Ok my computers broken! I had to borrow my friends to get on it now but it should be fixed soon so it's ok lol. I've done the second chapter! Hehe. But it's not very long because I have exams in a week.
To destellando*sandia: You're the first to review my fanfic! Lol. Thanks for the advice and yea, your right. I was half-afraid that people would write in and say it was rubbish. At least in your review you gave advice on how I can improve! ^_^ No I don't think I have beta reader and yep I'm not very good at comma's and stuff like that. Thanks for reviewing!
To soap sudd: Thanks! Yea that's the way I was trying to make Foaly seem. Like he is in the book ^_^ I'm glad someone noticed! Lol. Just out of curiosity (and it'll help my fanfic lol), by clumped, do you mean the paragraphs are too long and need to be separated more, or … urr I dunno what else it could be lol. But what do you mean by clumped? Thanks for reviewing!! xTamx
Disclaimer: Artemis Fowl not mine still. Eoin Colfer owns it all...
Here's chapter 2!
Foaly nodded. It was one of those rare occasions that he was completely void of sarcasm. Root was shaking his head and muttering inaudibly under his breath while Holly was trying to puzzle out how she felt. She knew it was her job to prevent Artemis and co. (lol) from regaining their memories, but at the same time, she couldn't help feeling a slight jolt of excitement. What would Artemis' reaction be when he finally remembered? For 5 years he had been oblivious to a chunk of his past; what would he do when he got those memories back?
She shook herself mentally and asked Foaly "How might he regain them?"
Foaly, who looked extremely happy to show off his knowledge, answered proudly, "Well, I knew that Artemis would have had more plans than the small number that we discovered. So, I set out trying to figure out what he did. It's a private project I've been working on in between the riots. Finally I came up with an idea when I was recalling some old memories. I remember young Arty being very friendly with Julius' soul mate 'Mulch', and, as his sentence ended recently, I investigated further. Do you recall that pendant he was always wearing around his neck?"
Root grunted and Holly answered, "Yes, he never took it off as far as I know. I gave it to Artemis, and he gave it to Mulch before the wipe." She felt a pang of regret, remembering that time before Holly parted with Artemis for the second time.
Foaly, oblivious to Holly's feelings, continued. "Yes. I suspected Artemis instructed Mulch to return once he was set loose, to remind him of us."
Root swore under his breath before asking "Where is the convict now Foaly?"
The centaur grinned and reached for a carrot from his bucket on the floor. He took a huge bite and said with a full mouth, "Technically, Julius, he isn't a convict anymore." Root twitched as if about to leap on Foaly, so he continued quickly "He is about 6 hours away from Fowl Manor. Luckily all it will take is for you to get whoever you want on this mission to go straight to the shuttle port. The next flare is in 45 minutes. Then all it will take to complete the mission is for the chosen person, whom I'm assuming is Holly, to fly to Mulch's location, pick him up and drag his dwarfy ass back here."
Root nodded and said "Simple enough." He turned to Holly "You up for it Short?"
Holly grinned. "Yessir!" she answered enthusiastically, beaming at the opportunity to get away from the building.
((I'm skipping the shuttle part because I seem to have misplaced my AF books somewhere and can't look up the details of it and I can't remember it all. I think my brother's nicked them… lol))
Just over an hour later Holly was above ground. She stood for a moment, breathing in the cool air that was such a change from the stuffy air of her office. Sighing she flicked on her wings and made her way towards Fowl Manor. Foaly's voice rang in her ears as soon as she was off the ground.
"Ok Holly, I'm sending you a radar view of where Mulch is approximately. I can't do you much better than that though Hols, seeing as we don't have any trackers on the dwarf and have to stick with the vaguer methods. Good luck and, erm, be careful Holly. You don't know what might happen when you grab a kleptomaniac dwarf from behind." He sounded genuine and Holly smiled to herself.
Thanks Foaly. I will. I'll keep in touch if I need you."
"Okay. See ya Holly," he said before cutting the microphone. Holly blinked as a radar came into view in the corner of her helmet. She turned towards the area Mulch was in and picked up her pace.
Half an hour later she was close to the signal and getting closer. The dwarf was also moving very fast because they were quite close to Fowl manor. It was only about an hour away. She would have to move fast. She flew lower and skimmed the surface, looking for a sign but knowing it was useless as Mulch would be underground. She called Foaly and said "Foaly. Mulch will reach Fowl manor in an hour approx, and he's underground so…. how do I get him?"
A chomping sound came through the speakers that Holly assumed was him eating a carrot, and then a muffled voice came through. "Well, I suggest you go to Fowl Manor and find a place where Mulch will surface, then when he does, get him! It'll be tricky but you can do it Hols."
"Thanks Foaly. Bye bye." She cut the microphone and accelerated towards Fowl Manor at her fastest pace.
45 minutes later she landed in the manor grounds. She looked around and saw no sign of life but was glad for the shield hiding her. She looked around for a likely place for Mulch to appear and then remembered the cellar where he had come up while breaking into Fowl Manor before. She decided to sneak there and wait. It was the most likely place to come up. She looked for a suitable way in that the cameras would not detect and saw an open window on the second floor. She was about to turn on her wings when something hit her head hard from behind and she fell over, becoming unconscious instantly.
