HEY! Thank you all soooo much for reviewing, if you hadn't I wouldn't of updated. I know I spelt Luka wrong, but I managed to change it. One of my reviews said that I should either write it as a story or use some dialogue. I choose to use the dialogue idea because at the moment I am writing my English coursework and I know that the dialogue would be more enjoyable for me to do. So I have included the dialogue as said (in bold) , but there still aren't great long descriptions. Though there will be in part four. If you review! Thank you! Xx

Part three

Neela lies in her bed, she rolls over and smacks off her alarm. Abby is eating breakfast and her phone rings, she looks at the screen, it's Jake, she lets it ring. Luka and Sam are on the train traveling to work together. Sam rests her head on his shoulder. Sam: are you a morning person? Luka: Im an all day person, I don't really have a preference. Sam rolls her eyes. Susan in the ER is hurrying about and Frank slams down the phone complaining. Frank: Doctors think that they know it all. Susan: I heard that. Susan walks away. Ray walks in and places his final chart in the box. Ray: that's it, im off, if erm … If Neela comes in early again, could you tell her to ring me… it's something about the flat. Frank: I am not your assistant. Ray: No you're just an Ass. Ray walks away leaving Frank scowling. A girl is carried in by a teenage boy who cries out for help. Carter and Pratt rush over. Carter: What happened? Boy: I dunno, Rachel and I were in the park when she started to complain about stomach cramps. She took a pill and then … took some more. Carter: Overdose, ok, clear trauma one, wait…. He looks down at the girl what did you say her name was? Boy: Rachel Carter: as in Mark Greene's daughter.

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Neela and Abby walk in at the same time and are greeted by Frank. Frank: Great, more doctors. Abby: You're in a good mood. Frank scowls and walks away. The girls walk towards their lockers. Abby: Hey, I have a question, how come you always come an hour early for your shift. Neela: no reason, it's just easier to get out of the house when … when Rays' not there. Abby: But it's only been for the past few days. Did you fight with him or something. Neela remains quiet, and Abby takes that as a yes. She asks her what happened. Neela: he kissed me. Abby: He what? I thought you hated him. Neela: I did, well it's just living with him, he's actually been human and I like that human. Abby: So what, now your just avoiding him? Neela: That's rich coming from you Abby: What do you mean? Neela: Your avoiding Jake.

IN the trauma room Carter, Pratt, Jane and Susan are operating on Rachel. Carter: Check her BP. Pratt: she needs a Gastric Lavage. Carter: someone call Corday. Susan: John, she's in England, what can she do? Carter: She's the only family she has. Pratt: She needs a GASTRIC LAVAGE. Carter: she's stopped breathing. Susan: She needs an intubation. Jane: what should I do first?

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Jake: Abby! Abby continues to walk on, when he shouts her again. She sighs and turns around. Jake: Dr. Lockhart. Abby: What do you want Jake? Jake: Dinner, with you, please? Abby: How many times … She grabs a chart from the desk and goes to see to a patient, but he follows her. Jake: Why not? Abby: I don't have time for this, I have patients that need treating. Jake: If I tell you im suffering from a broken heart, will you treat me? Abby shuts the door in his face in response to that.

Neela is seeing to a patient who is heavily pregnant. The woman, Chelsea, has been having intense stomach pains, thinking she was in labor she came to the hospital. Neela: It looks as though it was a false alarm but I'll get a midwife to come and see you Mrs. … Barnett … you don't happen to know a Doctor Barnett do you? The woman laughs and smiles slightly. Chelsea: Know him? Honey im married to him.

Back in the trauma they are pumping Rachel's stomach. Jane: Dr. Carter, we've reached Dr. Corday, she's on line one. Carter jumps to the phone leaving Pratt and Susan to tend to Rachel. Carter: Elizabeth, hey … yeah she's stable, their pumping her stomach, she should be ok, I just thought you should know … yea, I can e-mail her files to you. Sure … hows Ella? Good. Well I best go, I'll e-mail you soon. Bye. Pratt: What did she say? Carter: She wants to be kept informed and she'll ring us to see how she's doing later. Susan: Listen guys, I know you were under stress back there, but you need to listen to each other. Carter and Pratt look at each other and continue with what they were doing.

