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OK. I'M TRYING TO CALM DOWN. Its my first fanfic anc that was an AWESUM response. so: I'm gonna write my next chappie and give it 2 u guys in the next few days- I put my 3rd chappie up on the 9th so u r all in for a treat- I'm typing another up just 2 days later- a major accomplishment for me cuz I'm lazy.
so- thank you muchly (english term) to:
Wake-Robin- thanx! u rock!
popsicle- Thanx! I've just got out my book and yes! indeedy it is Daine. thanx for the awesum review! I didn't kno how 2 spell it. Glad you caught me on it.
Beccs- I promise- I'll make this one longer! I luv Dom as well so of course he's gonna come. Hehe Dom radar(legofiancee. if u read the other shout outs u might understand.)... Hehe. I'm hyper....
White-wolf 2- ummmmm I don't kno if Daine (A/N sp? yay) knows Dom but in this case she has formed a rescue mission w/ the Knights own and I'm gonna say that they kno each other. Its my little world. so I think its easier that they do... thanx for the review! please r&r again. Do you want fries with that? lol sry.
ebec- I am evil... u say evil like its a bad thing... haha ya i kno i'm evil but it really adds to the story. at least I'm not a really really uber evil person who refuses to update for like 1 year. I'm updating (or at least writing this ) two days after the 3rd chappie. (I've just begun writing this again. I was SO lazy. I apologize profusely your Highness. ) I'm really glad u reviewed even tho u don't normally- its great 2 have a review convert- (i'll explain if u e-mail me) btw, I like weird plot lines- as long as u can understand them I'll keep on writing them. that's just how I am. ok. long response to an awesum and long review! keep on reviewing!
dizzy izzy- Your wish is my command- I will not only slow it down and change Daine's spelling of her name, I will also post this very very soon! keep on reviewing!
legofiance- I really like ur sn- could u tell me wut its from? (i'm thinking legolas's fiancee but that's me! (i love him)) I have the dom- radar too and love the KELDOM things so.,.... I'm writing them! hope u like it!
Lady Bee- I is glad that u like this... I is glad that it is good so far... I will update soon!
and last but never never never least- my happy happy reviewer Treanz-Alyce- U ROCK MY SOX!!!!!!!!! thank u thank u thank u for reviewing and a beautiful and long review it was. THANX for the technical advise (is that how 2 spell it?) I've changed that setting. And I'm really really happy u like it. I like it too. I live to please people like u! thank u thank u thank u.
all right- to every other wonderful person who wants to review I adore you and please please do. you don't kno how happy Dinah (me in the 3rd person) is when wonderful people like you review. i'm very sorry to anyone I may have missed- I apologize profusely.
Lastly- the disclaimer- I do not own Tamora pierces work. I would love to keep Dom for myself but Ms. pierce was selfish and kept him for herself. WAHHHHHHH righty so I don't own anything- please don't sue me
Alright- on with the next chappie!
A recap of the end of last chapter- The next morning Kel was woken as the sun rose by a sharp tapping on the stone next to her head. She looked up, startled and found herself in contact with a man's chest. Blushing from the proximity, Kel pushed herself from Neal and looked around, bleary eyed for the source of the noise. Near her body, an enormous sparrow was patiently eyeing Neal's sleeping form. As Kel rose, the sparrow looked up and its head morphed into that of the Wild mage Daine. "Hello Kel." The face said. "Daine!" Kel whispered breathlessly, "How did you know where we were?" "No time for explanations now. She said, eyeing Neal. "You'd better wake up your lover over there so he can hear he plan" Kel flushed angrily "He is not my lover!" she whispered fiercely. "Dom will be glad to hear that." Daine said as Kel roused the sleepy Neal. "What do you mean by that?" Kel asked, astonished. "Never mind. I'm sure he will tell you" Daine answered mysteriously and began to relate that plan to Kel and Neal.
After Kel, Neal and Daine had poured sufficiently over the map and formed a plan in accordance to the one pre formed by the Own, they bid goodbye to Daine and watched as she flew out of the window and up to the brightening dawn sky.
Kel began to clean Neal's wounds where he hadn't the power to heal himself and unwrapped the bandages lest the guards realized that the "prostitute" (am I allowed 2 say this?) in the room was endowed with enough strength to heal Neal day in and day out even on such strict food rations. Neal winced as she slowly ripped yet another bandage off his sensitive skin, wetting it first to dislodge it a bit.
