Disclaimer: Lori is mine; Legolas and Haldir are Tolkiens, savvy?
This is my first story. Please tell me if you like! :)
Chapter 1
America 2004:
Lori was in her cabin reading Lord of the Rings, wishing that she were an elf and could fall in love with the hot elf, Legolas. She knew it would never happen, but one can only hope.
Lori went to school at a military school. Fort Mount Military School to be exact. Her dad was in Iraq, fighting. Her mom had died in a car accident two years ago. Lori had nowhere else to go so her dad sent her to military school. She is now sixteen. Lori loved to read, but hated to read the kind that didn't have weird and unnatural stuff in it. She had first read Lord of the Rings when she first learned to read. Lori was a really fast learner, and had always been ahead of her group.
"Attention," called out her drill sergeant, T-Bone, but everyone called him T. He was always trying to be mean and scary at a height of 5- 6." Never worked for him.
Everyone was slow to get up by their bed at attention, except the rookies. They were always trying to suck up, after the first year they learned that it is not that big of a deal when it is coming from T. Higher in command and taller, but T was always trying to make us look bad by telling us that we weren't working as a team, when actually we were. All sixteen of us were, so in return we slowly turned on him. Wanting to get a new drill sergeant. Here the drill sergeants were the kids.
"What is it now, T?" asked Lori's best friend Whitney, Whit for short. Whit has a lot of whit in her; don't catch her on her bad side. She can tell you of in a second. She was just as smart as Lori and they enjoyed the same things.
"You are going to run the obstacle coarse, first one done has dinner with me," he said, very full of himself.
Everyone looked at him, laughed really hard, and went back to what they were doing, except, of coarse, the rookies. They sprinted out there like there was no tomorrow.
"Why aren't you running out there like the first years are," he asked.
Chris, the really violent one, looked like she was about to pounce on T, but Whitney and Lori held her back. Chris came from New York, and the accent came with her, and didn't have it the one bit easy there. Police caught her stealing food for her family and sent her to military school.
"What are you going to do, huh, beat me 'till I say Uncle. You couldn't touch me, especially a girl." This statement made by T made all the girls surround him. Everyone wanted Lori to come and beat the crap out of him, but instead Whitney told him off.
"The reason why we aren't running is because we don't respect you," explained Whit, "and the reason we are trying to get rid of you."
"Get rid of me? You wouldn't dare. I made you what you are!" yelled T.
"No, you didn't make us what we are, you were never there to show us how to do anything. Lori taught us how to do everything. She taught us to work our way through problems, and how we should!" said Whit.
"I never had a group as lousy as you are! How are you going to choose this leader and who has been leading this?"
"Everyone has. Mostly Lori and I, but everyone had a say. The teachers and this squad will vote for leader." Whit said this calmer.
"Well good luck, and good riddance!" said T, as he stormed out of the cabin.
"Never have heard someone say that, that weren't on movies. Who says that nowadays?" asked Whit. Whit looked around for Lori, but couldn't find her. Lori was out on one of her very long walks that she liked to take every once and a while.
Mirkwood 1236
Legolas was in one of his trees in Mirkwood reading a book. It was an elfish book. Difficult for man, easy for elves. His book was called The Fruit of Torture. He thought it was a good book. His book did make him think that there might be another realm out there, somewhere.
"Legolas," called his friend Haldir. Legolas looked up from his book to see Haldir standing below the tree. Haldir had traveled from Lorien to see Legolas. As soon as Legolas saw Haldir he jumped down and said,
"Haldir! It's so good to see you! How was your trip?"
"Fine, fine. You up in one of your trees again?"
"Yes, but remember you are always in one of your trees," replied Legolas.
"True. Legolas the reason why I am here is that men are saying that the Rangers are burning villages, farms, anything they can get their hands on. The Lord and Lady wanted me and you to investigate. I have already talked to your father and he said it was fine. He thinks of you as a warrior now," said Haldir.
"Well after 2,000 years I think he should. I thought the Rangers helped people, not kill them, and why are they calling on elves to fix this problem?" asked Legolas.
"A few of the men and women crossed Lorien boarders without noticing. They were all wounded, some beyond our aid, some once they crossed the boarder they instantly died. There were seven in all, three only survived and told us the story," explained Haldir.
Legolas stood there and took it all in. How could people be that heartless? To kill men, women, and children, what kind of monster would do such a thing?! Thought Legolas.
"I will do it. Is it just going to be you and I?" asked Legolas.
"For now, yes. If it gets to extreme then we will come back to get reinforcements," said Haldir.
"We must leave now!" said Legolas as they ran back toward the Mirkwood Palace, and then they were on their way on horseback.