That's chapter 2! R&R please!
To destellando*sandia: You're the first to review my fanfic! Lol. Thanks for the advice and yea, your right. I was half-afraid that people would write in and say it was rubbish. At least in your review you gave advice on how I can improve! ^_^ No I don't think I have beta reader and yep I'm not very good at comma's and stuff like that. Thanks for reviewing!
To soap sudd: Thanks! Yea that's the way I was trying to make Foaly seem. Like he is in the book ^_^ I'm glad someone noticed! Lol. Just out of curiosity (and it'll help my fanfic lol), by clumped, do you mean the paragraphs are too long and need to be separated more, or … urr I dunno what else it could be lol. But what do you mean by clumped? Thanks for reviewing!! xTamx
Disclaimer: Artemis Fowl not mine still. Eoin Colfer owns it all...
Here's chapter 2!
Foaly nodded. It was one of those rare occasions that he was completely void of sarcasm. Root was shaking his head and muttering inaudibly under his breath while Holly was trying to puzzle out how she felt. She knew it was her job to prevent Artemis and co. (lol) from regaining their memories, but at the same time, she couldn't help feeling a slight jolt of excitement. What would Artemis' reaction be when he finally remembered? For 5 years he had been oblivious to a chunk of his past; what would he do when he got those memories back?
She shook herself mentally and asked Foaly "How might he regain them?"
Foaly, who looked extremely happy to show off his knowledge, answered proudly, "Well, I knew that Artemis would have had more plans than the small number that we discovered. So, I set out trying to figure out what he did. It's a private project I've been working on in between the riots. Finally I came up with an idea when I was recalling some old memories. I remember young Arty being very friendly with Julius' soul mate 'Mulch', and, as his sentence ended recently, I investigated further. Do you recall that pendant he was always wearing around his neck?"
Root grunted and Holly answered, "Yes, he never took it off as far as I know. I gave it to Artemis, and he gave it to Mulch before the wipe." She felt a pang of regret, remembering that time before Holly parted with Artemis for the second time.
Foaly, oblivious to Holly's feelings, continued. "Yes. I suspected Artemis instructed Mulch to return once he was set loose, to remind him of us."
Root swore under his breath before asking "Where is the convict now Foaly?"
The centaur grinned and reached for a carrot from his bucket on the floor. He took a huge bite and said with a full mouth, "Technically, Julius, he isn't a convict anymore." Root twitched as if about to leap on Foaly, so he continued quickly "He is about 6 hours away from Fowl Manor. Luckily all it will take is for you to get whoever you want on this mission to go straight to the shuttle port. The next flare is in 45 minutes. Then all it will take to complete the mission is for the chosen person, whom I'm assuming is Holly, to fly to Mulch's location, pick him up and drag his dwarfy ass back here."
Root nodded and said "Simple enough." He turned to Holly "You up for it Short?"
Holly grinned. "Yessir!" she answered enthusiastically, beaming at the opportunity to get away from the building.
((I'm skipping the shuttle part because I seem to have misplaced my AF books somewhere and can't look up the details of it and I can't remember it all. I think my brother's nicked them… lol))
Just over an hour later Holly was above ground. She stood for a moment, breathing in the cool air that was such a change from the stuffy air of her office. Sighing she flicked on her wings and made her way towards Fowl Manor. Foaly's voice rang in her ears as soon as she was off the ground.
"Ok Holly, I'm sending you a radar view of where Mulch is approximately. I can't do you much better than that though Hols, seeing as we don't have any trackers on the dwarf and have to stick with the vaguer methods. Good luck and, erm, be careful Holly. You don't know what might happen when you grab a kleptomaniac dwarf from behind." He sounded genuine and Holly smiled to herself.
Thanks Foaly. I will. I'll keep in touch if I need you."
"Okay. See ya Holly," he said before cutting the microphone. Holly blinked as a radar came into view in the corner of her helmet. She turned towards the area Mulch was in and picked up her pace.
Half an hour later she was close to the signal and getting closer. The dwarf was also moving very fast because they were quite close to Fowl manor. It was only about an hour away. She would have to move fast. She flew lower and skimmed the surface, looking for a sign but knowing it was useless as Mulch would be underground. She called Foaly and said "Foaly. Mulch will reach Fowl manor in an hour approx, and he's underground so…. how do I get him?"
A chomping sound came through the speakers that Holly assumed was him eating a carrot, and then a muffled voice came through. "Well, I suggest you go to Fowl Manor and find a place where Mulch will surface, then when he does, get him! It'll be tricky but you can do it Hols."
"Thanks Foaly. Bye bye." She cut the microphone and accelerated towards Fowl Manor at her fastest pace.
45 minutes later she landed in the manor grounds. She looked around and saw no sign of life but was glad for the shield hiding her. She looked around for a likely place for Mulch to appear and then remembered the cellar where he had come up while breaking into Fowl Manor before. She decided to sneak there and wait. It was the most likely place to come up. She looked for a suitable way in that the cameras would not detect and saw an open window on the second floor. She was about to turn on her wings when something hit her head hard from behind and she fell over, becoming unconscious instantly.
That's chapter 2! R&R please!
