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Misty*Amethyst here! ^_~
Sorry this took so long! Someone hacked into my e-mail account and changed my password so I had to create a new account and set stuff up again...and it took such a long time...that I kinda forgot about this story! NO! HOW COULD I! Bad me! Bad me! ( And also I HAVE TOO MUCH HOMEWORK! But don't worry the Christmas holidays are coming and then I'll work on this story non-stop!
Oh well! I'm very sorry for the long wait, my reviewers! And I'll try to make it up to all of you by making this chapter as good as possible. So I hope you enjoy it!
And thanks for all the thoughts about Sophie! And I have decided to make her bitchy! But...there's going to be a slight twist in the end... I won't tell you because that will give it away. ^_^
First some replies:
Black Goddess of Elements: Oh sorry I made you sad! I didn't mean to! Honestly! But apart from that thanks for saying I should write more...It really makes me feel like I should write more! lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Sharky: Sorry it took so long to update the other chapter AND this chapter! So sorry! And thanks for the advice about Sophie...I recon I'll use it! ^_~ Thanks for reviewing!
Jess: I'm hoping it will have a good ending too! lol (^_^') I hope it's as good as you say it is...and sorry for the long wait! Thanks for reviewing.
Avelyn Lauren: lol I'm sorry I got him confused...but guess what? Syaoron's going to get MORE confused in this chapter. lol That's why it's called Double Confused. Sorry about that...but I didn't know what to write this chapter about! Very sorry! Thanks for reviewing!
Tenshi-Sakura-Li: Thanks for the ideas about Sophie! I think I'll use them! Thanks! And also I read fanfictions so I know what omae o korosu means! PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! I'm really sorry it took so long! I really am! lol Thanks for reviewing and sorry about the wait.
Santapaws914: Sorry it took so long to update! Happy Birthday for September the 14th! And yes it was a late birthday present... yes I knew it was your birthday... (^_^') lol! I'm glad you loved the chapter, and thanks for your thoughts about Sophie...I recon it's a good idea and I will use it! Sorry it took so long, and thanks for reviewing!
Mycherrywolf: Hello! I'm glad you like the story! Yeah I know Sophie already sound bitchy but I wasn't sure if all the reviewers liked her like that...but now I know! ^_^ Thanks for the thoughts about Sophie. I'm sure to use it! I'm glad you don't mind about the whole Syaoron or Syaoran thing lol. You got me a bit confused as well lol! But don't worry I understood it. I like your ideas about updating my chapters...My aim's to get over 100 reviews for this story, but I don't think I will. (^_^') Because I've wrote 6 chapters and only have 32 reviews. Is that telling me something? lol Thanks for telling me to take my time...it makes me more relaxed when I'm writing the story. Not tensed. Sorry it took so long, and thanks for reviewing. P.S Twelve year olds RULE! lol
I=stupid: I really think you should change your name. You're not stupid! Sophie Evil! I get it! lol And I love advice and no I won't hate you! Of coarse not! And I was kind of thinking Eriol should of said it instead of Tomoyo. But the thing was that Sakura was the one talking to Tomoyo behind the bush so yeah. But thanks for the advice. It was good! And you're supposed to hate Sophie! lol And thanks for the thoughts about Sophie. (That might be the twist in the end of the story! ^_^ SHHHHHH! lol) Thanks for reviewing and sorry it took so long!
AkaneKitten: Sorry; I finished the story! lol Thanks for waiting! lol I was kind of thinking you were KagomeKitty... lol of course I was thinking that... (^_^') And yes Sophie is going to be a bitchy girl! And I'm glad you decided not to kill yourself lol! Thanks for reviewing and sorry it took so long!
Cherry: Well I think I'm sticking to the Sophie being a bitch and if someone is named Sophie and is reading this...well I'm really sorry! lol Sorry for taking so long and thanks for reviewing.
Sailor Ying-Fa Li: Thanks for reviewing. Thanks for your thoughts on Sophie...and I decided Bitchy Bitchy! lol! And thanx for saying this is one of the best stories you've read...I personally don't think so because I'm up to the 6 chapter and only got about 34 reviews! aw well...Sorry it took so long
Ok enough with the suspense! I'll get on with the story now!
Hope you enjoy it!
Tears of Heartbreak
Chapter 6: Double Confused
"What are you talking about Tomoyo?" Syaoron asked looking confused.
Tomoyo rolled her eyes, "Syaoron, think!"
"Hey I am really bad at riddles," Syaoron whined.
********~°Syaoron's POV°~********
I was really worried about Sakura. The same words kept replaying in my head, 'What's wrong with her?'
