REVIEWS: aznsk83rgrl -I'm glad you like! Thanks for the kind words. Sean - I'm glad I've kept you interest. In response to your questions there are 28 chapters. Putting up one chapter a day with 8 chapters to go the last chapter will be uploaded on Saturday, March 12th. The second fic is currently about a third complete but I've lately been writing close to a chapter per day. Also my spring break is next week so I should get even more done. Although I could start posting it as early as the13th I'm going to take about a week off. This will allow me to watch the DVD on the 15th and take into account any revelations from Jack-Jack attack and other specal features. It will also let me edit the whole story really well so it's ultimately a good quality story. Thanks again for all the reviews. I hope you all enjoy this action packed chapter.
XX. A NEW SUPER IN TOWN
The Icredibile came to an abrupt halt downtown as Wedsnesday faded into night. Mr. Incredible, Elastigirl, and Frozone all poured out of the car and looked around to see what they were up against. They saw three people unleashing havoc on the city and they were definitely super villains as Mirage had informed them on the way there. The worst type of enemy that a super hated to face was other supers that had chosen to use their powers for evil. Unfortunately this was becoming a problem as the younger supers who had been despised for their powers all their life now sought revenge with their new found talents. This seemed to be the case here; three kids ages 19, 21, and 25 with no evil plan, just seeking vengeance against their former persecutors.
Mirage had informed the trio of the type of supers they were going up against. The oldest was a boy named Kenai. It sounded familiar to Bob but he couldn't place it. Kenai went by the name Positron because he could polarize any object and use the electric forces to attract or repel enemies. The next was Jade, a girl who called herself Mirror because adversaries saw the opposite image of what she was doing. The youngest one was another girl who could create large forces on an object just by touching it and the longer she touched it the stronger that force became. Her name was Sahara but was called Touchforce. The three were clad in solid colored tights that bore the first letters of their super villain names on the chest in gold and a matching mask. Positron wore red with a golden P; Mirror wore white with a golden M; and Touchforce wore blue with a golden T. They had even dyed their hair to match their suits – red, white, and blue – with a few golden streaks in each.
The three heroes split up as they had decided to do in the car. Frozone laid down a sheet of ice and skated for positron who had polarized the street below him and his feet allowing him to levitate nearly ten feet while he forced a lamp post to bend and crumple the cars below. As he approached the villain Frozone angled his ice and flew up in the air to hit him but Positron had already polarized both himself and Frozone causing them both to bounce back to the ground. Frozone got up slightly dazed from the impact and decided to try a different approach.
Elastigirl dropped down and saw Mirror breaking the window on the left half of a jewelry store. "Oh no you don't," she screamed as she took a flying leap and landed a kick, but instead she passed right through her and hit the ground. 'What on earth,' Elastigirl thought. She looked up and saw Mirror running down the street but the window of the store caught her attention. 'The right window is busted out,' she thought, 'but I saw her hitting the left window.' She instantly shrugged it off and started out in pursuit.
Mr. Incredible approached the spot where Touchforce had just leveled a wall by touching it. The explosive power of the crumbling bricks had knocked the girl down and she sat in awe of her own power. She was obviously in experienced. Mr. Incredible stopped to look at her. She seemed very young and some what scared; it was as if she wasn't sure of herself. "You know," Mr. Incredible started, "there are more constructive uses for your powers." The girl looked at him and smiled. Mr. Incredible returned the expression. "If you'll let me I'll show you how." The girl's smile grew and she reached her hand out to Mr. Incredible. Mr. Incredible took the hand and helped her up. "That's a girl," he said. "Now come on, let's get you out of here." With that, Touchforce released his hand and Mr. Incredible smashed down on the sidewalk with such a tremendous force that he briefly blacked out. Touchforce just laughed at him and headed for another car.
Elastigirl had managed to catch up with Mirror when the girl turned and ran in front of a parked car. Seizing the opportunity, Elastigirl gave her one of her swiftest jabs just as she passed the left half of the front of the car but it again passed straight through her. Mirror suddenly turned, grabbed at thin air, and the next thing Elastigirl knew she was being flung by the arm into the side of a building. 'Of course,' Elastigirl thought as she got up and shook off the daze from her impact, 'she's in a location opposite the place I'm seeing her. I'm seeing her mirror image.'
