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Chapter 13: Naraku's plan

Kagome woke up the next morning still in Inuyasha's arms. "Inuyasha?" she asked. His sensitive dog ears twitched and he woke up. "Yeah?" he asked slightly irritated she woke him up.

"Would you like some breakfast? I have some Ramen" said Kagome. She saw his ears perk up at the sound of that. "Would I?" he asked excitedly after he had a flashback of the noodles.

Kagome and Inuyasha were too happy to notice they were being watched by someone. Naraku sneered that smile. (Oh how I hate that smile, every time I see that smile I wanna rip his face off and-

Inuyasha: Get on with the story already!

Me: Anything for you kawaii inu

Inuyasha: You're messed up man

Me: You think I'm messed up? Wait til you see my friend's teddy bear

Inuyasha: Right…

Me: Oh hi mad care to join the party?

Mad: Ooh there's a party, where?

Me: Right here

Mad: cool!

Me: Oh hey here comes Morgan

Inuyasha: GET ON WITH THE DAMN STORY!

Me: Fine you're no fun

Inuyasha: So they say…

Anyway Naraku was smiling his evil smile. "He he it seems the hanyou is regaining his love for the miko after all. However we shall have to rip them apart once again. Its fun enough watching the hanyou relive his memories once again, but lets do something more. I want him to remember the physical pain of it all too. Oh I'll let him be happy for a while, but soon we shall tear his heart in two once again."

Kagura laughed a fake hollow laugh. 'The bastard' she thought. 'He's doing the same thing to Inuyasha he did to me. He let me be happy in my freedom of death, and then he brought me back to life. Maybe Fluffy will save me' she smiled at that thought. She had admired Sesshomaru and believed he was one of the only people besides Inuyasha who could free her.

"Miko" said Naraku turning to stare at Kikyo. "Would you assist us in this task?" Kikyo just smirked at that. "You think I would serve you, you pitiful hanyou? No, if Inuyasha is going to suffer by me, I will make him suffer on my own free will."

And with that Kikyo left the hut. Naraku looked after her "We'll see" he muttered.

Inuyasha gulped down his Ramen. He didn't take any breaks to breathe until he was done. In fact, Inuyasha seemed in such a good mood it looked as though nothing could upset him.

When Inuyasha looked up he saw a tornado approaching them. It was strangely familiar and Inuyasha didn't like the looks of it. Before Inuyasha could make a move Koga was standing in front of them, holding Kagome's hand.

Inuyasha felt his eyebrows twitch when he saw this "What?" "Oh hey dog crap I notice Naraku hasn't managed to finish you off yet" Koga interrupted.

"It's a damn shame really it is, but I have more important issues to attend to." He turned to Kagome whose hand he still held in his. "Kagome now is the time you must return to the tribe as my woman. We can take care of Naraku later."

"Koga-Kun" Kagome began but was interrupted by Inuyasha. "Listen wimpy wolf, you have as much a chance of marrying Kagome as an ice cube in hell. Now let her hand go before I chop yours off" Inuyasha looked like he was on fire.

"What are you going to do Inuyasha? You can't deny the fact she loves me" said Koga pulling Kagome into an embrace, he was just about to kiss her when-

BOOM! Inuyasha had quickly pulled Kagome out of the way and sent the Kaze no Kizu directly at Koga. Koga using his jewel shards hopped out of the way. Koga laughed at his violent reaction.

'He he I have an idea' thought Koga mischievously. What happened next would have made Miroku proud. Koga hopped by and rubbed Kagome's butt before speeding out of the way of Kongosouha, which would have definitely killed him if he hadn't dodged.

Koga kept running as far from Inuyasha as he could. Koga yelled over his shoulder "Sorry about that Kagome, I just wanted to make dog crap pissed, rest assured though I'll come by and see you again later." 'You did something more than make him pissed' Kagome thought. Normally she would have thought this funny if Koga wasn't in mortal danger. But like so many things in life she was sure she was one day going to look back on this and laugh.

Miroku and Sango came back to their camp out to find a very disgruntled looking Inuyasha. "What's wrong?" asked Sango. Shippo shook his head warningly and she decided to drop it.

"Umm Inuyasha would you like to talk to me?" asked Kagome. Inuyasha gave a half hearted "keh" and she took that as a yes.

She walked with him and stared at him. He seemed to be thinking. 'What could be on his mind?' she wondered.

Inuyasha Thinking moment!

'Wow, nice weather' he thought.

Inuyasha Thinking Moment!

"Inuyasha don't worry about it you know the feelings he has for me aren't mutual" said Kagome trying to cheer him up. "Keh! That Wimpy wolf got closer to you than I ever have" he said thickly. "Oh really?" she asked thinking about the other night. 'He says the stupidest things when he's jealous' thought Kagome.

"Fine!" huffed Kagome finally surrendering to the stupidity of men. She suddenly pulled him onto her. "There happy now?" she asked. She was surprised when she thought she saw him smile, but she assumed it was her imagination when his expression turned hard again.

"Keh, get off me wench and lets go back" he replied. Kagome sighed. 'He's hopeless' she thought.


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