I thought about Tomoyo's little riddle. "Betrayed by friend, betrayed by love, she is shedding tears of heartbreak."
I thought in silence.
********~°Normal POV°~********
Sophie and Eriol were talking just behind Syaoron and Tomoyo.
"Oh I knew straight away when I saw Syaoron that we were meant for each other," Sophie said proudly.
"Oh, is that so," Eriol said smiling slightly.
"At first I was scared that he didn't like me," Sophie said babbling on then stopped. "Wait a minute, who wouldn't like me?"
Sophie giggled, "Well I knew Syaoron liked me, he couldn't stop looking at me."
"Mmm...hm," was all Eriol could manage to say.
********~°Eriol's POV°~********
'Sophie is really up herself!' I thought. What did Syaoron see in her? Well whatever it is; I hope he knows what he's doing. Sophie definitely doesn't suit Syaoron.
********~°Tomoyo's POV°~********
Syaoron is so thick! I stood there looking at Syaoron scratch his head and think in silence.
"I got it!" He said loudly.
"Um..." I said unsure.
"Sakura likes one of her friends, but he doesn't like her back!" Syaoron said seriously.
I fell down. (Anime style)
"Ah, yea...it's something like that," I said laughing.
Oh, can't he figure it out that it is HIM whom Sakura likes!
"Oh, I'm going to teach that guy a lesson! He shouldn't break Sakura's heart like that! Oh, his such a bastard!" Syaoron said clenching his fingers together.
"You just go do that!" I smiled. Inside I was giggling like hell.
"So what's his name?" Syaoron asked.
"You better ask Sakura that," I said.
********~°Normal POV°~********
Sophie and Eriol went over to Tomoyo and Syaoron.
"Syaoron honey, we are a couple now, so that means no flirting with other girls," Sophie said smiling at Syaoron then quickly shot a glare at Tomoyo.
"We were TALKING," Tomoyo said. "Is there anything wrong with that?"
"Oh were you really?" Sophie asked Syaoron.
"Yea, we were," Syaoron said.
"Oh," Sophie said, "Then that means no TALKING to girls as well!"
Sophie giggled madly and went off back to her classes as the bell rang for third period.
"What is her problem?" Tomoyo said angrily.
"Now, now Tomoyo, let's keep our temper down," Eriol said walking Tomoyo back into the school building.
Syaoron started to follow them until he caught eye of Sakura walking out of the girls toilets.
********~°Syaoron's POV°~********
I told Tomoyo and Eriol to go ahead without me. I ran to Sakura as fast as I could.
"SAKURA!" I yelled. She saw me and quickly turned around and tried to wipe her eyes.
I stood behind her looking down at her and smiled.
"Sakura, I've known you for so long, don't you think I would be able to tell that you've been crying," I said trying to look over her shoulder.
"I'm not crying!" Sakura said swirling around smiling.
I saw her red puffy eyes and red nose.
"Of course you're not, you just have a red nose for a Christmas decoration," I said lightly touching her nose, "And red puffy eyes from smiling too much," I said wiping a tear from her cheek.
********~°Sakura's POV°~********
I felt myself blush at least a million shades of red. He leaned down to look at me. I blushed even redder.
"Look, Tomoyo told me about your problem," Syaoron said seriously.
"What?!" I gasped.
"About how you like...this certain person but he doesn't like you back," he said sadly.
'TOMOYO TOLD HIM!'
I felt myself weaken, he knew, he knows my secret. I bowed my head down. I felt like I betrayed our friendship.
"No, Sakura it's ok don't cry," Syaoron said as he grasped me into a hug.
I held tightly onto his body as my tears flowed down.
He lightly brushed his hand across my hair.
When I stopped crying, we started walking back to class. It felt very awkward with him knowing I like him and he had a girlfriend.
"Um...Sakura," he said awkwardly.
I looked at him.
"I hope you don't mind me asking, but who is the guy you like?" Syaoron asked.
'WHAT!'
I fell down. (Anime Style)
"YOU DON'T KNOW?!" I practically yelled.
"Well am I supposed to know?" Syaoron asked confused.
Oh my god! Tomoyo didn't tell him!
"Oh...don't worry," I said smiling.
As we walked in, the teacher greeted us rather nicely.
"SAKURA, SYAORON YOU ARE 10 MINUTES LATE FOR CLASS!" The teacher pratically screamed at us.
I saw Sophie glaring at me so I slowly shifted away from Syaoron.
"Sorry, but Sakura didn't feel too well and..." Syaoron tried to explain.
