IndoJabijin: As I write this chapter... I think, "it's been a long time hasn't it?" The answer.. yes, its been such a long time since I have gotten to sit down, go on the computer, and start writing a chapter. It seems life has taken such a large turn right now, but as always, I turn back and try to finish whatever wasn't completed. That's where this story comes in, I want to finish it, I want to see reader's reactions, I want to see how Joey and Kaiba end up.

Though it has been more than 9 months that I have stopped writing, I slowly realise that I want to write more, even though I have not written in such a long time. It's time to get back into my fiction. It's time to finally update my chapters weekly. I just think it's time for a change. I have been recently getting back into adding details, thinking plots, and even planning to write another story, not that I have any ideas yet. And so, I thought it was a nice change to finally update this, thinking I was killing everyone by making you wait so long, for such little chapters. And in doing so, I am making such to have my chapters long, and well detailed...

And, I was also trying to update before the 12th of this month... cause this story turns one year in that day. It seemed only yesterday I started writing it and thinking its plot. Anyways, I think if you are reading this, i've written too much, so in the words of all authors' "here is my immortal... chapter nine."


My Immortal: Chapter Nine

A/N: I'm so glad to be back... anyways, like always, this chapter may be alittle confusing... but it's alot to deal with in the plot of the story. Thanks if you review.

Kaiba panted; he opened the car door, as sweat slowly dripped down his face. His heart pounding, he reached out for his cell phone. Trembling, he slowly dialed a number, "(589) 458 3065." Kaiba, scared, forgot to press call, and in an instant, he started to run. Kaiba panted, as he started running faster and faster. He knew where he was headed, but yet didn't know where he was headed to. He ran for about five mintues, and it wasn't soon afterwards, that darkness fell upon him... --- Kaiba... Kaiba strained to open his eyes; it was too bright. He slowly stood up, trying to shift the balance between his legs, all to the left, and then to the right.

He noticed that he was in a familiar surrounding, like he had been there before. There was a meadow, and a lake that was shimmering to the sunlight. He took in a deep breath, the air was fresh and crisp, and he could smell something cooking in the far distance. He took at step, a sharp pain running through his foot. "OW" he said, looking down at what caused him such pain. It was a rock, but next to it was a piece of paper, or more like a scroll. He opened it, and slowly read it:

"VERTERME VILLAGE -- We welcome you to the annual dragon festival..."

He couldn't read the rest, it seemed the day before it had rained, and it wiped off the ink on the scroll.

Kaiba, thinking of where he was. slowly walked to the lake. When he was there, he looked at his own reflection, noticing that it was him, but not him. He had different clothes, and had a scar on his left cheek. Then only could he see why; next to him, was a worn out piece or scroll, but the letters were in a gold color, and it could still be read, like the first time it was printed. The scroll, only had two things on it: a picture of Kaiba, and under it, was only one word : "Wanted.." "I see you've found out..." said a voice from behind Kaiba. Kaiba stood up, and turned around, fist up in the air, only then, noticing that there was no one there.

"Down here..." he heard the voice said; he looked down. It was a little old lady, she was no taller than 4''4 and had a squeaky voice that sounded more like a 10 year olds. Kaiba looked down, "I've found out what... that i'm 'wanted'... they only want me for my money." he said, crumbling up the scroll. The old lady looked up at Kaiba, and she only nodded, "My dear Kaiba, no one wants your money, since you have no money." Kaiba looked stunned, How does this woman know my name? he asked himself.

"My dear sir... haven't you figured it out by now?" the old woman asked Kaiba. Kaiba stared, wondering what she was talking about, "What?"

"Kaiba... you're a murderer"


IndoJabijin: I keep on promising long chapters but never do, i'm not going to update for sometime next week, and hopefully i'll get back on track, and next time, i'll hopefully have a long chapter (not a promise). Anyways, i'm still suffering writers block, but all this week i'll be coming up with ideas and stuff. Anyways, review, and I hoped you enjoyed.