four51 take a deep breath. wow see i am really happy that i am gettin a reveiw like that. it means you know my characters. thank you four51 for the reveiw! i know confusing yes. i tried at the end to exsplain it a tad more. basically his ex was a jerk. so this chappie will be shorter cause i don't have a lot of time on my hands. not to mention i have a cold so i don't know when i'll update again. remember it's not over until it's over.

She sat up in bed. The morning sun hit her face. Reaching over she grabbed her alarm clock. It read nine in the morning. She had been in her room for two days. Two days and her pillow was wet with tears. Loreli stood at the doorway.

"Morning hon," she said.

"Morning," Rory replied softly.

"I made you breakfast,"

"Ok,"

"Ok as in ok I'll have some breakfast?"

"Yeah it's just breakfast not a big deal,"

"Honey you have been in that bed for two days and now you are speaking and moving. I was just about to poke you with a stick to see if your'e alive,"

Rory stood up and walked into the kitchen.

"I think I'm going to be okay mom,"

Loreli walked over and gave Rory a hug.

"Oh I knew you would be,"

Just then the pot on the stove caught fire.

"Oh! My buns are burning my buns are burning!" Loreli exclaimed.

"Please woman never say that agian,"

"But I really was cooking buns,"

"On the stove?"

"I didn't say I knew how to cook buns,"

Rory smiled. She had cried all the tears she had and now it was time to move on. Later in the day she was walking down the street when she heard someone walk up to her. It was Dean.

"Hey Rory. Look I just heard (lie) about what happened and I'm really sorry(lie)," Dean said.

"Let's just not talk about that," Rory replied.

"Ok well how bout I buy you a book?"

"Why? You have no reason."

"Do I need one?"

Rory thought about that. There was this book she wanted to get...

"Ok fine you can buy me a book," she said finally.

Dean smiled. Rory smiled but then she reilized she was smiling and looked away. Dean had broken up with her and he had treated...him...badly. How could she be smiling and talking to him? How could she let him buy her a book? How could she not?

Devon sat in the tiny apartment. He could hear the sirens from outside. The baby was crying. It was always crying. It was a girl named Lauren. Katie had named her. Katie. She was the ex girlfriend she was the one that took him from his sister and the only person he felt happy with. He walked over to the baby and picked her up. Lauren's eyes slowly fell to a deep sleep in his arms. He put the baby back in the tiny crib. Katie walked in.

"There's my pookie baby," she said.

She tried to wrap her arms around his neck but he pushed her away.

"Why are you always like that? Why can't we be a happy family?"

"Maybe cause one of us isen't happy! Maybe one of us didn't want to come here,"

"Then why did you?"

"For Lauren. She needed me,"

"I needed you,"

Devon stared at her. She smiled wickedly at him.

"Oh my god. You haven't gotten over me breaking up with you,"

"You didn't mean to break up with me it was a mistake. Now we have our second chance,"

"I don't want a second chance! You only get one chance at love and I screwed that up."

"You still have a chance with me,"

"I wasen't talking about you,"

Lauren started crying from all the yelling.

"Look you made the baby cry!" Lauren exclaimed.

"I would cry to," Devon said.

He picked up Lauren and sat in a small old chair. He looked at her tiny nose and her tiny hands grabbing his chin. She was the only reason he had come here. He loved his little girl and wasen't going to let her life fall apart because of him. He would never let that happen.

ONE MONTH LATER

"Rory come on you're gonna be late!" Loreli called.

It was time. Time for Rory to go to Yale. She hugged her mother and put her things in the large bus. (i know a bus but i changed things a tad)

"Oh hold on hon I left my coffee inside," Loreli said.

"You don't need coffee to wave goodbye,"

"Yes yes I do my arm could stop mid air,"

"Fine go,"

Loreli smiled and ran inside. Rory saw Dean walking towards her.

"Dean I didn't know you were coming,"

"I wanted to say goodbye,"

Now was his chance. He had to go for it. He leaned forward and kissed her on the lips. It was a soft kiss. A good bye kiss one may call it. Dean looked up at Rory waiting for a reaction. Loreli came out. Rory walked backwards towards the bus.

"Good bye Dean. Good bye mom," she said.

Dean thought it was a bad sign until he saw the smile on her face. Rory walked onto the bus and waved to Loreli as the bus pulled away. She also waved to Dean. She wished though there was someone else there waving goodbye. Someone far away.

Ok so that was this chappie. Next I skip six years into the future. I know i know but trust me i do know what i am doing. most of the time... ok so not much to say but it is still not over. reveiw soon!

-Emma

P.S please do not be offended by me choosing the name Katie for the evil girl. I love that name so much and only picked it cause it was the first one that came to mind my aplogies to anyone named Katie :)