Ok firstly: SORRY EVERYONE! I know my grammar stinks... but I cant help it. I've been over my other paragraphs as best I can and reposted them but I cant help being bad at commas and paragraph breaks and stuff! I looked at the reviews and most of them commented on my grammar. Oops... Well sorry anyway...
Neko Mew Midorikawa: I wont abandon it lol. I hate it when people do that :) So you dont have to worry about it. :P
destellando*sandia: Lol I have a bad habit of using commas in the wrong places. My english teacher always gets annoyed at me for it. But I still haven't picked it up...
Midnight Unicorn: Thanks! Yea sorry about that huge paragraph in chapter 1! I've changed it now so it's shorter and the grammatical errors are kind of a personal issue of mine. I need to get the hang of it. I promise i'll look it over ;) lol. Two people say they want A/H romance but I dunno if I can crack it lol. I'll see if more people want it and then decide but if I do a romance then it'll be A/H definitely!
AgiVega: Yep I love cliffhanger's! Sorry I had to put one at the end... lol! And yep same goes for you. I'm thinking of A/H but not quite certain yet. ^_^
Phire Pheonix: Thank you. Is this soon enough?? lol
Discaimer: Nope I dont own anything from AF.
Here's chapter 3!
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The sound of a car engine announced the arrival of a vehicle in the grounds of Fowl Manor. A black limosine pulled up outside and a door opened in the front. A huge man got out wearing a black suit and dark sunglasses. He looked around carefully before walking around to the door at the back and opening it for the passenger inside to get out. A young man stepped out, his black hair pushed back from his face and his blue eyes tired. He smiled slightly at the big man and they both started to walk towards the front door. The big man suddenly stopped dead in his tracks and held an arm out to the young man to stop him when a voice came out from behind them. "Well, well. Artemis Fowl and Butler. I have a lot to discuss with you two."
Butler swung around, reaching into his pocket and drawing a pistol as quick as a flash. A very short, grinning man stood in front of the limo. Something about the man tugged at Artemis' mind but he dismissed it quickly and asked in a cold tone "And what might you have to discuss with me little man?" The man grinned even wider.
"Oh Artemis. Don't you remember your old friend Mulch?" he asked in mock suprise. Again the tug came at Artemis' memory but this time he didnt ignore it. He struggled to remember what it was that was puzzling him. Suddenly Butler drew a sharp breath and held a hand up to his head and Artemis lost his trail of thought.
"What is it Butler?" he asked quickly. Butler frowned and looked at the short man again.
"Mulch!" he said loudly. He turned to Artemis and said "Don't you remember yet Artemis? It's Mulch the dwarf!" Artemis wobbled slightly on his feet as his mind seemed to go blank. Only for a second though because all of a sudden it was back to normal again. Butler was grinning at him and this time when Artemis looked at the little man.... he remembered. It was as though a few years of memories were locked inside his brain and only now had the doors been unlocked and opened. He wavered unsteadily and then gasped, "Mulch!"
"Hey Artemis. I came just like you told me to."
"How are you? And everyone back at Haven?" Mulch opened his mouth to answer but was interupted by Butler who was for some reason over by a hedge peering into it suspciously.
"Artemis, look at this. It's all hazy. If I'm not mistaken then there's a shielded fairy by here...." Artemis looked carefully and nodded. There was a slight haze underneath the bush and some of the branches were broken and disorderly around the spot. Mulch shifted uneasily and Artemis turned to stare at him accusingly.
The dwarf grinned guiltily and said "You told me to come, so I came. But by the looks of things the LEP caught on and sent someone to stop me. I knocked 'em out from behind before they could do anything and hid 'em in the bushes.... Then you came home."
Artemis nodded weakly. "You'd better come in then Mulch. Butler can you bring the fairy in with you please? We can see who it is once we're inside." Butler came back holding the haze in his arms and led the way in.
Once they were inside with the shielded fairy unconscious on the couch, Mulch flipped off the fairy's shield. A small figure appeared in a dark green jumpsuit and a black helmet. It was plainly a female and was still deeply unconscious. Butler held the fairy upright whilst Mulch reached forward warily, muttering "if she bloody wakes up now...." and lifted off the helmet. All three immediately recognized the fairy. The nut-brown skin, auburn hair and the expression on her face was enough to remind Butler and Artemis even more about their past. Mulch muttered something inaudable under his breath that sounded like a curse, Butler's eyes bulged disbelievingly and Artemis just stared and whispered "Holly...."
Haven: Ops Booth.
"What is it now Foaly?" snapped an extremely red, puffed up Root.
Foaly frowned. "Honestly Julius. You have absolutely no respect for your poor Centaur master-mind. I should go on strike..."
Root sniffed and ignored the comment. "What's the so-called emergency?" he asked quickly.
Foaly grimaced. "It's about Holly..." Root groaned and Foaly nodded. "We lost contact with her. Her helmet seems to have shut down. Only two things can cause that. One is if the user switches it off and the second is if a large force is slammed into the helmet.... My guess is the latter. Holly wouldn't have shut down her helmet deliberately in a case like this." Root sighed and nodded.
"I'll get a couple of men onto it immediately. Do you know her location?" he asked Foaly.
"Vaguely. She is somewhere in the Fowl area." Root nodded and left to get some of his top officers onto it.
Tum dee dum. Okay thats it. I know it's not very long but I wanted to get something up today so this is what I came up with. Right can you all do me a big favour? Do you think I should make it an A/H? Two people have asked for it and so far it seems as if thats the direction im going in even though I wasnt intending that to happen. I'm not entirely sure whether I want it to be a romance so I decided to ask you for help! :D So can you post your opinions in your reviews. Thanks! R&R please.
