"it looks as if our new weapon has braught the expariment back even faster
than we predicted.." Erol stood at the entrance of the forrtress, ready to
take Jak up to claim the credit for the girls work.. but why was she
stopping?
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as she spoke Jak got her to stop moving.. "but why? you have been cursed as well.. I saw when you tried to retaliate.. why do you go on? what lets you fight them? I dont understand..." she looked to the ground a moment..
"I have friends who support me.. you probably came here alone.. having no one to look forward to.. no one who probably even knew you were here.. perhaps I could be a friend to you.." Jak saw Erol waiting expecantly for the girl to deliver him to the crazed commander..
"I dont even know your name.." she smiled as she stared at the ground.. almost debating what to do..
"its Jak.. what is yours?" her smile dissapeared, something fell down, a drop of water being eaten up by the dirt that lay benieth her.. a tear..
"I.. dont remember..." Erol had given up waiting and strode towards them.. "what do you think your doing?! you have a mission to accomplish kid now hand him over." Jak spat at him..
"wouldn't you love to deliver me Erol.." the nameless girl looked up, debating what to do.. she turned away from Erol and decided to step up on her hoverdisc, holding jak between her ams to the handle she used to control it..
"what the hell are you doing?! hand him over now!" she smiled, not even looking at him..
"no.. I want to learn.. learn about 'Jak.' he said he was a 'friend'.. I want to learn..." she tried out the words like they were a foreign tongue.. "I can kill you if you stop me Erol. you know I can."
"you will regret this kid.. the Baron will see to that!" he turned heel and ran back to the forrtress..
"thank you.." with the lack of his hands he gave her a slight kiss on the cheek as he exhaled sighingly, happy at the choice she had made..
"'Jak'... 'Friend'.. Jak is now my friend?" she drove quite well, not nearly as recklass as Jak often was on the road, knocking over krimzon gaurds and people all along the way..
"yes. I am your friend."
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"So the girl has betrayed me.. well it was only a matter of time. a few more dark eco treatments and she wont remember Jak at all. Then we will have our weapon back and our failed expariment." Praxis sat on a thronelike chair as Erol delivered the news of what happend..
"What now Baron? she was our prime defence against Jak.."
he waved a hand to silence him. "set an ambush. the girl is still weak from her last treatment. hit her in the right spot and she will come crumbling. then Jak will be laid out for us."
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"Er.. What are you doing?" the girl had started to take her shirt off.. Jak almost blushed, his former self shining for a moment..
"Dont worry, I have a tank top benieth this. I simply need to dress my wound.." she took off the shirt, revieling a number of bloodstained bandages.. she unwraveled them to show a horrible wound that made even Jak wince.. the flesh was festered and burned and one could even see a few of her vertibre..
"How did you get such a horrible wound?" Jak avoided looking at it, instead looking at the back of her head and being forced to see her disfigured ears..
"The Baron has devised a new way of eco treatment. Instead of tapping eco directly into the nervous system through electricity, the dark eco is burned directly into the skin in its liquid form. He has found it more effective, which was why I was able to subdue you so easily previously.."
"is that what awaited me if I hadn't been able to get you to take me away from Erol?" Jak shuddered at the thought.. her wound showed that the new eco treatment may well be even more painfull than the torture he had to endure for so long..
"I dont think so.. you were a failed expariment. I am their weapon now, I am what they wanted you to become before you escaped.. The baron probably just wants you off the streets. I dont know what hed do to you afterward.."
"and yet you were completely willing to hand me over to them without a thought as to why?" he almost grew angry at her but seeing her eyes as she turned around wouldn't allow him to..
"Im sorry.. I dont think about any concequences when I work.. when I caught you I was still in a state of dream. thats often how I feel when I use the dark eco in my body.." Jak felt a little envy.. it looked like with the extra pain that came from that injection the transformations were made that much easier..
"wait.. what happend to Daxter? you didnt - ?" he shuddered at the thought.. surely she hadn't killed Daxter after she knocked himsel out? she smiled and shook her head..
"no, I gave him to a spectator.. that pretty little girl who serves the bar.. she took him without question when I captured you.. she must not know you well.." Jak was filled with questions he knew she probably couldn't answer..
"Can we go see him? I want to talk to your spectator anyway.." What could Tess have been thinking? I was unconsious and she knew this girl had shady dealings.. why did she just let her take me? his questions would be answered when he got there..
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Nik: Another chapter done and nobodys reviewed.. oh well.. I wish someone would just tell me how it came out.. anyway, I like how this is coming out and it will unwravel later.. now I shall buisy myself with other JakII fics since I am now completely obsessed with him more than anything else.. even Baralai (which seems impossible considering..)
