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Read This Note:

This chapter is far different than the others. Joey spent his night in the hospital, and Kaiba's out party looking for him. Currently in this chapter, it is night time, and it's really close to midnight! In parts of this chapter..... there are only dreams - which occur to Kaiba while he is out. So the italics are dreams just to let you know. It's like Kaiba's own 'HellHole' if I say so myself. So this chapter is self Titled: Hell Hole.

((Chapter Corrected By Beta: Druesilla))


My Immortal: Chapter Seven

-----Kaiba's Hell Hole - Part I-----

(Kaiba's HellHole chapters have Three Parts to it, those chapters come every 7 chapters, Part II will come in Chapter 14, and Part III will come in Chapter 21 (Which to sadly say, may be the last chapter) However; the HELLHOLE projects are the shortest chapters, but in the end will be the longest. According to my plans, Part I will be at least 1- 2 pages long, Part II will be a strange 6-8 pages long, Part III will/might be the longest chapter in the story, with a shocking ending to it, that chapter will be 15-25 pages long - if according to plan, but if expected, I might add another 3-5 more pages to it, and might add a sequel to the story.)

"Mommy!"

Kaiba turned around, looking for that person that screamed. Nothing, just shadows. It seems that something is going on.

Kaiba looked at this little girl that appeared, "Do you know where my mommy is?", she asked looking at Kaiba. Kaiba looked at her, "No little girl, why are you lost?"

The girl looked at Kaiba, "Yes sir, I don't know where my mommy is. Can you help me?"

Kaiba just stared, "Sure...."

All of a sudden, a women appeared and said, "The DarkNess will come soon.... it will come!"

Then is a raspy voice the woman continued talking:

"Soon, very soon, there will be a pure blood, and it kill the one you adore........ nothing more. After those last few tense moments it will kill you; its murders have just begun, there will be more to come, and one comes tonight! Beware, even YOUR borther is in danger... all because of it!

According to the text; eight more murders are to be done, though the towns people will not know who did it! You have to be careful, not only will you die, but your loves one will too. As soon as you figure it out, you will try to run, but end up hurting yourself.

When you think it's over, a light will come shining your way, and that shine will die out, as soon as it comes near!!!

BEWARE, for you are A -"

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"AHHH!" yelled Kaiba, panting. He looked where he was, and in front of him was a shining light that said, "Club Flesh."


IndoJabijin: I have all of you to thank, no review responses today, and if you don't figure out what the lady said, good! Cause that was a HELL of a major spoiler there! Due to Hurricane Charley (Which did hit here in Florida, but I was not in the area it attacked, thank god), I might not go on vacation as planned for saturday of next week. But the good news are: my sister's baby is doing well, and I am able to UPDATE!

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