An: hey its me. ok so I wanted you to know that I'm rewriting the first chapter cause of a few screwed up my paragraphs so now it looks like its in blocks instead of paragraphs.

It's not my best work. I've decided to put it like real people would put it ya know?

I haven't updated it in a long time and so I'm hoping that by revising it then ill get some more inspiration.

This time last year I came up with the story and because it was so hot,(I live in Arizona by the way Phoenix Arizona. Or some where by Phoenix) so now I can relate to the heat and when I can relate to the story I write better.

The story sucks so far. I mean it's a good plot but my writing when ui put this up was so horrible I cant really stand it. I can stand other people writing like me but I cant stand it when I write like that.

So that is why. Now y'all will just have to wait and see what I put in the revised part cause ill probably break it up into 2 chapters and add a lot more detail.

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