Beginning Note: I'm so glad that everyone is enjoying my fic. If you don't like it, don't be afraid to review me and say, "Yeah. You really suck at writing stories and you don't deserve to be writing. Stop before you hurt yourself." I really won't mind. You're entitled to your opinion and I respect that. So if you hate it, flame away. It won't affect how I write; it might adjust to please you. It's good to be able to tell people that they aren't doing well. Plus, it's a lot easier when you're not reviewing a friend's 'cause they won't beat you up! Have fun with this chappie! See ya!
Disclaimer: I do not, under any circumstances, own Teen Titans. Thank you and have a nice day!
Chapter 4- Raven: 1st entry
Dear Journal,
I have a splitting headache from meditating. I just couldn't concentrate. Especially when Beast Boy and Terra were being as loud as possible. I tried for a half hour inside because it was raining outside, but I decided to go outside anyway. I was outside for another hour and half and came in soaking wet. I also think Slade could be another reason for my headaches. I'm exhausted from battling Slade's robots. I don't want to unleash all of my powers because I'm afraid that I'll lose control like I did with Dr. Light. I've meditated harder than ever since then. Terra doesn't understand how much it takes to control your powers. I don't believe that she could harness complete control over her powers in such a short time. Not without help. She came back and showed us a few tricks. I'm not convinced. It took me years to get control over my powers. Terra's just too suspicious. And what I saw in my vision also worries me. I'm positive that I saw Slade and Terra was with him. I told Robin and he said that she might have accidentally came into contact with him and he hurt her. I'm not so sure. I'm still civil to her though. She has only won my trust partially, but, I have to say, it's a relief to have Terra on the team. We can't take any more hits. We're beyond physical strength to keep us going now. It takes all of our minds to fight. I can feel the fatigue that everyone else is feeling. I can feel it in waves as it rolls off their bodies. It's overwhelming on both the mind and the body. It's getting worse each time. Speaking of getting worse, that's exactly what my headache's doing so I'm going to sleep. Good night.
Forevermore,
Raven
Review Comments:
Shadow of the Light-I'm very happy that you like what I have written. You don't need to thank me for writing the story. blushes It's my pleasure to see people happy when they read. It's also my duty as an author to provide the best I can for my reader! I hope I will see you in the next chapter!
KelseyAlicia- I'm sorry that I didn't do Starfire this time. I'm saving her for last because she's my favorite character. As the saying goes, they save the best for last! I'm glad that you like that you can see all of the Titan's point of views! As for you question on why people can backstab their friends like that, it is a mystery. That's the downfall of the human race. We know the difference between right and wrong, but we fail to apply the knowledge when we need it. The human brain is such a complex thing and it will take many years to figure out why humans do the things they do. No one is born evil, that's for sure. Can't wait to hear from you again!
Tha fonix freeke- haha! Yes, Terra does have some wicked powers. I really can't say whose powers is my favorite though. I guess she and Beast Boy look cute together. I'm can do Rurouni Kenshin and other anime couples. Plus, I'm not making this into a couples fic. I had a hard enough time with that when I wrote my other story. Gad, was that a nightmare. Worth it though! I'm so glad that you're going to stick around with me! Yay! You might be the reviewer who reviews every chapter! I only had two people do that with my other story and that's only because they are my best friends and we review all of each other's stories! Haha! Well, I'll talk to you soon!
On-thin-ice- wow. I'm going to be as red as an apple from all the compliments! I'm so happy that you and all of my other reviewers really like my story. I'm trying really hard to have all the entries fit the characters, so when I do Starfire, I have to be careful because she speak so differently from the other Titans. And you got your wish! This one is Raven! I hope that you will continue to read this fic! See ya next chapter!
Ali raven- …interesting review style. Scripts are always fun! I was laughing when I was reading your review. I've done the split personality thing before. It's okay about not reviewing the first two chapters. I've done that before too. It's pointless because the chapter is over and done with. Beast Boy is funny! " See! I told you! The funny one goes first!" From the episode Fear Itself or something like that. I can't remember. giggles Heh. I like Yu Yu Hakusho too! Kurama is sooooo cute! Plus, I like his voice actor, John Bergmier. He does the voice of my favorite character in Fruits Basket, Shi-chan, as I call him, but known to everyone else as Sohma Shigure! YAY! I'm glad that you like the story! See you next chapter!
Clueless90- uh okay. I'll try to update as much as I can. My computer's been shutting down and freezing a lot so I'm trying my hardest. I really want to say more to you, but you only put one word into your review. Heh. Sorry! But, I'm guessing you like my story if you're telling me to update! See you in the future!
Cloud Strife Omega- happy, happy, happy! People like my fic!!!!! Thanks for telling me what the episode was. When I was reading your review, I was on the phone with my friend and started laughing when I saw the name, Larry the Titan. I thought I was hilarious and I had to tell her about it. She thought that it was funny too. Again, thanks for telling me the episode and I'm happy that you like my fic! See you next time! (I'm running out of corky things to say! Time to go to the best person for corky quotes… "MOM!!!!")
Audi kitia- well, I figured that since the fic is a little dark, way darker than my other one give or take a depressing chapter, I might as well add some humor. I think some of the things that Robin says are funny on the show. But that's just me. Don't worry. Be rest assured that I'm not making this a couples fic. I'm a little "coupled" out. I'm just putting the whole Beast Boy/Terra thing because I calls 'em as I sees 'em. He's infatuated with her so of course he's gonna be blabbing annoyingly about her in his journal. Yeah. I think my family reunions are pointless because we have one every year and every year I forget all the relatives' I never see names and they forget mine, so it's all good. This year I'm saved thought because my two best friends are coming! Yay! No little brat kid duty for once! Being a girl of 16 can really bite sometimes! Hmmm. That's interesting. Millicent. That's different. I'll be waiting for that script. I want it on my desk in full detail by Saturday morning! If not, you're fired! Just kidding. I really appreciate that you're doing that for me. But, don't strain yourself, please! I'd feel so badly if you were flipping out, trying to write out everything! Wow. Do I ramble or what!? See ya next chapter!