IndoJabijin: Well, another chapter of this story called 'My Immortal'. I have realised my mistakes as an author, and am sorry if this story is confusing somehow.

So... no disclaimer, thank yous, or warnings, just the chapter. This chapter may be written differently than the others... thank you guys for sticking by me from the begginning. I am truely thankful. Well nothing to say at the least...... The begginning of this chapter is Joey's POV.

Please congrat. Druesilla for becoming my Beta Reader. I trust that there might not be any mistakes in this chapter. ((Chapter ProoveRead by Beta: Druesilla))


My Immortal: Chapter Six

:::::Confusion, it's something we all feel. Yes, even I, Joey Wheeler, the nothing boy, as known as 'Yugi's Best Friend.' Yes, it is my POV (Point Of View), if you did not know. Don't worry, this won't last long, I am just thinking this, as I walked towards my crus-:::::

"Hi," said a voice, "hello Joey, my name is Max - hello Joey? Are you even listening," said Max looking at Joey, which to his surprise, Joey was just staring at him.

"Hi," said Joey, drool coming out of his mouth, "I'm Joey."

"Yeah, I know that." said Max, raising an eyebrow, "I'm Max."

Joey snapped out of it and greeted Max, "Oh sorry, hi Max," he said, drool still coming down his mouth. "it's a pleasure to meet you."

"The pleasure is all mine," said Max, "you never talked to me before what's

the occasion?" asked Max, staring at Joey in the eye.

Joey opened his mouth, "I-", but he was cut off as Max hit the dance floor,

"Come on Joey, dance with me."

"Ok..." said Joey, a nervous grin appearing on his face. They hit the dance

floor, dancing to the song called 'All nite (Don't Stop)', and danced to this rythem:

This is sick

"Attention It's Time To Dance... "

Work it like you're working a pole

Shake it 'til you're shaking the floor

Pop it like you're poppin' a cork

Don't Stop, Don't Stop

Jerk it like you're making it choke

Break it like you're breakin' a code

Drop it till you're taking it lower

Drop it, drop it...

This is serious

I'm delirious

So oblivious

I could dance all night

With you

As long as its funky

This rhythm just makes me high

I'm like a junkie

I could dance all night

Work it like you're working a pole

Shake it 'til you're shaking the floor

Pop it like you're poppin' a cork

Don't Stop, Don't Stop

Jerk it like you're making it choke

Break it like you're breakin' a code

Drop it till you're taking it lower

So intoxicated

I'm so stimulated

Feel so X-rated

I could dance all night

As long as it's funky

This rhythm just makes me high

I'm like a junkie

I could dance all night

Work it like you're working a pole

Shake it 'til you're shaking the floor

Pop it like you're poppin' a cork

Don't Stop, Don't Stop

Jerk it like you're making it choke

Break it like you're breakin' a code

Drop it till you're taking it lower

Everybody on the floor (Let's go)

Let's get hardcore (Get low)

Make my sweat pour (Oh no)

Don't stop (Gimme some more)

Ooh my body's yours (spank that)

Spank that back door (like that)

Drive me like a Porsche' (yea)

I could dance all night

Can we take this party higher?

Now just put your hands to the sky and

Clap, clap, clap, clap

I could dance all night

Work it like you're working a pole

Shake it 'til you're shaking the floor

Pop it like you're poppin' a cork

Don't Stop, Don't Stop

Jerk it like you're making it choke

Break it like you're breakin' a code

Drop it till you're taking it lower

Work it like you're working a pole

Shake it 'til you're shaking the floor

Pop it like you're poppin' a cork

Don't Stop, Don't Stop

Jerk it like you're making it choke

Break it like you're breakin' a code

Drop it till you're taking it lower

Work it like you're working a pole

Shake it 'til you're shaking the floor

Pop it like you're poppin' a cork

Don't Stop, Don't Stop

Jerk it like you're making it choke

Break it like you're breakin' a code

Drop it till you're taking it lower

"Damn that was hot," said Joey, panting from all that dancing, "what I wanted to tell you was...."

"Joey," interrupted Max, "I know you like me, don't worry about it, I like you too." said Max, planting a kiss on Joey's cheek.

