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If your name is in bold, it means that you have reviewed every or almost every chapter so far, and I thank you a billion times over.You guys have no idea how much I look forward to seeing reviews. THANK YOU. Lol.
AN: I really need a beta reader for this story. Badly. Please, if anyone can be my beta or if you know someone who can be my beta, e-mail me at Starryhorselover(at)aol.com
"PETTIGREW!" Harry shouted, unable to contain his anger, a vase on the table broke. John Pettigrew opened his eyes. "You good for nothing, loathsome little Bastar-"
"Harry! Watch your language! There are children in the house," Emily said appearing from the kitchen door waving a wooden spoon at him.
"Sorry, Em... won't do it aga-NO!" John had suddenly turned into a brown mouse and scurried out of the house.
"I should have known! His father, a rat and he's a mouse. aaargh!!"
"Dad, don't worry, I'll get him. Mice aren't faster than horses.... are they?" James asked.
"I dunno, but James, you twit. He'll either lead you to Voldedork or go into a small place where you can't fit," Lani said while kicking at a peice of the broken vase.
"Reparo!" Harry said shortly, the vase obligingly repaired itself.
"Anna, come with me. I've got to tell you something," Harry said. Anna just stared at him for a moment. He softened his voice, "Let's talk outside. No, Lani, you can't come. You'll know when Anna wishes to tell you. With that, Harry and a nervous looking Anna walked outside, leaving Lani and James alone to their thoughts.
I'm bored, came James' voice in Lani's head. She visibly jumped. She'd forgotten that they had a mind connection.
Really? You look like you're having the time of your life, staring at your shoes and all! Came Lani's sarcastic thought back.
Meanwhile, Mrs. Potter walked in, "Dinner's ready," She said hopefully, but to no avail. Lani and James were still bickering, now out loud. She just sighed and went back to the kitchen.
A few minutes later, Harry and Anna walked in. Anna looked upset and very pale. Harry looked grave.
"What's wrong?" Lani asked, looking back and forth between Anna and her dad. Anna just shook her head and ran back out the back door, slamming it shut.
Lani got up and started to follow her out, but her father stopped her, "Leave her alone, Elana. She just heard something that nobody wants to hear."
"Fine, but what did you tell her?" Lani questioned, squinting out the window, but her friend was no longer visible in the pitch black night.
"Where'd she go?" James asked. "might there be more Death Eaters around?"
"No one in their right mind would come here right now to cause trouble," Harry said, staring unseeingly out the window.
"Why?" Lani and James asked in unison.
"Because Iput up anti- apparating and dark magic detection wards, and I'm mad enough to accidently blow up the house," He said, seething.
Lani suddenly felt someone in her mind, What, James?!
Harry lifted an eyebrow, "James?"
Busted.
QUESTIONS:
1. Why did I introduce that Peter had a son?
2. What did Harry tell Anna?
3. Why is Anna so upset?
ALSO: Should I got into Lani's Point of view or James' when school starts up again? (next chapter). I was going to go into James' just so we can get to know his character a bit more, but I figure you guys can decide because it can go either way.
also, I'm not going to post anything on the site I was going to make because I don't have a beta yet, and don't want to post everything twice. Once again, if you can be or know someone who can be my beta reader, please e-mail me at starryhorseloveraol.com
Thanks
ciao
