Blue Savage:
My Dear Fellow Readers,
I thank you for each and every reader who reviewed my story. I really enjoyed it. But if it wasn't for you, my readers, my story wouldn't have gone this far. Because of your continuous reviewing I experienced, the feeling, the feeling of writing a nice story again. The feeling of typing away on the keyboard made me feel good again. And I thank you for that, my fellow readers. But my mind is still confused and frail if I should continue or not. Though I updated this chapter, this is just a small gift of giving back, what I once had, fans that really liked my story. I would also like to thank the ff:
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Chapter 32: Arising of a Warrior
Yami's eyes widened in terror, "No way, but ho-how did you get the Sword of Kek?" he almost faltered.
Malik snickered, a smile creeping onto his features, revealing unknown fangs, "Let's just say, it was a family heirloom."
Yami weakly stood up, abruptly glaring at him. But before the Pharaoh could straightly stand up, Malik glided the tip of his sword to the sand and a massive force shot Yami to his back, a nice 10 feet away the blonde boy.
Yami groaned in pain. Malik, once again approached the weak boy and yanked his hair, raising him up, slowly, "Now, Yami I could teach you a little lesson on fighting." He simpered in malice.
"One never let your guard down!" he said punching Yami on the face and making him fall yet again.
"Two, do not show your fear!" He hit him again this time kicking him on the ribs. Yami moaned in expiration, "What, Yami? Did you just tell me to repeat it again? Well, ok." Then he overly repeated everything he did, tugging his hair, punching him, kicking him, doing it over and over again.
"Now, let's move on shall we," then he heaved Yami's left arm and twisted it to his back, breaking it furiously. Loud cracking sounds of braking bones were heard as Yami kept howling in pain, "Three, be alert! You never know when your opponent jumps……on……you." He halted a few words, twisting and cracking his left arm.
Soon Malik took Yami's right arm and twisted it again onto the Pharaoh's back, "Four, remember to have extra artilleries or quick extra moves, to keep in control!"
Yami couldn't take it anymore; the shooting pain kept hitting him, over and over again. It was agonizing. Was there anyone, out there here to help the Pharaoh?
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"Wha-what should I do?" Safiya asked, quivering in tenseness.
"It is simple my dear, you must for take the Sword of Amen-Ra and use it to banish the soul of Malik Ishtar."
"But h-how I don't even know anything on swordsmanship."
"You don't need to, the sword shall teach you."
Safiya turned to Bakura, and he nodded. Slowly glancing at the black-haired woman, she hesitantly took the golden hilt of the sword and a blinding light emerged from the room. Wind started blowing upon Safiya's face as the two masses touched.
"Yes, this is the new proprietor of the Sword of Amen-Ra, Princess Safiya."
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"Hurry, hurry, they went this way!" a guard yelled to his comrade, ordering for him to come his way.
"Are they gone?" Lateef asked the group. After a long time of searching for one another the whole Faction was now trying to look for their master. Hiding behind a large pillar the group glanced at the guards.
"Clear, let's go." Funsani replied. The entire faction followed their comrade and ran towards another thick pillar.
"Where did you say master was, Harakhty?" Yazid questioned.
"In the dungeons, I also suppose Safiya is there too." The brother replied.
"C'mon, the coast is clear." Then they started running again, towards the last pillar before the dungeons.
"Stay quiet." Funsani said, placing his forefinger above his lips. The group nodded and watched as a couple of guards was talking to watch the dungeons.
Funsani faced Aswad, and then he nodded. The stalker then clung to the walls and crawled upon it.
"Man, it's been a long time since I've seen Aswad make a good assassination." Lateef commented, "Yeah, a long time indeed."
The Master of Weaponry and Murder silently inched at the ceiling. And finally, when he was just above the guards he took out his sword and swiftly slashed the Rare Hunters.
Then the rest of the Faction came out of the pillar and cheered for their member, "Good job, Aswad."
After that, with no vacillation, the group was off down the dungeons.
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"Faster! Quick, lock the dungeon doors!" Funsani ordered, as they entered the vast room.
"So, where is Master Bakura?" Yazid inquired.
Aswad turned to the farther end of the long pathway, and saw a bright light enveloping one of the cells, "What's that?"
"What, Aswad? Did you say something?" Harakhty solicited leisurely approaching him.
