IndoJabijin: Well, I guess this story is turning out to be good. But I have some bad news........ HieiAndKuramaLover is not able to review. Now that is bad news. This is all I have to say, oh and there is some surprises in this chapter, just hope you are not shocked by them.....
Remember, I am not going to put the AGES or WARNINGS, or the DISCLAIMER anymore, you all should know what they are by now, and I am getting tired of writing over, and over again, for every chapter.
Thank You: Everyone who reviewed this story, I can't stop thanking you for your comments, please stay turned after the chapter, and I will reply for some of the thing you said in your reviews for the previous chapter. HKL, what happened? You did not review for the last chapter, please E-Mail me, telling me what's wrong.
( A/N: Oh I forgot to tell you guys, THIS chapter has LEMON! So if you don't want to read LEMON for this story then don't read this chapter!!! )
( Ok, one little more note, since FF is more serious about Ratings I cannot take the risk of getting my account removed. So if you want the lemon, tell
me in your review and I will send it to you in an E-Mail. )
( Rewind everything I said in the last paragraph for the last
chapter............ )
My Immortal: Chapter Five
( Continued At Kaiba's Dream )
( Non-Italics = FlashBacks, and :: in non-italics = song )
Kaiba looked at Joey, staring at him, and Joey... not even noticing that Kaiba was even there! There was something wrong...
Kaiba got tired of waiting, and tapped Joey on the shoulder, Joey stood up and yelled, "Get the fuck away from me!!"
All Kaiba did was stare at Joey, and he noticed a face a anger on Joey's face, like he would never be happy again.
All Kaiba did was stare, and to his surprise, Kaiba seemed to care that Joey was angry... but what was this feeling? Could it.... be love?
'NO' Kaiba thought, 'I am not to love a man, even worse.. that man being.. dare I think it.. Joey. No I..... I can't!!'
Soon enough, the expression on Joey's face disappeared, now it was more of a happy mood, "Oh Hi Kaiba! What are you doing here?" Joey asked.
"Like you fucking don't know! You just finished cursing me out! NOW you asked me how am I? How am I, let me tell you! I'm GREAT!!"
"Ok god, no need to be testy." said Joey not knowing what was going on.
In anger, Kaiba soon saw a red flash, and in a moment he saw a mirrior image of himself... with another person. Kaiba not knowing who that other person was... just stood there and watched...
::People ask if i'm in love with you Cause I'm sitting here with your picture and smilin' to myself ( I smile )
I'm kinda lost in my own thoughts of you, my heart speaks before my mind thinks through, and I blush as I say yes::
( A/N: The flashbacks are Kaiba's POV! )
I walk with him, loving him, and yes I do love him. But the question is, does he love me? That I do not know, why not ask him yourself.
::What a feeling of vulnerability comin' over me
And I'm feelin weak and I can't speak ( Speak )
I can't think
Never thought I'd be given in so willingly to a human being
With abilities to set me free ( Free ), let be me
Makes me wanna say::
I really don't know the answer to that question all I know is that I have a secret, and that secret may even cost him... his life.
::Your lips, your eyes, your smile, your kiss
I must admit it's apart of me
You please me, complete me, filling me
Like a melody
Your soul, your flow, your youth, your truth is simply proof
We were meant to be But the best quality that hookin' me, is that you're lovin' me 4 me:: (END
OF SONG)
I walked towards the boy, and slowly I kiss him, his lips brushing against mine. I heard a gentle moan escape those lips, and at the chance I dart in my tounge.
In a flash, I saw a bed, everything around us was quiet, and dark- nothing mattered but me and him. I push him towards the bed, then I began to kiss his forehead, and begin a trail of kisses for his forehead to his neck.
I feel a rush of power, and I bite his neck enough to make a tiny moan escape his lips. Then I realise that there was blood, and I slowy licked it.
It was like nothing I ever felt before, a pure pleasure in his blood, and without warning, I feel a great pain in my stomach.
"AHH!" I don't know what is happening, I just get off the bed and fall to the floor, not looking into my lover's face. I look at my nails, and I see them turning into a sharp figure.
Neck thing I know, I am a pale white color, and I have fangs. Without thinking, my brain was telling me to kill,kill. I HAVE to resist.
But it was too much, I darted at my lover, and I bit him. I hear a yell- but I didn't care. As I was tasting his blood, I realised he was dead, and only them I realised that my lover was.......-
"NO!" Kaiba screamed at the thought of him killing Joey! Plus was that mirrior reflection the future? All Kaiba knew that he was not G-
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"AH!" Kaiba screamed, panting and sweat dripping all over his face. He just woke up from the most horrible dream!
It was the worst, nothing really seemed to matter but that dream, and the fact was Kaiba was going to have more of them.
Kaiba slowly stood up from the bed and headed towards the living. In there, he picked up the phone, and dialed Tèa's cell number. "Hello," Kaiba said into the phone, sounding really stupid.
"Tèa do you know where Joey is?" asked Kaiba, "Club Flesh you say? Well thanks." All Kaiba wanted to do is talk to Joey about something special.
Question Of The Week: (Decided to do this from you guys being bored)
Who do you think has more money? Britney Spears or "Usher" Raymond? The answer is on the next chapter.
IndoJabijin: Well, I have not updated for a LONG time, and now I have updated this. All I have are review reponses for the last chapter, and they are all in bold, well here they are:
Review Reponses:
Druesilla- Don't worry, i'm sure I will get over my writer's block. But I will need your help, thank you for all you support! Hope you enjoyed this chapter.
ALostBlackCat- Yeah, another chapter, I am sure you will be an idea for the other chapters, I am sure of it.
Tyri Dragonite- Well, all I have to say is here is chapter 5.
BloodMistress- Thank you for putting me on your AA list, I wish everyone did that, then I won't have to E-Mail them.
EternalLove91- Well i'm sorry for not getting to the plot, I can't make this story HARD 'R' because of the risk I am getting to getr thrown off this Site. I will promise to make this story short, and to the point....... I think!
Faith-2000- Don't worry, I am going to continue this story.
Bakura's Lover Brittany- I might use your idea, thank you for helping get through this writer's block!
KSFS- I can't keep on writing your name it's soooo long. Anyways, I am going to use your idea, but it might have so surprises.....
SAira- Yes I know, EVIL, that is what writer's block is!
Joey Baby- Yes it was Kaiba's dream........
BlackLadyCharon- Kaiba is going nuts...... I might use that..... just kidding.
Well, nothing else to say, I still have writer's block, but I will get over it. Remember if you want to read lemon, please E-Mail or tell me in your review,
-IndoJabijin-