"NO EXCUSES! DETENTION AFTER SCHOOL BOTH OF YOU!" The teacher said as she walked back to her desk.
Syaoron and I side glanced at each other then went to sit down.
As I sat down a note was flung at me. I opened it up as it read:
Listen here Sakura Kinomoto, Lay a finger on my Syaoron
and you will wish you'd never met me. He is mine, he loves me and not you so you better stop trying to seduce him you little bitch.
From Sophie and her gang that will personally tend to you if you ever go near Syaoron again.
"Well that was a pleasant note," I mumbled to myself.
I turned around and saw Sophie glaring at me and her gang sitting next to her clenching their fists.
I turned back around and started giggling. It was funny how Sophie had her little cute gang to back her up. It looked like they were guys clenching their fists like that. I started laughing imagining them pretending to be like boys. I started laughing loudly as I thought of what Sophie wrote, "From Sophie and her gang that will personally tend to you if you ever go near Syaoron again."
"Tend to my arse!" I yelled.
It was then I noticed that the whole class was looking at me like I was a maniac. I saw the teacher looking at me with her glasses at the tip of her nose.
"You weren't kidding when you said she was sick Syaoron," The teacher said slowly.
I blushed and ran out of the room as the bell went.
********~°Normal POV°~********
"Hey Sakura are you ok?" Tomoyo asked as she caught up with Sakura in the corridors.
"Yeah, why?" Sakura asked.
"I mean the way you were laughing when the teacher was talking about how Polymerization works. And also yelling about something like you had to tend to your arse."
"Oh," Sakura said blushing, "I was just thinking of things."
"Ok well I better go," Tomoyo said, "Remember, you got the detention with Syaoron."
"Oh yeah," Sakura said remembering.
********~°Sakura's POV°~********
I was slowly walking to room 24, where the detentions were held. As I was walking there I was thinking. Two whole hours with Syaoron...wow! I was about to open the door and silently wished,
'Oh I hope Sophie wasn't being serious!'
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OMG FINISHED!
I'm really really sorry for taking so long! And it's short as well...I'm sorry! But I'm running out of ideas.
As I said the holidays are coming up, so I can write my heart away!
So sorry again!
Well anyway read the next chapter to find out how the detention goes...*wink* *wink* :)
I promise I'll try to update it sooner.
Sorry again!
Misty*Amethyst signing off!
TTFN!
Misty*Amethyst here! ^_~
Sorry this took so long! Someone hacked into my e-mail account and changed my password so I had to create a new account and set stuff up again...and it took such a long time...that I kinda forgot about this story! NO! HOW COULD I! Bad me! Bad me! ( And also I HAVE TOO MUCH HOMEWORK! But don't worry the Christmas holidays are coming and then I'll work on this story non-stop!
Oh well! I'm very sorry for the long wait, my reviewers! And I'll try to make it up to all of you by making this chapter as good as possible. So I hope you enjoy it!
And thanks for all the thoughts about Sophie! And I have decided to make her bitchy! But...there's going to be a slight twist in the end... I won't tell you because that will give it away. ^_^
First some replies:
Black Goddess of Elements: Oh sorry I made you sad! I didn't mean to! Honestly! But apart from that thanks for saying I should write more...It really makes me feel like I should write more! lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Sharky: Sorry it took so long to update the other chapter AND this chapter! So sorry! And thanks for the advice about Sophie...I recon I'll use it! ^_~ Thanks for reviewing!
Jess: I'm hoping it will have a good ending too! lol (^_^') I hope it's as good as you say it is...and sorry for the long wait! Thanks for reviewing.
Avelyn Lauren: lol I'm sorry I got him confused...but guess what? Syaoron's going to get MORE confused in this chapter. lol That's why it's called Double Confused. Sorry about that...but I didn't know what to write this chapter about! Very sorry! Thanks for reviewing!
Tenshi-Sakura-Li: Thanks for the ideas about Sophie! I think I'll use them! Thanks! And also I read fanfictions so I know what omae o korosu means! PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! I'm really sorry it took so long! I really am! lol Thanks for reviewing and sorry about the wait.
Santapaws914: Sorry it took so long to update! Happy Birthday for September the 14th! And yes it was a late birthday present... yes I knew it was your birthday... (^_^') lol! I'm glad you loved the chapter, and thanks for your thoughts about Sophie...I recon it's a good idea and I will use it! Sorry it took so long, and thanks for reviewing!
