Thanks for the reviews. And as for the script type / non script type writing: think of the non script as thoughts of a character expressed in tiny tidbits of talk, motions, tone and expressions over an average CJ episode. That's kind of how it is in my head. Problem is, the rest of the episode is kind of blurred so I can't write them.

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"No. He has to come home on his own will. I don't want him to feel obliged to or something."

That was all she said whenever somebody offered to try and find her father. But he knew she missed him more than ever.

He remembered how he felt like when Maggie had been pregnant with Abby. He wished he could talk with his father about everything. Ask him how it felt to become a father. How he had dealt with all those strange emotions and the new situations. But Harry Macy was anywhere but with his son. He at least still had his mother back then. She told him stories about him as a baby. That helped a lot. And then he had Maggie, and Maggie had him. To talk about things. And they had Maggie's parents too.

But Jordan … Jordan had no one as far as he knew. No mother. Max gone. Even no boyfriend as it seemed. He had offered her to talk to him whenever she needed. And he knew she had other friends too. Nigel was certainly willing to talk. And Lily. He wasn't sure about Woody. They had seemed to get together before. But now? They weren't really talking as long as he knew.

Jordan should have someone to talk to. To ask questions and get answers. Someone she trusted. Maybe Max wasn't the best one for this job. But he was her father. Her family. She needed him. Not only now. Once the baby was born she would need someone to take care of him or her when she was at work. And with her working hours it wouldn't be easy to find someone. He was going to give her as much time as possible. But he couldn't keep her off odd hour calls and late shifts forever.

"Nigel? Can you try find Max? But keep it secret. Don't let Jordan know. And try to make him come home without forcing him."

"What? Like sending him pictures of Jordan and Boston to make him miss home?"

"I'm sure you'll think of something."

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It's short, I know. Next will be longer.