Kel had the brunt of the plan- she was to attack the guards who came to take Neal away to his torture. After, she would have to help both her and Neal into Scanran warrior garb and smuggle out of the palace through the passages described in the map and out into the open air, Kel hoped that the soldiers would have some of the local currency of Scollars (Scanra dollars) so that she and Neal could meet Dom and his company in the inn where they were staying without arising too much suspicion. All Neal had to do was look good at the pub and not keel over and die in the escape. Hmmph. leave it to the man to think of the easiest thing to do in a desperate plan. (I don't mean it! really! most of my friends are guys!)
She sat in a kisea, a Yamani position of relaxation (A/N kisea is really hebrew for seat) and mulled over the moves she had learned and how to use them as the guard came to take Neal away. She realized that she could pierce through the groin area of the armor with her knee, inflicting severe pain to her victim while using the least effort herself. She planned every move then pushed aside the wood shavings covering the floor and went over the escape plan, looking for somewhere where she would find a weapon.
Soon, Neal was awake and they lay there whispering until they heard the clunk of the guard's armor. Quickly they covered the escape mat and put their plan into action, hugging and kissing madly so the guards would not suspect anything.
When the guards came to the grate of the dungeon they leered and tittered at the sight before their eyes. it was not until they saw the whip marks on Neal's back that they remembered that they had a job to do. Unlocking the grate, they strode boastfully into the room and pulled Kel off Neal. Almost instantly they found themselves either crouched over in pain from Kel's kick or knocked to the floor from Neals underhand.
Kel and Neal quickly dressed in the guard's clothes and began to find their way up into the castle after binding the now naked guards and covering their mouths. Soon, the dungeon doors closed with a final bang and Neal and Kel shared a collective sigh of relief. Wending their way up winding staircases, Neal found a small nook in which he noticed a large stick and handed it to Kel, arming himself only with the sword he found near a fallen guard.
Soon, Neal and Kel found themselves breathing fresh air, they looked up and found themselves in a market place. Behind them they could hear the clang of an alarm bell that signified that the prisoners had escaped. They looked at each other and swore, running hard without knowing where they were going.
As they panted down the narrow alleys of the Scanra capital, Neal and Kel were suddenly tripped by a piece of wood looking conspicuously like a glaive. A net was thrown over them then a powder that instantly put them to sleep.
And now Dinah becomes evil again (lol ebec) and will stop at this. if I get 15 new reviews i will update really soon.
OK. I'M TRYING TO CALM DOWN. Its my first fanfic anc that was an AWESUM response. so: I'm gonna write my next chappie and give it 2 u guys in the next few days- I put my 3rd chappie up on the 9th so u r all in for a treat- I'm typing another up just 2 days later- a major accomplishment for me cuz I'm lazy.
so- thank you muchly (english term) to:
Wake-Robin- thanx! u rock!
popsicle- Thanx! I've just got out my book and yes! indeedy it is Daine. thanx for the awesum review! I didn't kno how 2 spell it. Glad you caught me on it.
Beccs- I promise- I'll make this one longer! I luv Dom as well so of course he's gonna come. Hehe Dom radar(legofiancee. if u read the other shout outs u might understand.)... Hehe. I'm hyper....
White-wolf 2- ummmmm I don't kno if Daine (A/N sp? yay) knows Dom but in this case she has formed a rescue mission w/ the Knights own and I'm gonna say that they kno each other. Its my little world. so I think its easier that they do... thanx for the review! please r&r again. Do you want fries with that? lol sry.
ebec- I am evil... u say evil like its a bad thing... haha ya i kno i'm evil but it really adds to the story. at least I'm not a really really uber evil person who refuses to update for like 1 year. I'm updating (or at least writing this ) two days after the 3rd chappie. (I've just begun writing this again. I was SO lazy. I apologize profusely your Highness. ) I'm really glad u reviewed even tho u don't normally- its great 2 have a review convert- (i'll explain if u e-mail me) btw, I like weird plot lines- as long as u can understand them I'll keep on writing them. that's just how I am. ok. long response to an awesum and long review! keep on reviewing!
dizzy izzy- Your wish is my command- I will not only slow it down and change Daine's spelling of her name, I will also post this very very soon! keep on reviewing!
legofiance- I really like ur sn- could u tell me wut its from? (i'm thinking legolas's fiancee but that's me! (i love him)) I have the dom- radar too and love the KELDOM things so.,.... I'm writing them! hope u like it!
