Author's Note:
Thanks:
Angels-Sweet-Chikadey: lol everyone keeps expecting this to have a sad ending.Don't worry, it will be a very happy ending, so no worries ok!? And I'm so happy that my story is getting such great responses! I love it! Lol. Please keep reading and thanks for the reiveiw!!
Roccovende: lol...thanks! I really do enjoy writing my stories. I enjoy reading them as well. I've just been so busy during my spring break I have like no time to write. I hope you keep reading and leaving reviews! Lol thanks.
Simi: I set the story up so it seems as if something horrible is going to happen...and in a way something bad is going to happen....but it will work out.....you shall see....no tears for daine and numair!
Jewlz555: The flamer had been blocked! Lol.....
Numair's Angel: lol....it shall get better and better and better until you can no longer stand it! Lol...just kidding..
Fuzzfurry/PadFootSnuffles: im not sure HOW big the animals parts are going to be.....i think that I'm just having them their to add to the story or to add to the confusion....lol...not really....they feel that they are connected to daine because of her magic...and they are....they feel that it is there duty to help her for once instead of the other way around. The animals know that Daine is put in such pain when one of the People die. They feel it is necessary for them to help Daine keep her life in order so she doesn't have to experience more pain than she already has to. The Fawn is just a symbol of all of the animals in one. Instead of having many different animals interact in Daine's life it is just one animal that is doing the work for all of the baby animals.
I don't know if that made any sense.....but I hope it helps..
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I think it would be a great idea to read the comment I left for FuzzFurry because it explains a bit about the Fawn and the other baby animals.
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Chapter 5
After Onua and Alanna left, all Daine could possibly due was pace. Back and forth. Back and forth.
She was so afraid of what was going to happen with Numair.
The pressure was mounting because all of the guests would be arriving for the banquet tomorrow. Even though the banquet was still 4 days off, the guests arrived early for the festivities that were planned to take place before the banquet. Sort of a way to get everyone in the "partying" type of mood.
It was getting late and Numair was no where in sight. Daine ended up falling asleep on the love seat in the sitting room. Waiting for him to come home.
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"I can't go home. I simply can't." Were the only words that were coming out of Numair's mouth after Onua was finished telling Numair about what Daine had said.
"Don't be such a dolt Numair. She loves you and you love her! Why wouldn't you go home?" Onua asked.
"You wouldn't understand" he snapped back.
Onua felt as if she was slapped in the face. She grabbed his arm forcefully and turned him around so that he faced her. In an angry, hurt, deep voice she began to speak to him.
"Now you listen to me, and listen good. We have been friends for a great number of years. I have been through thick and thin with you and have wanted to hug you and kill you at the same moment. But I will not watch you destroy this young girl's heart! I have never seen someone look at you the way she does. I have never seen another person look at her the way you do. I don't see what the problem is! All you have to do is prove to her how much you love her, and that shouldn't be that difficult. So why avoid her?"
Numair looked at his friend with open eye, heart and mind. With his magic he allowed her to look in his heart.
At that moment Onua realized why he was holding back.
He hated himself for allowing her to doubt his love for her. He couldn't bear the fact that he himself was the cause of her pain and heart ache. He wouldn't allow himself to be the reason why she cried at night.
"What are you going to do?" she asked softly.
"Right now I think I'm just going to sleep in the Palace Library. I need to give her some space. Some time to think."
"Are you sure that is such a good idea?"
"Honestly, right now I don't know what would be the best thing to do." ~~~~
When Daine woke up the next day and found herself still in the sitting room, she knew Numair hadn't come home that night. He would have carried her up to their bed or at least put a cover over her.
She wasn't going to let him avoid her this time. She was going to find him. Since it was still early she knew that no matter where he was he would still be sleeping. Which would give her some time to look for him, not that it would be. If he didn't come home for one reason or another he was always in the library.
As Daine headed out the door of their house she crossed paths with the Fawn again. Only this time his distraction didn't work. She kept on walking and didn't pay attention to any of the animals that caught her eye. At one point a small crow landed on her shoulder, but she just waved him off and headed straight for the library.