Mycherrywolf: Hello! I'm glad you like the story! Yeah I know Sophie already sound bitchy but I wasn't sure if all the reviewers liked her like that...but now I know! ^_^ Thanks for the thoughts about Sophie. I'm sure to use it! I'm glad you don't mind about the whole Syaoron or Syaoran thing lol. You got me a bit confused as well lol! But don't worry I understood it. I like your ideas about updating my chapters...My aim's to get over 100 reviews for this story, but I don't think I will. (^_^') Because I've wrote 6 chapters and only have 32 reviews. Is that telling me something? lol Thanks for telling me to take my time...it makes me more relaxed when I'm writing the story. Not tensed. Sorry it took so long, and thanks for reviewing. P.S Twelve year olds RULE! lol
I=stupid: I really think you should change your name. You're not stupid! Sophie Evil! I get it! lol And I love advice and no I won't hate you! Of coarse not! And I was kind of thinking Eriol should of said it instead of Tomoyo. But the thing was that Sakura was the one talking to Tomoyo behind the bush so yeah. But thanks for the advice. It was good! And you're supposed to hate Sophie! lol And thanks for the thoughts about Sophie. (That might be the twist in the end of the story! ^_^ SHHHHHH! lol) Thanks for reviewing and sorry it took so long!
AkaneKitten: Sorry; I finished the story! lol Thanks for waiting! lol I was kind of thinking you were KagomeKitty... lol of course I was thinking that... (^_^') And yes Sophie is going to be a bitchy girl! And I'm glad you decided not to kill yourself lol! Thanks for reviewing and sorry it took so long!
Cherry: Well I think I'm sticking to the Sophie being a bitch and if someone is named Sophie and is reading this...well I'm really sorry! lol Sorry for taking so long and thanks for reviewing.
Sailor Ying-Fa Li: Thanks for reviewing. Thanks for your thoughts on Sophie...and I decided Bitchy Bitchy! lol! And thanx for saying this is one of the best stories you've read...I personally don't think so because I'm up to the 6 chapter and only got about 34 reviews! aw well...Sorry it took so long
Ok enough with the suspense! I'll get on with the story now!
Hope you enjoy it!
Tears of Heartbreak
Chapter 6: Double Confused
"What are you talking about Tomoyo?" Syaoron asked looking confused.
Tomoyo rolled her eyes, "Syaoron, think!"
"Hey I am really bad at riddles," Syaoron whined.
********~°Syaoron's POV°~********
I was really worried about Sakura. The same words kept replaying in my head, 'What's wrong with her?'
I thought about Tomoyo's little riddle. "Betrayed by friend, betrayed by love, she is shedding tears of heartbreak."
I thought in silence.
********~°Normal POV°~********
Sophie and Eriol were talking just behind Syaoron and Tomoyo.
"Oh I knew straight away when I saw Syaoron that we were meant for each other," Sophie said proudly.
"Oh, is that so," Eriol said smiling slightly.
"At first I was scared that he didn't like me," Sophie said babbling on then stopped. "Wait a minute, who wouldn't like me?"
Sophie giggled, "Well I knew Syaoron liked me, he couldn't stop looking at me."
"Mmm...hm," was all Eriol could manage to say.
********~°Eriol's POV°~********
'Sophie is really up herself!' I thought. What did Syaoron see in her? Well whatever it is; I hope he knows what he's doing. Sophie definitely doesn't suit Syaoron.
********~°Tomoyo's POV°~********
Syaoron is so thick! I stood there looking at Syaoron scratch his head and think in silence.
"I got it!" He said loudly.
"Um..." I said unsure.
"Sakura likes one of her friends, but he doesn't like her back!" Syaoron said seriously.
I fell down. (Anime style)
"Ah, yea...it's something like that," I said laughing.
Oh, can't he figure it out that it is HIM whom Sakura likes!
"Oh, I'm going to teach that guy a lesson! He shouldn't break Sakura's heart like that! Oh, his such a bastard!" Syaoron said clenching his fingers together.
"You just go do that!" I smiled. Inside I was giggling like hell.
"So what's his name?" Syaoron asked.
"You better ask Sakura that," I said.
********~°Normal POV°~********
Sophie and Eriol went over to Tomoyo and Syaoron.
"Syaoron honey, we are a couple now, so that means no flirting with other girls," Sophie said smiling at Syaoron then quickly shot a glare at Tomoyo.
"We were TALKING," Tomoyo said. "Is there anything wrong with that?"
"Oh were you really?" Sophie asked Syaoron.
"Yea, we were," Syaoron said.
"Oh," Sophie said, "Then that means no TALKING to girls as well!"
Sophie giggled madly and went off back to her classes as the bell rang for third period.
"What is her problem?" Tomoyo said angrily.
"Now, now Tomoyo, let's keep our temper down," Eriol said walking Tomoyo back into the school building.