Neko Mew Midorikawa: I wont abandon it lol. I hate it when people do that :) So you dont have to worry about it. :P
destellando*sandia: Lol I have a bad habit of using commas in the wrong places. My english teacher always gets annoyed at me for it. But I still haven't picked it up...
Midnight Unicorn: Thanks! Yea sorry about that huge paragraph in chapter 1! I've changed it now so it's shorter and the grammatical errors are kind of a personal issue of mine. I need to get the hang of it. I promise i'll look it over ;) lol. Two people say they want A/H romance but I dunno if I can crack it lol. I'll see if more people want it and then decide but if I do a romance then it'll be A/H definitely!
AgiVega: Yep I love cliffhanger's! Sorry I had to put one at the end... lol! And yep same goes for you. I'm thinking of A/H but not quite certain yet. ^_^
Phire Pheonix: Thank you. Is this soon enough?? lol
Discaimer: Nope I dont own anything from AF.
Here's chapter 3!
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The sound of a car engine announced the arrival of a vehicle in the grounds of Fowl Manor. A black limosine pulled up outside and a door opened in the front. A huge man got out wearing a black suit and dark sunglasses. He looked around carefully before walking around to the door at the back and opening it for the passenger inside to get out. A young man stepped out, his black hair pushed back from his face and his blue eyes tired. He smiled slightly at the big man and they both started to walk towards the front door. The big man suddenly stopped dead in his tracks and held an arm out to the young man to stop him when a voice came out from behind them. "Well, well. Artemis Fowl and Butler. I have a lot to discuss with you two."
Butler swung around, reaching into his pocket and drawing a pistol as quick as a flash. A very short, grinning man stood in front of the limo. Something about the man tugged at Artemis' mind but he dismissed it quickly and asked in a cold tone "And what might you have to discuss with me little man?" The man grinned even wider.
"Oh Artemis. Don't you remember your old friend Mulch?" he asked in mock suprise. Again the tug came at Artemis' memory but this time he didnt ignore it. He struggled to remember what it was that was puzzling him. Suddenly Butler drew a sharp breath and held a hand up to his head and Artemis lost his trail of thought.
"What is it Butler?" he asked quickly. Butler frowned and looked at the short man again.
"Mulch!" he said loudly. He turned to Artemis and said "Don't you remember yet Artemis? It's Mulch the dwarf!" Artemis wobbled slightly on his feet as his mind seemed to go blank. Only for a second though because all of a sudden it was back to normal again. Butler was grinning at him and this time when Artemis looked at the little man.... he remembered. It was as though a few years of memories were locked inside his brain and only now had the doors been unlocked and opened. He wavered unsteadily and then gasped, "Mulch!"
"Hey Artemis. I came just like you told me to."
"How are you? And everyone back at Haven?" Mulch opened his mouth to answer but was interupted by Butler who was for some reason over by a hedge peering into it suspciously.
"Artemis, look at this. It's all hazy. If I'm not mistaken then there's a shielded fairy by here...." Artemis looked carefully and nodded. There was a slight haze underneath the bush and some of the branches were broken and disorderly around the spot. Mulch shifted uneasily and Artemis turned to stare at him accusingly.
The dwarf grinned guiltily and said "You told me to come, so I came. But by the looks of things the LEP caught on and sent someone to stop me. I knocked 'em out from behind before they could do anything and hid 'em in the bushes.... Then you came home."
Artemis nodded weakly. "You'd better come in then Mulch. Butler can you bring the fairy in with you please? We can see who it is once we're inside." Butler came back holding the haze in his arms and led the way in.
Once they were inside with the shielded fairy unconscious on the couch, Mulch flipped off the fairy's shield. A small figure appeared in a dark green jumpsuit and a black helmet. It was plainly a female and was still deeply unconscious. Butler held the fairy upright whilst Mulch reached forward warily, muttering "if she bloody wakes up now...." and lifted off the helmet. All three immediately recognized the fairy. The nut-brown skin, auburn hair and the expression on her face was enough to remind Butler and Artemis even more about their past. Mulch muttered something inaudable under his breath that sounded like a curse, Butler's eyes bulged disbelievingly and Artemis just stared and whispered "Holly...."
Haven: Ops Booth.
"What is it now Foaly?" snapped an extremely red, puffed up Root.
Foaly frowned. "Honestly Julius. You have absolutely no respect for your poor Centaur master-mind. I should go on strike..."
Root sniffed and ignored the comment. "What's the so-called emergency?" he asked quickly.
Foaly grimaced. "It's about Holly..." Root groaned and Foaly nodded. "We lost contact with her. Her helmet seems to have shut down. Only two things can cause that. One is if the user switches it off and the second is if a large force is slammed into the helmet.... My guess is the latter. Holly wouldn't have shut down her helmet deliberately in a case like this." Root sighed and nodded.
"I'll get a couple of men onto it immediately. Do you know her location?" he asked Foaly.
"Vaguely. She is somewhere in the Fowl area." Root nodded and left to get some of his top officers onto it.
Tum dee dum. Okay thats it. I know it's not very long but I wanted to get something up today so this is what I came up with. Right can you all do me a big favour? Do you think I should make it an A/H? Two people have asked for it and so far it seems as if thats the direction im going in even though I wasnt intending that to happen. I'm not entirely sure whether I want it to be a romance so I decided to ask you for help! :D So can you post your opinions in your reviews. Thanks! R&R please.
