Elana thinks that she is just a normal girl who loves horses and lives with her widowed mother, but is she? this is my first ever fanfic, PLEASE review. if people like it so far I'll continue, if not, I'll stop.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Harry P., Voldemort - Chapters: 30 - Words: 29,256 - Reviews: 99 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Updated: Mar 14, 2005 - Published: Mar 11, 2004 - id: 1767848
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Milky Neon- I love you! LOL. I always look forward to you reviewing every chapter. It feels wonderful to know people actually like your story! Yes, James can be quite funny at times.
danniegirl85- Thanks for reviewing! You'll find out who the Death Eater was in this chapter. You may or may not expect him, but probably not.
Oh yeah, and I'm making a website for this story because I am bored today, I'll post the URL next chapter and in the reviews when I'm done.
I'm dedicating this chapter to Milky Neon, for being my most faithful reviewer.
Lani went over and hugged the horse around the neck. "Dad, what horse is this? Where's James? What's funny?" The black horse backed out of her hug and her dad started laughing.
"What?" Lani asked, questioning her father's sanity at the moment.
he just pointed behind her at a disgruntled James. "I don't do hugs," he said while shaking his already very messy hair.
Lani finally caught on, "James! You're an Animagus? Since when? How? You said horses were dumb!" then added as an afterthought. "You're lucky I didn't think you were Dreamer, I kiss him on the muzzle."
James shuddered at the thought before squinting somewhere behind Lani. "Who's that?" he asked loudly, and Lani remembered (AN: ACTUALLY, the author remembered. Lol I had something planned with her and forgot about it until now.)
ANNA!
Anna?
yeah, she's a muggle. she must be confused
oh...
"Anna!" Lani yelled to her friend, she could tell in the dim moonlight that the other girl was pale, she had a shocked look on her face and kept staring from Lani, to James, to Lani's wand, to Harry.
Anna finally found her voice: "What. Was. That."
"Oh... uh... well, you see-"
"Is she a-?" Harry asked quickly.
"yeah, but can she know?"
"Technally-"
"Please!"
"-yes, you see, she has a reason to know..." He said, his voice suddenly growing grave.
"What?" Anna sqeaked, almost forgeting that there was something she wanted to find out here.
"I think we better go inside, first. Let's take care of this guy, then we can talk about stuff," he said, raising his wand, he said "Mobilicorpus, Relashio!" The Death Eater's body levitated to the house, then red sparks emitted from his wand, illuminating the night sky.
"Go inside," Harry said, "I'll be in in a moment, If he wakes up, stun him. Also, explain everything to Anna; she needs to know."
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Harry came back about fifteen minutes later. Lani had just finished explaining everything about magic and their world, and Anna had gotten over her shock and sworn not to tell another living muggle about it. James explained that he was a natural Animagus, and that he said horses were stupid because he'd spoken to them and they said that they actually didn't mind being ridden.
"That was a nice shot, James!" Anna said while examining the man's face. He looked young, maybe about 20 or so.
"Ok," Harry said. I'm going to heal him and ask him a few questions, You guys are going to have to leave-"
"NO!" Came two shouts from Lani and James at the same time.
Lani pulled out a pair of her Uncles new and improved extendable ears, "We'll know anyway, even if you put wards up we'll find a way."
Harry sighed. "If you're that determined, fine. and gimme those! Accio ears... WHOOPS!
everyone in the room, plus Mrs. Potter came flying towards Harry's wand. They all banged heads and landed on the floor groaning. "What on earth-?" Mrs. Potter started, before spotting Harry's wand out. She calmly walked away, muttering something about having to make dinner. Everybody laughed and Lani pointed to the extendable ears. "They can't be summoned"
"I figured that," he said laughing. "Okay, now," He pulled out his wand and said a few incantations to heal the broken bones and skin on the man's face, he then said "Enervate!"
The man jumped up and spun around, he saw Harry and jumped back into the couch. "I didn't mean to, Mr. Potter!" He squeaked.
"Well, I'll see if you meant to or not," Harry said, grabbing his left arm, burning black and bright was the dark mark. The man jumped backwards as if shocked, his mousy sand colored hair flying in all directions.
"Who are you?" Harry asked in a voice nothing like the kind one Lani always heard. The man just stared, terrified at Harry and leaning as far back in the chair as possible, his hands gripped on the arm rests in a death grip.
"I asked you a question, are you going to answer?"
The man just squeaked something inaudible out. Harry finally appeared to be sick of it and raised his wand, the man started to quake in fear, his eyes sqeezed shut.
Harry said a spell Lani didn't recognize and suddenly black letters seemed to burn into the air, they read:
JOHN LEO PETTIGREW
HA HA! Please review, This is one of my longer chapters (Though still pretty short, sorry) Also,
POLL:
I just got an idea, I'll post questions, and you can tell me what house (Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, Slytherin) you're in, along with your answer. I'll give you points for your house if you get them right, and also give you clues about any thing coming up in the story (Or think of something better.) and the house that has the most points at the end of the story wins (I'll have to think of what you'll win there, too) also, you cannot change houses if/when we do this.
OKAY, so the poll part of that is tell me if you think it's a good idea or not. Thanks, I'll stop rambling on and on now.
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