Here's my new story I was thinking up of.I hope you like it.It just came up in my mind.Here it is. Oh and if you were wondering I fixed the errors in this fic. Thanks for the flamers .I can't believe I just said that .LOL .Well read it and then review it .Oh and if you found any more mistakes please tell me and then I'll fix them. Thanks for not reporting me and being patient.Oh and I'll fix the mistakes in the other chapters of this fic and the other chapters of all the other chapters too. Well remember to review and tell me if I improved.
Rikku aimed at the rival in front of her.She was playing Badminton.We'll just see how you can play against me,She thought.
Her green eyes were sparkling in fury and excitement.Rikku was a famous Badminton player.Plus she was wearing her lucky gloves, so how could she lose ?
They were brown leather,and dotted with orange gem stones around the sides.They had cuts so you could see her slender fingers sticking out of them.
She had painted her nails a pattern of green and orange.Rikku had put her hair in two braids so it wouldn't get in her way during the big game.
" YES! " Rikku shrieked.Rikku had won the game.She went over to the player.
" That was a really good game Yuffie," Rikku proclaimed after holding her hand out.
" Yea I guess it was," Yuffie cried as she winked at Rikku," but next time I'll win that trophy " .
Rikku laughed as she left Yuffie alone.She went up to the host.
" Rikku Al Bhed ... is the winner for The Sixty-Seventh Batminton Contest 2005," The host cried.( I'm sorry if it wasn't really the sixty-seventh Badminton contest so...SORRY ! )
Rikku sighed as she took the trophy in her hands.She started to cry.The tears welled up in her eyes and then drifted off her cheeks.She looked back up from the floor and then wiped the tears from her cheeks.Rikku smiled brightly and then lifted her trophy up.
" Thank you SOOOO much ! " She cried weeping some more.
Three Hours Later
Yuna looked down at Rikku.(Rikku was short for her age)
" See, what did I tell you, " Yuna cried with glee," Practice makes perfect ".Rikku smiled as she looked up at Yuna.
Yuna was Rikku's cousin and best friend.She was a beautiful 18 year old.She had gentle light hair the color of honey.Like golden brown.It reached til her neck and she refused to grow it out longer.Yuna had one green eye and one blue eye.Her blue eye was from her father.
Yuna's green eye was from her mother.Her mother was an Al Bhed.(a/n :All Al Bhed have green eyes ; only Al Bhed have green eyes thats why Rikku has green eyes.Well DUH ! )
Yuna was amazingly talented.She was a singer,actress,and a famous swimmer.
Rikku looked at the young boy who was staring at Yuna in awe.His name was Tidus.Yuna's boyfriend.Tidus had long blonde hair and blue eyes resembling the ocean's waves.The waves in his eyes would flicker like fire if something happened to Yuna,if there was something adventurous coming up in his life,or ofcourse if you got him angry.
Tidus was also a famous blitzball player." I'm the star of the Zanarkand Abes! " He would say grinning.
He was muscular and had tanned skin.Tidus was one of the most sweetest people Rikku knew.I wish I had a boyfriend as good-looking,intellegent,sweet,and athletic as Tidus.
Tidus got up from his seat.He looked at Yuna and grinned a wide grin.Then he looked at Rikku.
" Hey,Rikku," Tidus started," For your victory can we go to the club to celebrate ".
Rikku thought for a moment.
Then she winked at Tidus and replied," Duh,where else would I wanna go ".
Though in her mind she thought up of all the places she WOULD want to go to instead of the local club.
Tidus turned to Yuna.Yuna sighed as she saw Tidus.She slapped her forhead and smiled.
" Well what are you guys waiting for lets get dressed for the club," Yuna took her index finger and scolded Tidus," Try to wear something that'll REALLY surprise me instead of embarrasse me ".
Flashback To The Last Time Yuna Went To The Club With Tidus
" Hey Yuna, how do I look? " Tidus questioned Yuna.Yuna came out in her purple miniskirt and her white tank top.It had a heart on it and the heart was split in two.( a/n : The heart was split like... lets see the shirt had a split in it.So neccesarily the heart would too' ' )
Yuna almost burst out laughing.Tidus was wearing a black and pink shirt.The background color was black and the text on the baggy shirt was pink.It read : Only Tough Guys Wear Pink .Yuna liked the shirt but then again it had some stuff on the shirt like ketchep and stuff like that.
His shorts were baggy and went down a little over his knees.There was all this writing on the shorts in white.Like ' Yuna Is Mine ' and ' GRRRRR ... ' . Stupid stuff like that.Plus,the pants had some bitter looking holes in them.
" Um ... no, " Yuna laughed and pushed Tidus into the bathroom." Were not leaving anywhere unless you put some appropiate clothes on, " She called out to him.He scowled and looked around in his closet.( a/n: the walk in closet was in his large bathroom )
" What The Fuck , " He replied.Yuna just covered her mouth preventing her to say anymore.
Back To Reality
Tidus kissed her cheek as she gave him a peck back.
Rikku ran out of the room.They're gonna start making out heavy even if I leave or not,She smiled to herself.
" Well,I guess I better get ready for tonight," She thought outloud.
So how'd you like it?It is my third fic.Man I hope I can finish this.
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