Chapter 18

Author's note: HOW RUDE!!!! Bad Rap, why haven't you reviewed before as you sound like you have read my story!!!! And I don't like reviews that are so unpersonal-put a name or SOMETHING. Sheesh. And Sparky wasn't the life and soul of this story so piss off!!!! Anyway, why couldn't you guys just SHUT UP cos you're ruining the 'surprise' ending. It's finishing very soon boohoo I can't wait thank god cos all i do is get moaned at!!!!

Spotty was rolling as fast as could away from Pam's nest and to the Visitor's centre. It was getting lighter, as it had actually been dark, apparently, but there was an eerie silence.

"Where is everyone????" he thought.

He especially found it strange that he could usually hear Sparky from anywhere, as his voice was unusally high-pitched for a male raptor.

Out of the blue, and yes I did use a thesaurus to get that phrase as I'm sick of using suddenly, the skateboard smacked into a large lump. Spotty went flying off and landing on this lump. He scrabbled up and found it was

SPARKY!!!!

"Oh my god!!!! Sparky!!!! Are you, are you DEAD????" Spotty couldn't believe it...his brother...it oculdn't be true!!!!

"SPARKY!!!! COME ON SPARKY WAKE UP WAKE UP!!!! DO IT FOR ALAN!!!!"

And with that, Sparky's body trembled, and his eyelids, oh god I have to do this-THIS IS FOR YOU CATRIONA-'folded up'. Hehehehe. No one will get that but me and Cat.

"You ARE alive!!!! Don't scare me Sparky. Though you're wounded badly."

"Owww..." Sparky said. "I ache all over. Where's SPDotty and Timmy???? And Roger????"

"I dunno Spark. You better use my skatebaord-we'll go to Visitor's Centre together."

And they rolled off into the sunset.

Author's Note: There are two more chapters. Review dammit, and no I didn't bring him back for you guys-I never actually said he was dead in the first place. SpDotty admitted there was no way of telling whether he had a pulse or not. God, you blow things way outta proportion. I expect apologies form the lot of you.