Syaoron started to follow them until he caught eye of Sakura walking out of the girls toilets.
********~°Syaoron's POV°~********
I told Tomoyo and Eriol to go ahead without me. I ran to Sakura as fast as I could.
"SAKURA!" I yelled. She saw me and quickly turned around and tried to wipe her eyes.
I stood behind her looking down at her and smiled.
"Sakura, I've known you for so long, don't you think I would be able to tell that you've been crying," I said trying to look over her shoulder.
"I'm not crying!" Sakura said swirling around smiling.
I saw her red puffy eyes and red nose.
"Of course you're not, you just have a red nose for a Christmas decoration," I said lightly touching her nose, "And red puffy eyes from smiling too much," I said wiping a tear from her cheek.
********~°Sakura's POV°~********
I felt myself blush at least a million shades of red. He leaned down to look at me. I blushed even redder.
"Look, Tomoyo told me about your problem," Syaoron said seriously.
"What?!" I gasped.
"About how you like...this certain person but he doesn't like you back," he said sadly.
'TOMOYO TOLD HIM!'
I felt myself weaken, he knew, he knows my secret. I bowed my head down. I felt like I betrayed our friendship.
"No, Sakura it's ok don't cry," Syaoron said as he grasped me into a hug.
I held tightly onto his body as my tears flowed down.
He lightly brushed his hand across my hair.
When I stopped crying, we started walking back to class. It felt very awkward with him knowing I like him and he had a girlfriend.
"Um...Sakura," he said awkwardly.
I looked at him.
"I hope you don't mind me asking, but who is the guy you like?" Syaoron asked.
'WHAT!'
I fell down. (Anime Style)
"YOU DON'T KNOW?!" I practically yelled.
"Well am I supposed to know?" Syaoron asked confused.
Oh my god! Tomoyo didn't tell him!
"Oh...don't worry," I said smiling.
As we walked in, the teacher greeted us rather nicely.
"SAKURA, SYAORON YOU ARE 10 MINUTES LATE FOR CLASS!" The teacher pratically screamed at us.
I saw Sophie glaring at me so I slowly shifted away from Syaoron.
"Sorry, but Sakura didn't feel too well and..." Syaoron tried to explain.
"NO EXCUSES! DETENTION AFTER SCHOOL BOTH OF YOU!" The teacher said as she walked back to her desk.
Syaoron and I side glanced at each other then went to sit down.
As I sat down a note was flung at me. I opened it up as it read:
Listen here Sakura Kinomoto, Lay a finger on my Syaoron
and you will wish you'd never met me. He is mine, he loves me and not you so you better stop trying to seduce him you little bitch.
From Sophie and her gang that will personally tend to you if you ever go near Syaoron again.
"Well that was a pleasant note," I mumbled to myself.
I turned around and saw Sophie glaring at me and her gang sitting next to her clenching their fists.
I turned back around and started giggling. It was funny how Sophie had her little cute gang to back her up. It looked like they were guys clenching their fists like that. I started laughing imagining them pretending to be like boys. I started laughing loudly as I thought of what Sophie wrote, "From Sophie and her gang that will personally tend to you if you ever go near Syaoron again."
"Tend to my arse!" I yelled.
It was then I noticed that the whole class was looking at me like I was a maniac. I saw the teacher looking at me with her glasses at the tip of her nose.
"You weren't kidding when you said she was sick Syaoron," The teacher said slowly.
I blushed and ran out of the room as the bell went.
********~°Normal POV°~********
"Hey Sakura are you ok?" Tomoyo asked as she caught up with Sakura in the corridors.
"Yeah, why?" Sakura asked.
"I mean the way you were laughing when the teacher was talking about how Polymerization works. And also yelling about something like you had to tend to your arse."
"Oh," Sakura said blushing, "I was just thinking of things."
"Ok well I better go," Tomoyo said, "Remember, you got the detention with Syaoron."
"Oh yeah," Sakura said remembering.
********~°Sakura's POV°~********
I was slowly walking to room 24, where the detentions were held. As I was walking there I was thinking. Two whole hours with Syaoron...wow! I was about to open the door and silently wished,
'Oh I hope Sophie wasn't being serious!'
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OMG FINISHED!
I'm really really sorry for taking so long! And it's short as well...I'm sorry! But I'm running out of ideas.
As I said the holidays are coming up, so I can write my heart away!
So sorry again!
Well anyway read the next chapter to find out how the detention goes...*wink* *wink* :)
I promise I'll try to update it sooner.
Sorry again!
Misty*Amethyst signing off!
TTFN!