When she came up to the second floor she found Numair all the way in the back with the older books on history. Even though he was sleeping he didn't look very peaceful. His eyes were clamped shut and she could see rings under his eyes. He also really needed to shave.
When she sat in the chair across the table from Numair, he started to move and wakeup.
When he looked up and found Daine sitting there he became very stiff.
"Hi" she said sheepishly.
"Hi.." he paused for a moment "What are you doing here?" he asked.
"Looking for you."
"Onua told me.." He started to talk but was cut off.
"Now before you open you mouth and say something, I have to tell you this. I love you with all that I am. You didn't do anything wrong. I am just so scared that you're going to leave me and I know that you wouldn't. I just need to feel closer to you right now." Daine said.
Numair looked at her straight in the eyes and she knew that something was wrong. She had never been so afraid in her life.
"I don't think that being closer is the right idea Daine." Numair said, breaking his own heart as he said it out loud.
"I-I d-don-t understand. Don't you love me anoymore?" Daine asked as she started to cry.
Numair started to cry also. "My whole life, I have never loved anyone as much as you." He said hugging her with all of his might. "I just think that it would best if...if we took some time apart."
Before Numair could stop her, Daine ran out of the library with Numair trailing after her.
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oooh now look what I did. Did I do that?
Lol
Tried to do a bit of a cliff hanger.
Now I know that so far this is sad.....but keep reading....it wont be sad for much longer.
It is hilarious....this is not how I planned my story. The plot has gotten away from me. The base of it has remained the same like the emotions and underlying plot. But everything besides that has completely changed! I mean I didn't even mean for there to be animals or the Fawn. I was going to have this woman like kiss numair and daine would see her doing it and freak out....but now that I look back ont hat plot it kind of sucks. But I love how my story is going
Oh just to let you guys know......I want challenges!!!!!!!!!!! I love them! My buffy story Lost Memory was supposed to be a one chapter challenge but I loved the plot so much that I made like 12 or something chapters and I loved it lol.
So gimme challenged peeze!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviews make me so so so happy!
More to come soon!
Thanks:
Angels-Sweet-Chikadey: lol everyone keeps expecting this to have a sad ending.Don't worry, it will be a very happy ending, so no worries ok!? And I'm so happy that my story is getting such great responses! I love it! Lol. Please keep reading and thanks for the reiveiw!!
Roccovende: lol...thanks! I really do enjoy writing my stories. I enjoy reading them as well. I've just been so busy during my spring break I have like no time to write. I hope you keep reading and leaving reviews! Lol thanks.
Simi: I set the story up so it seems as if something horrible is going to happen...and in a way something bad is going to happen....but it will work out.....you shall see....no tears for daine and numair!
Jewlz555: The flamer had been blocked! Lol.....
Numair's Angel: lol....it shall get better and better and better until you can no longer stand it! Lol...just kidding..
Fuzzfurry/PadFootSnuffles: im not sure HOW big the animals parts are going to be.....i think that I'm just having them their to add to the story or to add to the confusion....lol...not really....they feel that they are connected to daine because of her magic...and they are....they feel that it is there duty to help her for once instead of the other way around. The animals know that Daine is put in such pain when one of the People die. They feel it is necessary for them to help Daine keep her life in order so she doesn't have to experience more pain than she already has to. The Fawn is just a symbol of all of the animals in one. Instead of having many different animals interact in Daine's life it is just one animal that is doing the work for all of the baby animals.
I don't know if that made any sense.....but I hope it helps..
~~~~
I think it would be a great idea to read the comment I left for FuzzFurry because it explains a bit about the Fawn and the other baby animals.
~~~~~
Chapter 5
After Onua and Alanna left, all Daine could possibly due was pace. Back and forth. Back and forth.
She was so afraid of what was going to happen with Numair.
The pressure was mounting because all of the guests would be arriving for the banquet tomorrow. Even though the banquet was still 4 days off, the guests arrived early for the festivities that were planned to take place before the banquet. Sort of a way to get everyone in the "partying" type of mood.
It was getting late and Numair was no where in sight. Daine ended up falling asleep on the love seat in the sitting room. Waiting for him to come home.
