Nik: kay, just a little forwarning.. Ive been reading a TON of angst lately coupled with some flashbacks to the website betrayed.com (which I very much recommend if you can stomach it). so I really got into this fear facter between erol and Jak. I have changed the rating to R and you will see why when you read this. I am very proud and very ashamed at the same time but I would love some feedback soon after I put this up..

Jak whirled along hallways the inevitable few gaurds that got in his way got a firm, full-bodied taste of boot. but with the lack of his morph gun he wouldn't be albe to fight them off for too long and despite how he managed to kill the gaurds before they said his location, the others had figured out that there was an intruder in the fortress.. Jak soon found that even more gaurds kept getting in his way and he still wasn't even close to finding his morph gun.. but since the ammo the gaurds dropped had no use to him, he was able to find a few with eco in their possesion.. which would come in quite usefull as he felt a sharp pain in his shoulder after coming close to a small clearing.. he gripped his now burned shoulder and turned to see who had shot him.. Erol stood smirking, holding Jaks own morph gun in blaster mode..

"so wheres the girl? I hear you gave her a name. is she a pet to you now?" Erol backed up his menace with a horde of crimzon gaurds standing by like hunting dogs faced with a fox..(very brutal image if you know how cruel people train their hunting dogs to be. foxes have been ripped apart while still alive before in this disgusting sport.. back to the story though...)

"she has a name Erol, and individuality, no matter how hard you tried to beat it out of her." Erol aimed Jaks gun at him again, the sight set right at his left leg..

"she is a weapon. now where did you hide her? I might just kill you quickly if you tell me." the glint in Erols eyes said otherwise.. he was simply begging Jak to make a sharp move so he could get a chance to torture him again...

"You wont get to her anymore Erol. and you wont get to me either." he hung his right hand down and away from his festered shoulder as he tensed up, concentrating on all of his hatred, all of the pain that he had endured and forced her to endure just be existing.. his caged entity surfaced as he tapped into the stored dark eco in his body.. Erol took a step back as he witnessed it.. he knew how dangerous Jak was in his dark form and chose to sieze him quickly before he recovered from the transformation..

"move in! take him out!" the crimzon gaurd came in too late as sparks of purple electricity shot out and electrocuted his entire squad at the same time.. as the bodies gave way and pushed aside, Erol was faced with the wild, animalistic creatured that was dark Jak, and for a moment, just a very split second Erol was scared, terrified of the look in this inhuman creatures eye.. a glint he often had given to others but had never recieved himself.. it was a look of lust.. a lust for blood and sufferage beyond measure..a look of pure extacy at the very thought of destroying a persons very being from the inside out.. and it scared Erol, more than he had ever been in his life..

"Ever wonder what its really like? Im sure a sadistic mind such as yours has wandered to that forbidden fruit of a thought.. What its like being strapped down to that chair and forced to endure the feeling of a liquid worse than the most potent acid being pumped into you in electric form.. just barely at the limit to let you continue breathing?" Dark Jaks voice was deeper than Jaks normally was.. it was laced with the same menace that Erol had threatened Jak with moments before but far more concentrated.. Jak was enjoying the radience of fear that eminated off of Erol.. he stepped forward slowly, small sparks of electricity licking at the bodies of the dead gaurds who had rushed to their deaths for Erol.. for every step Jak took, Erol took two back.. he raised his gun again and was ashamed to see that his arm was shaking. He shot several times into Jak and he just laughed.. that cold unfeeling maniacle laughter Erol knew too well.. the shots absorbed into Jak without result thanks to the oricle's training in invincibility..

Jak suddenly shot forward in a move like his punches but instead grabbed Erols coller, slamming his back into the wall. he dropped the morph gun as he gasped for breath, the pressure between Jaks fist and the wall closing off his throught passage.. "Is there a masochist in you Erol?" Dark Jaks words fluttered in and out of focus in Erols ears as he began to black out from the lack of oxygen.. "Lets find out..." Just as Erol finally blacked out the transformation expired. Erol just barely registered Dark Jaks roar of frustration as he was contained again with Jaks painfull transformation back to normal.. as the alarms went off Jak took a last glance at Erol as he picked up his gun and started out.. he could find new clothes.. right now he just wanted to get out of there.. More than anything else in the world.

Nik: well theres my angst-loving self going rampant.. guess I have a bit of a sadistic dark side as well.

Dark Jak and Pat: like a sniffly mother Im so proud!

Nik: anyway Im sorry it isn't as long as usual but I always prefered quality to quantity and thats a lot of angst to be shoved into just one chappie. besides, as Ive said before, I never get angry. all of that negative energy has to go somewhere you know.

Dax: I dont care what anybody says.. Erol deserved it.