This is just a little trial chapter to see if I should make the story. This is Set 1000 years after the end of the third age. This is kind of like the Lord of the Rings in modern day.

The man ran back from the entrance of the cave firing his gun. Returning fire from the cave caught him in the neck and he fell to the ground gasping. Four orcs then walked out of the cave entrance stepping over dead bodies as they walked. They started talking to each other, the dying man strain to listen eager to find out what these things were.

"It is finally time we emerged back from the shadows." One of them said

"Yes we've hid from these men for far too long." Another answered

Just then one of them noticed the man was still alive walked over and ended his misery with four bullets.

"Sound the horn mobilize the army."

Well please R&R tell me what you think.