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as she spoke Jak got her to stop moving.. "but why? you have been cursed as well.. I saw when you tried to retaliate.. why do you go on? what lets you fight them? I dont understand..." she looked to the ground a moment..
"I have friends who support me.. you probably came here alone.. having no one to look forward to.. no one who probably even knew you were here.. perhaps I could be a friend to you.." Jak saw Erol waiting expecantly for the girl to deliver him to the crazed commander..
"I dont even know your name.." she smiled as she stared at the ground.. almost debating what to do..
"its Jak.. what is yours?" her smile dissapeared, something fell down, a drop of water being eaten up by the dirt that lay benieth her.. a tear..
"I.. dont remember..." Erol had given up waiting and strode towards them.. "what do you think your doing?! you have a mission to accomplish kid now hand him over." Jak spat at him..
"wouldn't you love to deliver me Erol.." the nameless girl looked up, debating what to do.. she turned away from Erol and decided to step up on her hoverdisc, holding jak between her ams to the handle she used to control it..
"what the hell are you doing?! hand him over now!" she smiled, not even looking at him..
"no.. I want to learn.. learn about 'Jak.' he said he was a 'friend'.. I want to learn..." she tried out the words like they were a foreign tongue.. "I can kill you if you stop me Erol. you know I can."
"you will regret this kid.. the Baron will see to that!" he turned heel and ran back to the forrtress..
"thank you.." with the lack of his hands he gave her a slight kiss on the cheek as he exhaled sighingly, happy at the choice she had made..
"'Jak'... 'Friend'.. Jak is now my friend?" she drove quite well, not nearly as recklass as Jak often was on the road, knocking over krimzon gaurds and people all along the way..
"yes. I am your friend."
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"So the girl has betrayed me.. well it was only a matter of time. a few more dark eco treatments and she wont remember Jak at all. Then we will have our weapon back and our failed expariment." Praxis sat on a thronelike chair as Erol delivered the news of what happend..
"What now Baron? she was our prime defence against Jak.."
he waved a hand to silence him. "set an ambush. the girl is still weak from her last treatment. hit her in the right spot and she will come crumbling. then Jak will be laid out for us."
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"Er.. What are you doing?" the girl had started to take her shirt off.. Jak almost blushed, his former self shining for a moment..
"Dont worry, I have a tank top benieth this. I simply need to dress my wound.." she took off the shirt, revieling a number of bloodstained bandages.. she unwraveled them to show a horrible wound that made even Jak wince.. the flesh was festered and burned and one could even see a few of her vertibre..
"How did you get such a horrible wound?" Jak avoided looking at it, instead looking at the back of her head and being forced to see her disfigured ears..
"The Baron has devised a new way of eco treatment. Instead of tapping eco directly into the nervous system through electricity, the dark eco is burned directly into the skin in its liquid form. He has found it more effective, which was why I was able to subdue you so easily previously.."
"is that what awaited me if I hadn't been able to get you to take me away from Erol?" Jak shuddered at the thought.. her wound showed that the new eco treatment may well be even more painfull than the torture he had to endure for so long..
"I dont think so.. you were a failed expariment. I am their weapon now, I am what they wanted you to become before you escaped.. The baron probably just wants you off the streets. I dont know what hed do to you afterward.."
"and yet you were completely willing to hand me over to them without a thought as to why?" he almost grew angry at her but seeing her eyes as she turned around wouldn't allow him to..
"Im sorry.. I dont think about any concequences when I work.. when I caught you I was still in a state of dream. thats often how I feel when I use the dark eco in my body.." Jak felt a little envy.. it looked like with the extra pain that came from that injection the transformations were made that much easier..
"wait.. what happend to Daxter? you didnt - ?" he shuddered at the thought.. surely she hadn't killed Daxter after she knocked himsel out? she smiled and shook her head..
"no, I gave him to a spectator.. that pretty little girl who serves the bar.. she took him without question when I captured you.. she must not know you well.." Jak was filled with questions he knew she probably couldn't answer..
"Can we go see him? I want to talk to your spectator anyway.." What could Tess have been thinking? I was unconsious and she knew this girl had shady dealings.. why did she just let her take me? his questions would be answered when he got there..
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Nik: Another chapter done and nobodys reviewed.. oh well.. I wish someone would just tell me how it came out.. anyway, I like how this is coming out and it will unwravel later.. now I shall buisy myself with other JakII fics since I am now completely obsessed with him more than anything else.. even Baralai (which seems impossible considering..)