Lady Bee- I is glad that u like this... I is glad that it is good so far... I will update soon!
and last but never never never least- my happy happy reviewer Treanz-Alyce- U ROCK MY SOX!!!!!!!!! thank u thank u thank u for reviewing and a beautiful and long review it was. THANX for the technical advise (is that how 2 spell it?) I've changed that setting. And I'm really really happy u like it. I like it too. I live to please people like u! thank u thank u thank u.
all right- to every other wonderful person who wants to review I adore you and please please do. you don't kno how happy Dinah (me in the 3rd person) is when wonderful people like you review. i'm very sorry to anyone I may have missed- I apologize profusely.
Lastly- the disclaimer- I do not own Tamora pierces work. I would love to keep Dom for myself but Ms. pierce was selfish and kept him for herself. WAHHHHHHH righty so I don't own anything- please don't sue me
Alright- on with the next chappie!
A recap of the end of last chapter- The next morning Kel was woken as the sun rose by a sharp tapping on the stone next to her head. She looked up, startled and found herself in contact with a man's chest. Blushing from the proximity, Kel pushed herself from Neal and looked around, bleary eyed for the source of the noise. Near her body, an enormous sparrow was patiently eyeing Neal's sleeping form. As Kel rose, the sparrow looked up and its head morphed into that of the Wild mage Daine. "Hello Kel." The face said. "Daine!" Kel whispered breathlessly, "How did you know where we were?" "No time for explanations now. She said, eyeing Neal. "You'd better wake up your lover over there so he can hear he plan" Kel flushed angrily "He is not my lover!" she whispered fiercely. "Dom will be glad to hear that." Daine said as Kel roused the sleepy Neal. "What do you mean by that?" Kel asked, astonished. "Never mind. I'm sure he will tell you" Daine answered mysteriously and began to relate that plan to Kel and Neal.
After Kel, Neal and Daine had poured sufficiently over the map and formed a plan in accordance to the one pre formed by the Own, they bid goodbye to Daine and watched as she flew out of the window and up to the brightening dawn sky.
Kel began to clean Neal's wounds where he hadn't the power to heal himself and unwrapped the bandages lest the guards realized that the "prostitute" (am I allowed 2 say this?) in the room was endowed with enough strength to heal Neal day in and day out even on such strict food rations. Neal winced as she slowly ripped yet another bandage off his sensitive skin, wetting it first to dislodge it a bit.
Kel had the brunt of the plan- she was to attack the guards who came to take Neal away to his torture. After, she would have to help both her and Neal into Scanran warrior garb and smuggle out of the palace through the passages described in the map and out into the open air, Kel hoped that the soldiers would have some of the local currency of Scollars (Scanra dollars) so that she and Neal could meet Dom and his company in the inn where they were staying without arising too much suspicion. All Neal had to do was look good at the pub and not keel over and die in the escape. Hmmph. leave it to the man to think of the easiest thing to do in a desperate plan. (I don't mean it! really! most of my friends are guys!)
She sat in a kisea, a Yamani position of relaxation (A/N kisea is really hebrew for seat) and mulled over the moves she had learned and how to use them as the guard came to take Neal away. She realized that she could pierce through the groin area of the armor with her knee, inflicting severe pain to her victim while using the least effort herself. She planned every move then pushed aside the wood shavings covering the floor and went over the escape plan, looking for somewhere where she would find a weapon.
Soon, Neal was awake and they lay there whispering until they heard the clunk of the guard's armor. Quickly they covered the escape mat and put their plan into action, hugging and kissing madly so the guards would not suspect anything.
When the guards came to the grate of the dungeon they leered and tittered at the sight before their eyes. it was not until they saw the whip marks on Neal's back that they remembered that they had a job to do. Unlocking the grate, they strode boastfully into the room and pulled Kel off Neal. Almost instantly they found themselves either crouched over in pain from Kel's kick or knocked to the floor from Neals underhand.
Kel and Neal quickly dressed in the guard's clothes and began to find their way up into the castle after binding the now naked guards and covering their mouths. Soon, the dungeon doors closed with a final bang and Neal and Kel shared a collective sigh of relief. Wending their way up winding staircases, Neal found a small nook in which he noticed a large stick and handed it to Kel, arming himself only with the sword he found near a fallen guard.
Soon, Neal and Kel found themselves breathing fresh air, they looked up and found themselves in a market place. Behind them they could hear the clang of an alarm bell that signified that the prisoners had escaped. They looked at each other and swore, running hard without knowing where they were going.
As they panted down the narrow alleys of the Scanra capital, Neal and Kel were suddenly tripped by a piece of wood looking conspicuously like a glaive. A net was thrown over them then a powder that instantly put them to sleep.
And now Dinah becomes evil again (lol ebec) and will stop at this. if I get 15 new reviews i will update really soon.