Chapter two will be up shortly. Tell me if you like!
This is my first story. Please tell me if you like! :)
Chapter 1
America 2004:
Lori was in her cabin reading Lord of the Rings, wishing that she were an elf and could fall in love with the hot elf, Legolas. She knew it would never happen, but one can only hope.
Lori went to school at a military school. Fort Mount Military School to be exact. Her dad was in Iraq, fighting. Her mom had died in a car accident two years ago. Lori had nowhere else to go so her dad sent her to military school. She is now sixteen. Lori loved to read, but hated to read the kind that didn't have weird and unnatural stuff in it. She had first read Lord of the Rings when she first learned to read. Lori was a really fast learner, and had always been ahead of her group.
"Attention," called out her drill sergeant, T-Bone, but everyone called him T. He was always trying to be mean and scary at a height of 5- 6." Never worked for him.
Everyone was slow to get up by their bed at attention, except the rookies. They were always trying to suck up, after the first year they learned that it is not that big of a deal when it is coming from T. Higher in command and taller, but T was always trying to make us look bad by telling us that we weren't working as a team, when actually we were. All sixteen of us were, so in return we slowly turned on him. Wanting to get a new drill sergeant. Here the drill sergeants were the kids.
"What is it now, T?" asked Lori's best friend Whitney, Whit for short. Whit has a lot of whit in her; don't catch her on her bad side. She can tell you of in a second. She was just as smart as Lori and they enjoyed the same things.
"You are going to run the obstacle coarse, first one done has dinner with me," he said, very full of himself.
Everyone looked at him, laughed really hard, and went back to what they were doing, except, of coarse, the rookies. They sprinted out there like there was no tomorrow.
"Why aren't you running out there like the first years are," he asked.
Chris, the really violent one, looked like she was about to pounce on T, but Whitney and Lori held her back. Chris came from New York, and the accent came with her, and didn't have it the one bit easy there. Police caught her stealing food for her family and sent her to military school.
"What are you going to do, huh, beat me 'till I say Uncle. You couldn't touch me, especially a girl." This statement made by T made all the girls surround him. Everyone wanted Lori to come and beat the crap out of him, but instead Whitney told him off.
"The reason why we aren't running is because we don't respect you," explained Whit, "and the reason we are trying to get rid of you."
"Get rid of me? You wouldn't dare. I made you what you are!" yelled T.
"No, you didn't make us what we are, you were never there to show us how to do anything. Lori taught us how to do everything. She taught us to work our way through problems, and how we should!" said Whit.
"I never had a group as lousy as you are! How are you going to choose this leader and who has been leading this?"
"Everyone has. Mostly Lori and I, but everyone had a say. The teachers and this squad will vote for leader." Whit said this calmer.
"Well good luck, and good riddance!" said T, as he stormed out of the cabin.
"Never have heard someone say that, that weren't on movies. Who says that nowadays?" asked Whit. Whit looked around for Lori, but couldn't find her. Lori was out on one of her very long walks that she liked to take every once and a while.
Mirkwood 1236
Legolas was in one of his trees in Mirkwood reading a book. It was an elfish book. Difficult for man, easy for elves. His book was called The Fruit of Torture. He thought it was a good book. His book did make him think that there might be another realm out there, somewhere.
"Legolas," called his friend Haldir. Legolas looked up from his book to see Haldir standing below the tree. Haldir had traveled from Lorien to see Legolas. As soon as Legolas saw Haldir he jumped down and said,
"Haldir! It's so good to see you! How was your trip?"
"Fine, fine. You up in one of your trees again?"
"Yes, but remember you are always in one of your trees," replied Legolas.
"True. Legolas the reason why I am here is that men are saying that the Rangers are burning villages, farms, anything they can get their hands on. The Lord and Lady wanted me and you to investigate. I have already talked to your father and he said it was fine. He thinks of you as a warrior now," said Haldir.
"Well after 2,000 years I think he should. I thought the Rangers helped people, not kill them, and why are they calling on elves to fix this problem?" asked Legolas.
"A few of the men and women crossed Lorien boarders without noticing. They were all wounded, some beyond our aid, some once they crossed the boarder they instantly died. There were seven in all, three only survived and told us the story," explained Haldir.
Legolas stood there and took it all in. How could people be that heartless? To kill men, women, and children, what kind of monster would do such a thing?! Thought Legolas.
"I will do it. Is it just going to be you and I?" asked Legolas.
"For now, yes. If it gets to extreme then we will come back to get reinforcements," said Haldir.
"We must leave now!" said Legolas as they ran back toward the Mirkwood Palace, and then they were on their way on horseback.
Chapter two will be up shortly. Tell me if you like!
