IndoJabijin: I......... I...... am shocked! I have so many reviews, only for three chapters. But I don't care, story writing isn't about reviews. It's about having fun.
Well like I promised, this chapter is all about Kaiba, and yes it's all about Kaiba. Well I really don't have anything to say, I've said everything in the past three chapters. And you know what, this chapter has to do with Vampires, and it's about time!! I thought I would never get into the vampire mode.
Ages: Joey Wheeler- 23, Seto Kaiba- Immortal (Starting next chapter I will not put the ages, you should know them by now.)
Warning: This fiction will have content. It's Rated "R" for a reason. (Now I am not putting this anymore, you should know the warning too!)
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters in this story, except the OC that Joey likes. That is the only character I own, the rest are not mine, I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh, and never plan too. What will I do with them.
Thank You: Druessila, Gobstoppers, KaibaLuver, FireVega, Marry, ALostBlackCat, HKL, Tamachan444, Kumori Sakusha Formerly Saelbu, BlackLadyCharon & Takune Lamorose for reviewing. You only reviewed the last chapter, but you guys have been with this story from the begginning. I would like to thank you (Once More). Here is the Fourth Chapter of My Immortal.
(This chapter is going to be short cause I have writer's block!! If you want the chpater to be long then you need to E-Mail me with an idea!!!)
My Immortal: Chapter Four "What the hell is wrong with me!!" yelled Kaiba, throwing the book into the wall. He did not know why he was having visions of Joey. He thought maybe some sleep would calm him down, so he laided on the bed, and started at the ceiling, until those fews mintues... when he started to close his eyes.----Kaiba's Dream----
Kaiba woke up in the middle of his bed. "Uh" he whispered as he stood up. He looked down and saw no bludge in his pants.
His visions of Joey must have gone away, sleep was what he really needed. Nothing seemed wrong, everything in his room was fine, but the weird thing was he heard nothing.
Most of the time in his house he was hear Mokuba yelling, or steps. But today........ nothing, something must be wrong.
He walked out of his room, and saw nothing but the original house but no one was to be seen. No one........ what is wrong.
Kaiba tried to call his brother, and his dog but nothing. He even tried to call Yugi but no one picked up the phone.
Kaiba walked outside and checked if anyone was doing anything, but no one, no ONE was outside...... Kaiba walked through the Neighborhood but saw no one....
UNTIL he saw a boy, he ran towards the boy, "Hello?" The boy turned around and it was Joey.
kaiba was shocked out of everyone in this world JOEY had to be in it. Joey sighed and in a moment he spoke, "Kaiba I love you."
When Kaiba heard those words he was shocked, he was about to punch him when his mouth opened, "I love you too Joey." he said, as he jumped onto Joey to kiss him..................
(CliffHanger)
IndoJabijin: I told you guys about this....... I think, well I have Writer's Block!! I will not update until I have ten more reviews.
10 Reviews= Next Chapter
But I need you in your reviews to give me ideas for the next chapter, if not I will never finish this story cuase of writer's block. .
Reader's: Read the note upbove..
Thank you,
-IndoJabijin-
