Hi! Miki here! I prefer to be called Miki but u probably already figured that out by now. lol. This is the first time i've ever tried writing a Marmalade Boy fanfic but then again, i just finished reading the series for the first time today so that might explain it. This chapter is like a continuation from the very last book just my version! This chapter is kinda funny but I have plans for this fanfic! You can be sure of that!
The story so far...
"Wow! This is so pretty! I love this place!" Miki exclaimed as she looked around the island of Maui. "This is cool! Don't you think so Yuu?" She glanced up at Yuu who was currently lookin around also.
"This is cool. I like it." He said, smiling down at Miki.
"Wow! Pretty!" Miki exclaimed once more. Then she released Yuu's hand and went to the shore and started taking pictures of everything she could see.
:Yuu smiles: Maybe coming to Hawaii with our parents was a good thing. Now, how do I get Miki's dad to agree... (lol)
Later at the hotel...
"So... did you two have fun today?" Chiyako asked, looking at Miki and Yuu.
"Yup!"Miki said smiling.
"Yeah, Hawaii's cool!" Yuu said.
Currently Yuu and Miki are sitting on the couch that's in the room. Yuu tries to put his arm around Miki. Jin unfortunatly bonks him on the head. (heehee)
"Ow! What was that for?" Yuu asked, rubbing the newly formed lump on his head.
"My daughter! Hands off!" Jin said, shooting Yuu and evil glare.
:Yuu cowers:
"Jin, leave him alone! You know he's trustworthy!" Chiyako said, taking ahold of Jin's arm and lowering it from it's position above Yuu's head.
:Jin glares at Yuu:
"He better be! I don't want my daughter hurt! That's all." Jin said, placing a protective hand on Miki's shoulder.
"Dad! He's fine! Don't hurt him." Miki said, looking up at her father.
:Jin glares again, but small smile breaking out at the corners of his lips:
"Ah! I was just giving you a hard time!" Jin said smiling, slapping Yuu on the back in a friendly way.
Oww! Yuu thought. (heehee lol)
"Well, can we go eat now? I'm kinda hungry." Miki said, looking down at her stomach as it growled.
"Yeah." Rumi said, and everyone laughed at Miki's stomach growling.
"You all heard that?" Miki said, looking at everyone.
They just laughed.
"Let's go get some food then!" Youji said. "Ecspecially before Miki's stomach eats itself" Everyone laughed as they headed out the door for food.
Okie, there's the first chapter. So, what do you think? Is it good? If you're wondering what I'm doing, I'm waiting 'til they get back from Hawaii and then my plans are going to start. Heh heh, but I hope you like this! Plz r&r! I could really use some reviews for motivation! Well, maybe now, I just like writing in general but I do like recieving them! Hope you like it!
Miki