~~~~~
"I can't go home. I simply can't." Were the only words that were coming out of Numair's mouth after Onua was finished telling Numair about what Daine had said.
"Don't be such a dolt Numair. She loves you and you love her! Why wouldn't you go home?" Onua asked.
"You wouldn't understand" he snapped back.
Onua felt as if she was slapped in the face. She grabbed his arm forcefully and turned him around so that he faced her. In an angry, hurt, deep voice she began to speak to him.
"Now you listen to me, and listen good. We have been friends for a great number of years. I have been through thick and thin with you and have wanted to hug you and kill you at the same moment. But I will not watch you destroy this young girl's heart! I have never seen someone look at you the way she does. I have never seen another person look at her the way you do. I don't see what the problem is! All you have to do is prove to her how much you love her, and that shouldn't be that difficult. So why avoid her?"
Numair looked at his friend with open eye, heart and mind. With his magic he allowed her to look in his heart.
At that moment Onua realized why he was holding back.
He hated himself for allowing her to doubt his love for her. He couldn't bear the fact that he himself was the cause of her pain and heart ache. He wouldn't allow himself to be the reason why she cried at night.
"What are you going to do?" she asked softly.
"Right now I think I'm just going to sleep in the Palace Library. I need to give her some space. Some time to think."
"Are you sure that is such a good idea?"
"Honestly, right now I don't know what would be the best thing to do." ~~~~
When Daine woke up the next day and found herself still in the sitting room, she knew Numair hadn't come home that night. He would have carried her up to their bed or at least put a cover over her.
She wasn't going to let him avoid her this time. She was going to find him. Since it was still early she knew that no matter where he was he would still be sleeping. Which would give her some time to look for him, not that it would be. If he didn't come home for one reason or another he was always in the library.
As Daine headed out the door of their house she crossed paths with the Fawn again. Only this time his distraction didn't work. She kept on walking and didn't pay attention to any of the animals that caught her eye. At one point a small crow landed on her shoulder, but she just waved him off and headed straight for the library.
When she came up to the second floor she found Numair all the way in the back with the older books on history. Even though he was sleeping he didn't look very peaceful. His eyes were clamped shut and she could see rings under his eyes. He also really needed to shave.
When she sat in the chair across the table from Numair, he started to move and wakeup.
When he looked up and found Daine sitting there he became very stiff.
"Hi" she said sheepishly.
"Hi.." he paused for a moment "What are you doing here?" he asked.
"Looking for you."
"Onua told me.." He started to talk but was cut off.
"Now before you open you mouth and say something, I have to tell you this. I love you with all that I am. You didn't do anything wrong. I am just so scared that you're going to leave me and I know that you wouldn't. I just need to feel closer to you right now." Daine said.
Numair looked at her straight in the eyes and she knew that something was wrong. She had never been so afraid in her life.
"I don't think that being closer is the right idea Daine." Numair said, breaking his own heart as he said it out loud.
"I-I d-don-t understand. Don't you love me anoymore?" Daine asked as she started to cry.
Numair started to cry also. "My whole life, I have never loved anyone as much as you." He said hugging her with all of his might. "I just think that it would best if...if we took some time apart."
Before Numair could stop her, Daine ran out of the library with Numair trailing after her.
~~~~~
oooh now look what I did. Did I do that?
Lol
Tried to do a bit of a cliff hanger.
Now I know that so far this is sad.....but keep reading....it wont be sad for much longer.
It is hilarious....this is not how I planned my story. The plot has gotten away from me. The base of it has remained the same like the emotions and underlying plot. But everything besides that has completely changed! I mean I didn't even mean for there to be animals or the Fawn. I was going to have this woman like kiss numair and daine would see her doing it and freak out....but now that I look back ont hat plot it kind of sucks. But I love how my story is going
Oh just to let you guys know......I want challenges!!!!!!!!!!! I love them! My buffy story Lost Memory was supposed to be a one chapter challenge but I loved the plot so much that I made like 12 or something chapters and I loved it lol.
So gimme challenged peeze!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviews make me so so so happy!
More to come soon!
