In the prison?", asked Joanna.
"So…you really think I'm an incompetent…", commented Jonathan with a too calm tone.
"That's not I meant but…but…you often get in trouble. You should only do undercover mission, it would be safer for you", replied Joanna shyly.
"…You're probably right! Go to the Tower of London alone tonight, you don't need an incompetent like me. I'm just gonna stay here and wait patiently for your return exactly like a dog would have done!", exclaimed Jonathan with a sarcastic tone.
"…Please Jon, you must understand my point of view", begged Joanna with a discouraged tone.
"But I perfectly understood what you told me! You should go alone even if this mission is only concerning me because I'm an incompetent and can't take care of myself", answered Jonathan with the same sarcastic tone.
"…I'm only trying to help you Jon…", responded Joanna.
"But this is what you're already doing. Go to the Tower of London and I'LL STAY HERE AND GO ROTTEN FOR THE REST OF MY FUCKING LIFE!", shouted Jonathan.
"Calm down Jonathan, Joanna is right. You should stay here. If it was a trap, they would probably want to kidnap you or something. If you're not there, their plan is failed", Sarah replied as she inserted herself in the conversation. Nathaniel was just next to her.
"It's true Jon…don't go there, it's probably you they want", Nathaniel said shyly. He knew his brother was extremely angry.
"………………Fine…If everyone wants me to go rotten, I'll go rotten…and stay here", replied Jonathan very calmly.
"I'm sorry Jonathan", Joanna said.
Jonathan didn't say anything. He just looked at Joanna. Through his eyes…she could see so much contempt…Was he really hating her for this? She knew he always hated to be described as a person weaker as her but she never knew he would be so angry. She just hoped she would be forgiven when she'll be back…
"Okay Nathaniel, I'm in front of the Tower of London", Joanna said through her CI communicator.
"Do you notice anything special?", asked Nathaniel.
"There's more guards than cameras…it will be easier than I thought to enter the place", commented Joanna.
Joanna wanted to keep contact with someone during her mission. She didn't dared to ask Jonathan because he didn't talked to her since the argument they had so she asked to Nathaniel to do the job. She really began to feel bad about Jonathan. She realized that she underestimated him. He wasn't ranked A just because Carrington was in a good mood the day Jonathan had his rankings, it's because he was truly good. Letting him do assault mission would only help him getting better, it's not by forcing him to stay behind that everything will be fine.
"Okay…I'm entering the restricted area…We're only supposed to go there during the day", Joanna said with an emotionless tone.
"Good, the guards seem even worst than the one from Datadyne. You probably noticed there's a lot of Towers. The bloody tower isn't a big one. You'll have to turn on your left and walk until you face a wall. After you'll have to look on your right and you'll see stairs. You'll just have to go downstairs and you'll be at the meet point: inside the bloody tower", explained Nathaniel.
"It seems to be easy…too easy", commented Joanna.
"Keep your gun near, you must be careful. We don't know who will be waiting for you there", replied Nathaniel.
"Fine. I'm going", said Joanna.
Like she expected, the bloody tower was very easy to find. It was one of the smallest tower but the way to go there was very simple. Joanna began to have a bad feeling. It was so easy… She slowly went downstairs. It was extremely dark and the place seemed very old. When she arrived in a kind of basement, she saw a very small window that was letting some rays of the moonlight illuminate the dark room. Some torture instruments from the middle age were there. With the weak light of the moon on the instruments, it was only more horrifying. No one was there. Her CI communicator beeped.
"Joanna! Get outta here!! Quick! I've intercepted some…"
"Goodnight Miss Dark. Are you enjoying your visit in the bloody tower?", asked an unknown male voice through the CI communicator.
"Who the hell are you? What do you want?", asked Joanna abruptly.
"Do you brought your boyfriend with you?", the voice asked.
"Do you really think he would show himself at such places!? He's more clever than that!", exclaimed Joanna.
"I feel sorry for you…we'll have to use you to have him…how sad", answered the voice.
Joanna suddenly felt a sharp pain in her head and she almost instantly fell unconscious. It seems that even Perfect Dark could get in trouble…
"Joanna! Joanna! Answer me!", exclaimed Nathaniel through the communicator.
"Hello, young man. Your friend had been captured by us…we never thought you would be stupid enough to send someone there…We wish you good luck, you'll maybe never see her again", said the same male voice that talked to Joanna a few seconds ago.
"Who are you? Where did you bring Joanna?", asked Nathaniel worriedly.
There wasn't any response. The communicator closed. Nathaniel looked at his CI communicator with a panicked look and ran to Jonathan and Joanna's room. He almost smashed down the door as he knocked into it.
"JONATHAN! WILL YOU OPEN THAT FUCKING DOOR OR WHAT!?"
Jonathan opened the door with an annoyed gaze. When Nathaniel told him what happened, his face became as white as if he would have been dead. He let himself fall on a chair and put his head in his hands. His Joanna had been kidnapped, and she didn't even known how he was so sorry…and how he loved her so much…
End of chapter 6: Trapt (it is not a mistake, I was listening to Trapt when I was writing this chapter and I thought the name fitted with what was happening )
After two weeks of absence, I'm finally back! Sorry for taking so long, I was incredibly busy. I had thousands of exams (and I failed one :( ), and I also had a concert that I know just two days before it that I had a concert flute solo. But anyway, the length of this chapter is almost like two chapters being together. (the author look at the reviews) Oh my god, 7 reviewers! (fall from her chair) I've never had so much reviewers for only one chapter! And I had my first French review! Was it because I took a while to update? If it is the case, I'll always took a while to review HAHAHAHAHA. Just kidding! Thank you all for your reviews
TetraLink17: Sorry for not updating soon. I used that reason (Joanna told the guard she was pregnant) to describe the opinion of Joanna and Jonathan about children. I wanted to show how their opinion was so different, and this will maybe brought some conflicts later…
Spider-bear: I wanted to do an insane scene like that…Actually, I wasn't supposed to put a mud fight in the story COUGH (that was a cough that looked a lot like FILLING) It was a bit cruel to kill the guards like this but Joanna hadn't any other choices, she would do anything for Jon…
Peachrocks: I made Jonathan get a little bit insane at the end of the chapter because I thought he was becoming too serious. It's fun to write about him doing stupid things :D I'm glad you like Joanna in that chapter! I forgot to tell in my last review: lol perfect cow! Suzan is so funny sometimes!
Anonymous or Fan Fiction Enjoyer (let's speak in French): Alors tu est francophone! C'est trop cool! J'aurais jamais cru avoir officiellement un lecteur francophone. J'ai pas été très originale avec les noms, j'aurais cru que d'utiliser les mêmes noms pour les pseudos que pour les parents de Joanna pourrait être drôle. Je voulais aussi voir si quelqu'un le remarquerait. T'en fais pas, je vais jamais laisser un(e) fanfic inachevé, c'est complètement contre mes principes…
Fantasy Chick3435 : You're right, Joanna isn't in a good moment to have kids…I didn't wanted her to have some…well…not for now…I'm happy to see you loved the mud war scene!
Esteban T. Rodriguez: I'm glad you like this story! Did you really cried at the end of 10 things…? You're the 2nd person that is telling me this, I never realized how sad could be the last chapter (probably because I knew what was going to happen after) You deserve reviews, I think your story has potential. I was just a little bit sad of Jonathan's death but it's alright…
animelover08831: You don't need to threaten me with a mauler, I will finish this fic even if it can sometimes take a while before a next update. The only reason that could let my story unfinished is that my 10 fingers were amputated
It would be soooo nice that everyone that reviewed for last chapter review for this chapter… Review please ?