Joey blushed, and soon he felt darkness upon him.....

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Apples.

Eat, he thinks handing him an apple. Poison, luck, chance? Joey thinks not.

Standing up, Joey balanced the weight between his legs, remembering the last time he could stand up.

He looked around, and sighed. The fresh air, the bright sun, his perfect life. Walking towards Kaiba, Joey handed him the apple, "I think not," Joey said, grabbing a bucket and filling it with water, "I would rather die then take food from the enemy... I am not that hungry."

"Fine then," sighed Kaiba, taking a bite out of the apple, "have it your way, your death will come anyways, once my team comes and rescues-"

"Your team," said Joey, dropping the pail of water, "they left you, and you still call them you team? You are as stupid as you look."

"I think not," Kaiba said, trying to stand up, "Careful you idiot! You still have not recovered." said Joey, holding Kaiba.

"If you call me your enemy, why take care of me? Why not just throw me in your lake? Leave me to die? Why?"

"I have no reason to answer you. I will not let a fellow man die - even if he is on the other side." said Joey, grabbing the apple. "I will not let you die..... after all, you know the information I seek."

"Yes that may be true.... but that does not mean I will give it to you!" yelled Kaiba, clenched fist and all. "You can do want you please, but you won't get the information!"

Joey raised a fist, but put it back down, "Very well then, I hope you die!", and Joey walked off back into the forest.

"FINE, leave me then! I will fend off monsters and creatures by myself!!"

Joey hid behind a tree, and counted, "One, two,-" and he was cut off by a yell ("Wait!"), and went to go back to Kaiba.

Kaiba, which to Joey's surprise had a sad face, a face of loneliness and sadness, "I am sorry... I will give you what you want."

"I have no need to know now, you need some rest." said Joey, and placed a warm cloth on Kaiba's forehead - Kaiba went to sleep mintues later.

Joey sat back down, and looked at Kaiba, how weak, he thought, let him die, or should I help? Those were the questions that ran inside Joey's mind. To kill, or not to kill?

In that second, Joey noticed a blade in Kaiba's discarded garments. Joey stood up, and looked at the blade. He grasped it, and weighed it at the tip of his hands. Joey held the blade, remembering the last time he had one.

A little voice inside was saying, Kill... Kill. He had considered it, but that was far too dangerous - then the voice spoke again, Kill Him. His death will come anyways. Go on leave your mark, make him bleed.

Joey held the blade and placed it on Kaiba's neck, trying to force himself to look at him, and trying to kill him. Joey looked at Kaiba, and how peaceful he looked when he sleeps.

Kaiba slept on.

Do it!, said the little voice in Joey's head, but then Joey did not consider it. He cared too much, too much to even like, though having company was really nice.

Joey placed the blade back down and looked at the apples, carefully he picked up the balde and cut the apples into tiny pieces.

Slowly, Joey put one in his mouth, realising the sweet taste of apples. He looked over at Kaiba, who was still sound asleep, snoring slightly.

Joey went aside Kaiba and rested his head on a piece of clothing, soon afterwards, he fell alseep.......

((Hours Later: In The Morning))

"Kaiba! Wake up!" said Joey, shaking Kaiba.

"I'm awake! What's the great smell?" asked Kaiba, sniffing the air; which to his surprise, Joey was cooking. Joey stood up, and headed towards the food.

"I thought you said - Oh forget it, I'm cooking fish. It's either that or chicken eggs? What will you have?" said Joey, cracking an egg in half.

Kaiba looked around and saw nothing but a bright and shiney morning; where the sun was out, and animals were playing.

Kaiba finally decided to what he would have, "I'll have the eggs. I'm not that fond of fish." he said, taking another smell of the air.

"Don't worry, I'm not fond of fish either. I hate their smell, and their bones really take a liking to blood. I mean they hurt!" said Joey, laughing at what he said.

Kaiba just chuckled; he was not used to the fact that someone was taking care of him. "It's ok Jeoy, I just want to say thank you for everything."

Joey just looked at Kaiba, and kept cooking. Sighing, joey finally turned around with a plate full of food, "It's such a beautiful day. Pitty there is a war going on."

Kaiba sighed, "That reminds me, I have to go and get out of here before anyone finds out."