Frozone had returned to his skis and began icing Positron in an attempt to stop him but he had polarized himself and the polar nature of the ice caused half of it to freeze him while the other half returned to and froze Frozone. 'This won't work,' he thought so he revised the plan and began doing rings around Positron as he fired the ice. Positron couldn't react fast enough and was able polarize himself less and thus deflect less ice. It was not long before Frozone had sealed him in an icy prison.
Mr. Incredible had gotten back up and chased after Touchforce. When he caught the girl he threw all of his momentum behind a punch. The contact sent them both to the ground hard. Touchforce got up dazed seemingly more shaken than Mr. Incredible and obviously more scared. She ran into an abandoned building and Mr. Incredible followed.
Mirror had picked up a metal beam in her left hand and came at Elastigirl. 'I know how to beat you now,' Elastigirl thought as Mirror swung the pole right. Elastigirl then ducked left passing through the pole and swiftly kicked Mirror's right hand which sent the pole flying from her left. Mirror was frightened by the revelation that Elastigirl had figured out her secret and ran back towards the jewelry store. As Mirror reached the door of the store Elastigirl noticed the building's perfect symmetry with the door and Mirror right in the middle of it. "I see you now." She let out one long jab and connected with Mirror's chin putting her out cold.
Mr. Incredible had been careful to note the building's design when he ran in after Touchforce. Using this to his advantage he chased the girl around until he had lined up the door, a major support beam, himself, and Touchforce. 'This will be painful,' he thought. Mr. Incredible ran to Touchforce and grabbed her shoulders. The girl instinctively put her hands up against the super. Mr. Incredible held the pose for several seconds then let go and went flying backwards. He crashed through the support beam out the door and landed unconscious on the street. The building then collapsed around Touchforce.
Frozone was catching his breath before returning to the others but was unaware of what was happening behind him. Positron had managed to line up the charges of the ice and then with a great force blasted the enclosure apart. Frozone fell to his knees under the blast. By then Positron had collected all of the negative charge in Frozones body and brought it to himself where he jolted it with a positive charge from his own. 'Mirage didn't mention this,' he thought. The reaction was instant and severe as the resulting lightning bolt left Frozone lying on the ground.
Elastigirl had reached her husband's side by now. "Mr. Incredible! Mr. Incredible speak to me!" she yelled as she held him. He began to stir but was interrupted when the collapsed building suddenly shot up and rained down around them. Touchforce then emerged shaken but satisfied that she'd been able to blow a whole building off herself. About that time Positron touched down beside him and plopped Frozone on top of the other supers. A dazed Mirror joined them and Positron polarized the three supers and engulfed them in a cage of positive charge.
Mr. Incredible came to and looked up at Positron. 'I've seen him before,' he thought.
Positron spoke up. "Not even you three great supers can stop us," he said. "You're nothing but a bunch of washed up has beens. We're stronger than you. We're the next generation."
"Then maybe I can stop you," said a female voice from behind him.
Positron turned but saw no one. "Who are you! Show yourself," he demanded.
"Here I am," said the girl this time from between the villains and the heroes. Positron swung back around. He began to polarize everything in the direction of the voice to hit it with a lightning strike. The girl recognized this since she felt her hair rise as the air around her was polarized. She instantly put up a force field and the lightning strike passed around it. The outline of the strike gave her position away so she allowed her invisibility to drop to reveal a girl wearing a gray trench coat and matching oversized fedora. Her black hair was the only distinguishable feature as the hat completely shadowed her face. "My force field is solid energy with no charge for you to polarize," she said. "Still feel strong?" By now the polarization had worn of the other three supers and they stood ready to fight.
The bad guys knew they were out numbered now. "You win this time," Positron said, "but we'll be back – better than ever." Mirror then grabbed the other two and started down the street.
Mr. Incredible started after them. "Let them go," Elastigirl said. "Mirror only makes them appear to be there. They'd loose us in no time."
"So who are you?" Frozone asked their new accomplice.
She turned to them. "My name is Invision; but you can call me a friend." She then disappeared.
