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"Ever since I met you that day we dropped into your world, I've been crazy over you," admitted Legolas.

"Wow, I thought I was just hallucinating when I saw pointed eared people. It seems I am one!" said Lori.

"Lori... I ... love you," said Legolas.

And so... ON WITH THE SHOW!!!

Middle Earth... Mirkwood... Royal Palace... Balcony

Lori went from a really hyper girl to a dead serious one in less than a New York minute. She stood in shock at what she just heard.

"Lori? Are you all right?" asked Legolas.

Lori snapped out of her shock and said,

"Wait, you love me? Mentally unstable Lori?" asked Lori.

"From what I see you're only unstable when you don't have any responsibilities to fulfill," said Legolas taking Lori's hands and looking her in the eye.

"True," she said. "Are you sure it's love? I mean, we've only known each other for what, less than a week?"

"Lori, one thing you helped me realize is that anything is possible," said Legolas.

"What do you mean?"

"Before you came along I didn't really believe at love at first sight," said Legolas looking in Lori's hazel eyes.

"You're a fool if you don't believe at love at first sight," said Lori.

"Yes, and Will Turner was a fool for not telling Elizabeth," said Legolas referring to his first movie that he had ever seen: Pirates of the Caribbean. Lori laughed, but she knew he was right. At that moment she knew that she had truly loved him too.

"You're right. I guess I'd be a fool if I didn't speak my mind, too," said Lori. Legolas looked down, think he knew what she was going to say. "I love you, too."

"Really?" asked Legolas.

"I'd be a fool if I didn't," said Lori. She wasn't prepared for what was coming next.

Legolas looked into her eyes and kissed her. It was a long kiss. Like one of those Hollywood movie kisses. 'OH MY GOSH! I remember last week I was wishing that I could only meet Legolas and now I'm kissing him!' she thought. 'I think I met the girl of my dreams' thought Legolas.

What they didn't know is that the whole ballroom was watching secretly. They were still dancing, but they followed along with what was going on. Haldir and Whit were listening right by the doors of the balcony. They heard everything that was going on. When Legolas and Lori had kissed they gave everyone the thumbs up; of coarse the whole ballroom was watching. All of six people were not happy about it: the five girls who had been giving Lori evil looks all night and Legolas's father. The five girls were planning revenge; the king was planning to run her out of town. He thought that Lori wasn't good enough for his son.

Meanwhile, back on the balcony,

"We should probably go back inside," said Legolas.

"Yeah. They probably want to know where we've been," said Lori.

"We'll just tell them that we were looking at the stars," said Legolas.

"We're right in front of the door."

"So?"

"And the doors were open."

"So?"

"Everyone probably saw!" Lori said to clear things up.

Legolas looked stunned.

"I didn't realize that the doors were open!"

"Um... Legolas,"

"Yes," he said.

"How could you not?" said Lori. "Lets just go in like nothing happened."

"But something did happen," reminded Legolas.

"Yeah, I know something did happen, but this is what they do in the movies," said Lori.

The "couple" walked in like nothing happened. Lori saw someone behind the door in the corner of her eye and turned to see who it was. She turned and saw Whit and Haldir.

"What were ya'll doing?" asked Lori.

"Having an intimate conversation... or at least listening to one," said Whit.

"You didn't!" said Lori.

Arwen and Aragorn came up and said,

"I'm happy for you two," said Aragorn.

"Why?" asked Lori.

"It's all over the kingdom," said Arwen.

Legolas looked at her in disbelief and said,

"After one minute!?"

"Well you kissed with the doors wide open," said Whit.

"AHHH!" said Lori.

The party was about over and people were starting to leave.

"Finally they are leaving," said Haldir.

"When do you have to go back to Lorien?" asked Whit.

"Not any time soon I hope," said Haldir.

"Alright!" said Whit. "I got a question,"

"Go ahead."

"Has Galadriel always been able to do that voodoo mind reading thing?"

"I do not know. She is much older and wiser than me."

"How much older?"

"About 4,000 years older," said Haldir. Whit was too amazed to speak.

"Whit, come on!" Lori called out.

"Got to go, kid," Whit said to Haldir.

"Did you just call me kid?" asked Haldir.

"Yeah," said Whit.

"Your insane," said Haldir heading toward Legolas to speak with him.

"Tell me something I don't know," said Whit as she was heading toward Lori to go to their rooms.

Haldir just shook his head and went on. Whit got to Lori, took the radio and went to their rooms. All the way there they were talking about that night. When they got to their rooms, they changed into their pajamas and went to bed. Lori thought about the kiss; her first kiss. Who knew that it would be with Legolas? Whit was just thinking about Haldir and how old he was and how old Galadriel was. It amazed her that they were that old and she didn't have a gray hair on her head.

A/N Better now? Am I too sappy with this story? I was thinking that it might be a little too... mushy... lovey-dovey? Tell me what you think. PLEASE REVIEW! GO AHEAD... REVIEW... I'LL BE WAITING! Sorry about the shortness of this chapter. I'll do better next time. Slowness... YOU ARE AWESOME!!!! Sorry I had to leave you guys with a cliffhanger. I'm really busy at the moment, but I will keep writing!