The dark stalker pointed to the bright radiance, "Hey, guys, Aswad just found something." He gestured for his companions to witness the glow blanketing the chamber. They nodded to one another and walked to the small unit.
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Safiya was being breath-taken, such power, and such force.
'So much power, will Safiya be able to handle this massive energy?' Bakura thought standing still on his feet.
"Now, Princess Safiya," the woman called.
"Yeah?" the amethyst-eyed girl replied, beneath the golden beam, containing her.
"I want you to hold the hilt with both of your hands, and concentrate real hard."
"I-I'll try." She responded. Then Safiya closed her eyes tight, and concentrated with all her might. Then suddenly, the golden light faded, and became a mixture of various colors; red, blue, green, yellow, colors of colors, repeating and swirling itself.
"Wha-what's going on?"
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The Faction was nearing the sect when suddenly the light weakened. Soon after it was replaced by a assortment of diverse hues.
"Amazing…" Yazid whispered.
"Come on, let's go, we have to continue." The group nodded and walked some more.
"Hello, is anyone there?" Lateef called.
Bakura heard the sudden voice and reacted quickly. Immediately marching to the entrance of the prison, his brown eyes ventured through the room and saw 5 peculiar shadows. He slowly sheathed his sword and jumped right out of his stalking hideaway, and raised his sword but stopped as he saw the frightened faces, "Yazid, and the rest of you."
"Master, we finally found you!" the right-hand man yelled.
"What are you doing here?"
The Arshen brothers sweat-dropped and sighed, "Because you said to gather the group and meet you here!"
Bakura awkwardly smiled and turned to Safiya once more.
"Where is Safiya my Lord?" Yazid questioned. Bakura glanced at him and stared at the assortment of lights once more.
"Whoa, what's happening here?" Lattef stepped forward.
"She is going through the initiation to be the next holder of the Sword of Amen-Ra." They stared at their master and their eyes widened.
"Sword of Amen-Ra……"
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Safiya kept concentrating. Eyes still shut. "Princess Safiya," the black-haired woman called again.
"Y-yes?" she replied.
"Do you see anything?"
"Am I supposed to see something? Cause my eyes are still closed."
'She has to concentrate harder……' the woman sighed, "Princess Safiya, concentrate harder…… Tell me when you see anything!"
Shutting her eyes tighter, Safiya mediated. She clasped the sword tighter, and relaxed. Taking a deep breath she slowly calmed down. 'Relax Safiya, relax! Take time to concentrate and penetrate the power of the sword.' She thought, repeating the steps. After a few moments of silence, except for the swaying sounds of the beams of light, Safiya saw something.
A form morphed out of the oblivion. Simple forms of a body appeared a head, arms, hands, legs and a body. 'Wh-what is that?' Safiya questioned to herself.
"Now Safiya, do you see anything?"
"Ye-yeah, I see something……"
"What is it?"
"I-It's a-a some sort of black shadow fo-forming a body."
'Good,' "Okay, now I want you to concentrate even harder! Do you get me?"
"Yeah, I get you!" Then, at that moment, she continued concentrating real hard. 'There it is again!' the shadow appeared once more before Safiya's eyes. "Who-What are you?" she fretted.
The shadow moved and faced her. Extending its hand Safiya took a step back. "Do not worry child, I will not harm you." It said.
"Y-you talk?" she stuttered.
It nodded.
"Who-who are you?"
"My child, I am Amen-Ra."
Finished chapter 32! And yes, I am still thinking if I should stop this fic or not…… and yes again, if I get reviews lower than 15………… I-I would stop writing this story (PS: if anyone thinks I am only using this antic to get more reviews, well then you're wrong! I may be pleading to get more reviews, but I will never use this idea to get what I have. I am real serious if I should stop this story or not! But if anyone thinks this way, then I fell very insulted, because I am not that kind of person to do such a scandal…).
Anyway, I got a lot of story ideas, but still I'm gonna miss writing this fic. Another thing, are there any Hikaru no Go fans out there?! If there are any, can they please tell me their fave character? Mine are actually Mitani Yuuki, Touya Akira, Shindou Hikaru, Waya (forgot last name) and Isumi (also forgot last name)! Are there also any Naruto fans out there?! If there are any, again, my faves are Uchiha Sasuke, Hyuga Neiji and Gaara of the Desert! And for your information, I HATE HARUNO SAKURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well gotta go and please READ & REVIEW!
