IndoJabijin: Sorry for the late update!! I've have had so many things going on in my life. To begin with, my sister's baby, my gambling website, and my new computer!! I am very glad that you liked chapter 7! Please, hopefully I have not lost my writing talent. Let me know what you think!!

Author's Note: Sorry, I forgot where I left off in this story, help me if I forgot something!!!


My Immortal: Chapter Eight

Hearing the pounding noise of music from the outside, Kaiba entered Club Flesh. Surprisingly, it wasn't that bad. Kaiba looked around, and found it very similiar to his Mansion, without the dancing strippers and polls. And h also enjoyed the song, "Mona Lisa", by Britney Spears.

:: Now Ladies you have to say goodbyyyyeee ::

Kaiba, who was still listening to the song, went up to the counter, and asked the Manager, "Have you seen a man, about 5 7", and has blonde hair?" The manger, who looked very angry, quicky replied, "Oh, that idiot kid, yeah, he fainted here about three hours ago, and he's in the hospital."

Kaiba, looked completly shocked; he ran out of the club, and headed for the hospital.


A Dream :: Joeys'

A dazzling petal fell. Though looking as if the war would end... Joey, stood there, looking at hat beatufil petal that fell, and was now floating down the river, gleaming a beautiful shine. "Hmm, I wonder how Kaiba's doing?" he asked himself; refering to the last time he had seen him, which was about two months ago. The war, which had not gotten any better, was still going on, and Joey wondered if anything had happened to Kaiba, and if he hurt. Joey, who was still staring at the petal, noticed that it was dancing in the moving water, blissfully turning, as if answering Joeys prayer.

Joey had never seen a petal act that way, so he got to his ffet, and reached for it. As he picked it up, he felt a pain run this his hand. He dropped the petal, and noticed that on his hand were the words, "It has happened..."


Joey woke up panting, was that just a dream her had, or was that something real. Then the phone rang in the hospital room, it was Mai, and what she said, would change his life forever:

"Jeoy," she said crying, "Serenity, shes been found... dead."


IndoJabijin: Sorry for making this so short, I've just been working. Hopefully I'll update in about a week, and maybe the chapter will be longer than ever.