YAY so far I've got 11 of the reviews I wanted. If and when I get 4 more I will continue, To the 11 incredible people that were kool enuff to review for me I thank you profusely and to the people that are just sitting on the edge of their seat waiting for me to write the next chappie so they can jump in and review, go ahead and do it!

Ok shout outs-

To:

Ebec- no prob! I luv reviewing even tho I haven't done much signed reviewing. I'm very glad to have a convert- I was converted to writing fanfics cuz of the awesum stuff on the site. I promise, Dom will come too (I'm surprised you didn't get sum of my foreshadowing ah well.) He will be here soon. Thanx for the review.

PoisonMoon- there has been much speculation as to whether the fic is Kel/Neal or Kel/Dom. I promise its Kel/Dom and the friendship between Kel and Neal is strictly platonic with a little bit of unplatonic jokes... hehe (I have 2 do them. It wouldn't be fun with out Thank you about the other comments. I promise I love Dom as well so I'll make it Kel/Dom. Thanx!

Wake-Robin- by the time I post this I'll hopefully get the 15 reviews. I was incredibly pleased that I got so many the first day (I got 10) and hope it will keep on going. Glad u wanna read more. Thanx for the review!

Treanz-Alyce- Shall I compare thee with a summers day? No, you review more. Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May and summers reviews hath far too short a date. Sometime too evilly the eye of heaven shines.... Hehe Shakespeare. The long and short of it is that u are an AWESUM reviewer and I wish every1 were as very kool as you. (Although every1 else is pretty kool.) SHE HAS REVIEWED EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!

Alanna-of-Olau- thank you. I've never got an "this is incredibly cool" review. I appreciate it. Thanx for the review!

White-wolf2- Yum... green tea ice cream...yummy... lol I like the review- sweet and sour sauce and fries hmmmm never tried it. Might do that soon. But green tea ice cream is better hehe we r acting like advertisements! Thanx for the review

PsychoLioness13- GASP! You shall see what's gonna happen next! Keep on reviewing.

Legofinace LEGOLAS IS MIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I own him and Orlando. Not for you. But you can keep on reviewing keep on reviewing keep on reviewing (Finding Nemo)

Figil- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I promise! Its gonna be KEL/DOM!!!!!!!! I like Neal but its only platonic I promise! I apologize profusely to you, I am but a humble servant unknowing in the mysterious ways of fan fiction. Don't hurt me... sob

Imogenhm- I'm sorry but I have no idea where your name came from. Can you fill me in? thanx for the review. As your favorite slave, I am updating.

Popsicle-. I thank you kindly for reviewing. I update solely for you (and the rest of the people who ask me to update.)lol.

dancerkel12- thank you for the review! I'm glad you like the story. I will definitely keep writing as long as you keep reviewing. I like the penname!

Missa5- thank you! I'm glad you love the story1 keep reviewing. ' nerdlette- thanx for the review. I'm about to read ur story as we speak (or type as the case might be.) oh ! I can't see it. Ok I'll wait .

strgzr hiya my beta-ee! Thanks for the great review!

Flashyfirebird You rock my sox!!!!!!!!! See u in science class! lol

Btw, this is only reviews from the 4rth chapter so if you have reviewed some other chappie,, thank you!

HEY EVERYONE, I HAVE A SECOND FANFIC CALLED MIXED UP GIRL IN THE HARRY POTTER SECTION OF FANFIC.NET PLEASE CHECK IT OUT. WE REALLY WANT REVIEWS!

Ok. Onwards.

Disclaimer: All characters and some plot mentions belong to the highly esteemed goon show... just kidding. Make that Tamora Peirce. I don't own anything but the plot. And my weird brain.

Recap of last chappie:

As they panted down the narrow alleys of the Scanra capital, Neal and Kel were suddenly tripped by a piece of wood looking conspicuously like a glaive. A net was thrown over them then a powder that instantly put them to sleep.

When they woke up they were bound to each other and gagged. The sun had barely moved so they knew that it was the same day. Still in the troublesome guards clothes, Kel and Neal squirmed and looked around. The guard heard the noise and glared at them, telling them to keep still. Kel stared at him that was a face she hadn't seen in a while.

"Merric!" she shouted joyfully. He jumped and looked closer at his captives then ripped off their gags. Neal winced a bit and Kel laughed.

"Aww poor baby Neal!" she teased.

"Hey! I've been through a lot lately!" he defended. Kel went suddenly serious and apologized, blushing. Merric watched the bantering with glee then pulled one then the other into a huge bear hug, squeezing the air out of both before setting them each down on the ground. He walked over to the cupboard and retrieved them some clothing.

"Sorry Kel." He said, "it seems that you are going to have to use Dom's shirt and breeches because we don't have any others."

"That's ok." Kel said, almost too gleefully. Merric and Neal glanced at her amused.

"What?" she defended. They dismissed the comment and started to catch up.(like on news and in Neal's case gossip) Suddenly Neal smiled maniacally and Kel rolled her eyes.

"What now Neal?" Kel sighed

Neal rubbed his hands together gleefully and said "why don't we surprise them. You know, we hide and Merric can say the prisoners escaped or something."

Merric seemed to like the idea and arranged the chains that had been holding the two "soldiers" to look like they had escaped.

As Merric did that Kel and Neal found a perfect hiding place near the muslin that covered the makeshift window. They look out the "window" and saw...

And here I will stop. I promised tons of people I'd be done w/ this before the end of vacation and it's the last day. REVIEWING IS WONDERFUL FOR THE SOUL!!!!!!!!!!! Please do so. Reviewing will cause me 2 wave my arms and jump up and down and get off the stage. Thanx. Superdebook