"Do you have too?" said Joey, taking a bite out of bread, "I'm mean at least stay til Nightfall. You can talk and stuff."

Kaiba nodded his head, "I agree, but at nightfall I'm leaving. And after that, we are enemies once more. No one will know about this, ok with you?"

"Yes.. let's go and finish our breakfest."

((Later On: NightFall))

Kaiba packed his bags, and stood up, then he noticed that very important part of him was gone, "Where's my blade!"

Joey came up to him and showed him a piece of cloth, which inside was a blade; Joey had cleaned it up.

"Here you go, I think you might need this." said Joey, handing it to him.

Kaiba took the blade, and looked at Joey, "Thanks...", then at that Kaiba moved forward and placed a kiss on Joey's cheek.

Seconds later he was gone.......

Joey placed his hand at where Kaiba had kissed him. Had this been real, who knows? Then out of no where Kaiba appeared again... but this time it was different he was saying this:

'Joey...... are you alright? Joey!'

'Are you there joey?'

'Oh god... is he dead?'

'Wake up joey!'

'Wake up!!'

That voice ran in his head, and it would not stop - 'Wake Up! Wake Up!'

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

"AH!!" Joey woke up panting, at to his surprise he did not know where he was. What was running through his head was this:

--Kaiba packed his bags, and stood up, then he noticed that very important part of him was gone, "Where's my blade!"

Joey came up to him and showed him a piece of cloth, which inside was a blade; Joey had cleaned it up.

"Here you go, I think you might need this." said Joey, handing it to him.

Kaiba took the blade, and looked at Joey, "Thanks...", then it that Kaiba moved forward and placed a kiss on Joey's cheek.

Seconds later he was gone.......

Joey placed his hand at where Kaiba had kissed him. Had this been real, who knows? Then out of no where Kaiba appeared again... but this time it was different he was saying this:

'Joey...... are you alright? Joey!' 'Are you there joey?' 'Oh god... is he dead?' 'Wake up joey!' 'Wake up!!'

That voice ran in his head, and it would not stop - 'Wake Up! Wake Up!'--


And for a second time this:

--In that second, Joey noticed a blade in Kaiba's discarded garments. Joey stood up, and looked at the blade. He grasped it, and weight was at the tip of his hands. Joey held the blade, remembering the last time he had one.

A little voice inside was saying, Kill... Kill. He had considered it, but that was far too dangerous - then the voice spoke again, Kill Him. His death will come anyways. Go on leave your mark, make him bleed.

Joey held the blade and placed it on Kaiba's neck, trying to force himself to look at him, and trying to kill him. Joey looked at Kaiba, and how peaceful he looked when he sleeps.

Kaiba slept on.

Do it!, said the little voice in Joey's head, but then Joey did not consider it. He cared too much, too much to even like, though having company was really nice.--

What the hell was wrong with him? "I see you're awake." said Max, looking down at the floor.

"Oh Max, what happened?" said Joey, looking at Max with a serious face.

"You fainted, and when you were sleeping you were screaming: 'Don't leave me! Don't leave! I love you! Kaiba don't leave!"

Joey, shocked at what he heard, he looked down, Max was telling the truth in his dream..... he loved Kaiba.

"So you mind telling me what happened?" said Max, looking worried.

((Later On: Mintues Later))

Joey had explained eveything to Max in the exact details. About the blade, apple, and even the kiss. Max asked how to explain the kiss if you he were writing a story, and Joey said:

Kaiba took the blade, and looked at him, "Thanks...", then it that Kaiba moved forward and placed a kiss on his cheek.

Seconds later he was gone.......

I placed his hand at where Kaiba had kissed him. Had this been real, who knows?


Those words ran inside Max's head, but in the end he said, "I forgive you, you need some rest. I'll come bye tommorow."

As Max said that, Joey went back to sleep, and this time the dream was much better than the last......

-Max just walked out of Joey's house, nothig was going on today, so he decided to head back to Club Flesh-


IndoJabijin: Certainly you can tell I have gotten over my writer's block - FOR NOW. This was a really fun chapter to write and I hope you guys enjoy it. Here are the Review responses for last chapter:

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