Hello fanfic writers! I am attempting to write something interesting that people will read! So, tell people about my story please! Okay, chapter one. THIS IS A RELOAD OF THE SAME STORY.
Chapter 1: The Invention
"Okay Neutron, this had better be good." It was a rather nice day in Retroville on this particular Monday morning in summer. But the weather didn't reflect the events of that day. Jimmy, his friends Carl and Sheen, his enemy, Cindy, and his enemy's friend, Libby, were all crowded in his backyard. Almost all of them were eagerly waiting to see the invention he was about to present.
"My friends," Jimmy began then he paused. "And Cindy, what I am about to show you today is a breakthrough in science history. I give you the-" Sheen interrupted him.
"Hold it!" he said. "I know! The something-iser or something-tron, a number in the thousands or hundreds. It's always that. Why is it always that?"
"Well, Sheen, you are right I suppose. I give you the Resert-a-tron 4,000. I have finally figured out how to travel through different dimensions. If you-" This time it was Libby who interrupted.
"Hold up! How is that so amazing?" She asked.
"Well, Libby it's like this," Jimmy said as he turned around to a chalk board. "Okay, there are two good reasons. One, If there is a 2-D room that's locked, let's say, and you need to get in. If you are 2-D you just go to the third dimension, walk across the chalkboard, get into the room, go back to the second dimension, and you've got it. This is the same with going from 3-D to 4-D to 3-D again."
"Well that's pretty useful," Libby stated.
"The other reason," Jimmy continued, "Is that you can travel to places faster than Sheen," Jimmy picked up a string, and shrunk Carl down to the size of an ant.
"Ah! Jimmy I'm tiny!" Carl shrieked, very much like a girl.
"It's okay Carl, you'll be normal in no time. I just have to explain how this works," Jimmy said to Carl, and once again continued. "Now if Carl had to walk across this string it might take a while. But if I put the ends together," as Jimmy said as he folded the string, "It would take no time at all. This is like folding the demensions, which the Resert-a-tron does. Any questions?"
"Yeah, Jimmy, I have one. Can I please be, um, un-shrinked?" Carl asked as loud as he could.
"Oh sorry, Carl. I almost forgot," Jimmy said. In the blink of an eye Carl was back to his normal size.
"I have a question," came a snotty voice, "Is it over?"
"Right after I demonstrate, Vortex. Prepare to fly through dimensions," Jimmy said. Right as he started up the Resert-a-tron and before they were all engulfed in a feeling of suffocation, Cindy knew she saw sparks fly from the invention. But before she could say anything, they were gone.
SO? WHAT DO YOU THINK? I am trying to make this interesting and different. So READ AND REVIEW PLEASE! I had to explain everything in this chapter because otherwise this would be REALLY confusing. Oh, the faster than Sheen part is because of The 'N' Men. REVIEW PLEASE:)