Neela: Your married to Dr. Barnett? Chelsea: Yeah, why do you know him? Neela: slightly … would you like me to ring him for you? Chelsea: Could you? See I can't get home otherwise. Neela agrees still in shock and she exits the patients' room. She picks up the phone and you hear Ray answer on the other end of the phone. Neela: Ray? It's Neela, you should come down to the hospital, your pregnant wife needs a lift home. With that she slams the phone down, she walks away and you can see the tears in her eyes.

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Carter is still in the trauma room with Pratt. Carter: Im sorry about back there, I … I knew her dad, we all did, it was just … Pratt: It's ok man, we all make mistakes, she's ok now though. Have you talked to Kem recently? Carter: Yup, she's doing well in Africa, im thinking of visiting her, but … there's … Pratt: Wendell.

Ray walks in looking angry. He finds Neela. Ray: What the hell was that phone call about? Neela: Cut the crap ray. She leads him into Chelsea's room and stands there. Ray looks at the woman and his face breaks into a smile. Ray: Chelsea? Chelsea: Ray! Oh my god. They hug and Ray asks what she's doing here and if the baby's ok. Chelsea: oh the baby's fine, it was a false alarm, but what are you doing here, I thought she was phoning my husband. Neela realizes what's happened. Neela: you mean this isn't your husband? Ray: No, she's my cousin. Chelsea's husband took her name instead. He's a Doctor, a Doctor Barnett, like me. He stares at Neela who excuses herself.

Abby walks into the locker room and she goes to her locker. There is a card stuck to it and attached to it is a red rose. The card is of a restaurant and it reads: Meet me here tonight at eight, give me a chance Jake xx.

Luka grabs a coffee and goes to sit with Sam. Sam: Where you happy as a child? Luka: Sam what is with you asking me all these strange questions? Sam: I've just realized how much I don't know about you, now answer me. Luka: there were times when I was sad, but yeah, my childhood was good. Sam: good.

Neela walks out of the hospital and onto the road, she hears her name and see's Ray running to her. Ray: Hey, I've been trying to talk to you for ages now. Why have you been leaving the house so early? Neela: I've needed to clear my head. Ray: you've been avoiding me. Neela: No it's just that I … Ray: Why did you think that the baby was mine … why did you think that I'd kiss you if I was married and expecting a baby with someone else, am I that bad? Why did you think that? Neela: Honestly Ray, I don't know what to think … She walks off leaving Ray standing there alone on the street.

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Susan walks in to find Frank dealing with an annoying patient. Susan: that's it, ive decided, Frank your getting a pay rise. Frank: Not that im complaining but why? Susan: because I've realized that I take you for granted. She kisses him on the cheek, grabs a chart and sees to a patient.

Carter is sitting with Rachel, who is starting to wake up. Rachel: hey, what happened, where am I? Carter: it's ok Rachel, do you remember you had a drug overdose, well we've had your stomach pumped, your in Chicago County hospital im Dr. John carter and I... Rachel: I know who you are; you were friends with my dad. Carter: You remember me? He sits down next to her. Rachel: Sure I do, hows your girlfriend … Amie? Carter: no, that was Abby, but where not together anymore. Rachel: So who are you with now? Carter pauses, clearly thinking of Wendell and Kem. Carter: I don't know.

Jake stands in a tux outside the restaurant, a car pulls up and Abby gets out of it, wearing a red dress to match her rose. Jake: You came Abby: I wasn't going to Jake: Are you glad you did? Abby: Im not sure. You clean up pretty well. Jake: You look amazing. Ready to go in? Abby: Only one-way to find out.

End of Part three

Part four sneak:

Abby and Jake's date repercussions, Ray and Neela's relationship takes a twist. Sam is faced with temptations and Kerry puts her life in the hands of her ER.

Thank you for reading and please review, compliments and criticisms welcome! I will update with part four on Wednesday. I am sorry part three was quite smaller but ive been busy with coursework, part four is half written, so it will be longer. Thank you xx