Ok peps so I was reading this reveiw i got for this one story i'm writing and i got a flame :( but you know i'm not that sad. they have no idea what they r talking about cause they need a second chappie to say what they did. i am so angry with them. anyway chappie away!
Rory stood infront of her mirror. She combed her hair and put it back. She picked up her jacket and stood there staring at herself. Was she really about to do this? She could not believe the answer herself. Loreli walked in through the open door.
"Where are you going?" She asked.
'Well I am meeting someone,"
"Do I know her?"
"It's a him,"
Loreli gasped.
"Rory!"
"No mom nothing like that,"
"Who are you going to see?"
"...Devon,"
"But when...how?"
"It's a very long story,"
Rory walked to the door but Loreli caught her arm.
"As your mother and your friend I warn you that you are getting yourself into something very very big," Loreli said.
"I know what I'm doing,"
She opened the door and there stood Dean about to knock.
"Dean!" Rory gasped.
He walked inside.
"You're not supposed to be back until Sunday," Rory said.
"They let me go home early. Why aren't you happy to see me?" Dean asked.
"Of course I am,"
"Good,"
He looked over her.
"Where are you going dressed up so fancy?"
"I have a buisness meeting,"
Now that wasen't all a lie. Loreli was looking back and forth from Dean to Rory...Dean to Rory.
"Well call them and cancel cause I have tickets to a play,"
"Dean I can't-"
He showed her the tickets.
"Dean! These seats are amazing!"
"Only the best for you,"
"Oh wow!"
"So it starts in half an hour shall we go?"
"Of course!"
They walked out of the house. Loreli stood there dazed and confused.
"I need coffee," she finally said.
Devon held stood next to Lauren. He knocked on the door of a house in Stars Hollow. A girl with blond hair answered. When she saw Devon she hugged him and tears formed in her eyes. He hugged her back.
"Claire I missed you so much," he said.
"I missed you to. "
"Claire I want you to meet someone,"
Devon motioned for Lauren to step forward.
"This is Lauren," he said.
Claire bent down.
"Hi Lauren I'm your Aunt Claire,"
"Hi..."
She laughed and stood up.
"So Claire I have to go meet someone. Would you mind watching Lauren for me?"
"Will you be coming back?"
"I know I know. I wasen't there for you Claire and I'm so sorry. I really want you to forgive me,"
"I had to get three jobs. I worked over 100 hours a week. Then..."
She paused as if remembering was painful.
"Then I got pregnant...and the baby died..."
Tears were running down her face.
"I only wanted my older brother to be there with me," she said through tears.
"Claire I'm so sorry. I'm here now,"
"You won't leave?"
"No. I promise. I'm not going anywhere,"
He gave her a hug then said goodbye. He hoped in his car and drove to Cafe. He was 30 minuetes early so he found a table and sat. Finally it was 3:30. 3:45. 4. Then it was 5 and he stood up.
Rory at the time got home. Dean was staying in a fancy hotel not to far away.
"So do you want to head over to a cafe?" he asked.
Rory walked to the door.
"Oh god!"
"What?"
"Cafe! I'm sorry Dean I'll see you tomorrow but I have to go!"
She shut the door and pulled out her cellphone. She called the cafe. She asked if there was a man there but they told her that he had just left. Rory sank down on the couch. Loreli walked in and sat next to Rory. Rory stared at the turned of tv.
"What cha watching," Loreli said quietly.
"I blew him off mom."
"Who?"
"Devon."
"Honey why would you even go to see him?"
"Because I lo-"
Rory stopped. Shocked. Confused. She couldn't believe what she had almost said. She turned to Loreli.
"Mom I don't know what's happening to me," Rory whispered.
"I'm afraid I do. I'm afraid I do," Loreli said quietly.
Loreli hugged Rory who quietly sobbed of confusion.
Ok so I like this chappie just because of the end. Now next chappie very good chappie :) very good. tehe. I'm gonna wait and let you find out. tehe. Reveiw!
Emma
