Hi guys! Wow. I've been a naughty author. I'm incredibly sorry. No excuse. I'm writing more now and if I get a good amount of reviews I'll write my next chapter this weekend (its Thursday now.)

Disclaimer: Does anyone really own anything? I mean, you might own a book but did you make the book? Does anyone have real possession over anything? If you ask me, the tree actually owns the book. The earth owns the metal that is used in a typewriter and a computer. Hence, no one really owns anything and so we can't claim we do. Anyway, I don't own the characters (J.K. Rowling seems to think she does). Don't sue me because the trees and the earth own my money.

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EVERYONE OWES ALIANNE COOPER AND SECRET AGENT ANGEL A BIG THANK YOU BECAUSE THEY REMINDED ME I NEEDED TO UPDATE!!!!!

Alianne Cooper - Thanks for the review. I had forgotten (kinda) to update because I've been writing all these fanfics in my notebook and haven't typed them up. I'm updating now tho!

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lady of the rogues- HEY!!!! Stop telling every1 my plot. Lol jk. I love good Kel/Dom's as well. (hey does that mean mine is good?) Heres the update. You'll see what they saw. (that sounds funny. Tee hee hee.

PoisonMoon- WHEEEEEEE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!

Viking-rulz- no cliffies? Wahhhhhh here: we'll make a deal. If I don't do a cliffie and I get lots of reviews I'll write fewer cliffies alright? Good.

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Tris the Weather Witch- AAAAAAAHHHHH NOT A BLACK CRISP!!!!!! At least let me be purple? Heres the update. Hope u like it. No more sugar for you. Only for meeeeeeeeee.

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kate the tigress what do you people have against cliffies? Jeez. Lol jk. I'm updating now. Glad u like the story.

rootless Californian Ok. No more cliffies for a while ok? Just keep on reading and and reviewing and I'll try to purge my mind of evil cliffie thoughts.

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secret agent angel WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE HAPPEEEE NOW!!!!!! I GOT INTERNET BACK!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad u love my story but I want u 2 beg. Pouts. Here's the update. Hope you like this too!

seriously guys, this is only 12 reviews. If I get more reviews I'll continue the story. Thanx, Superdebook

Recap of last chapter: Neal rubbed his hands together gleefully and said "why don't we surprise them. You know, we hide and Merric can say the prisoners escaped or something."

Merric seemed to like the idea and arranged the chains that had been holding the two "soldiers" to look like they had escaped.

As Merric did that Kel and Neal found a perfect hiding place near the muslin that covered the makeshift window. They look out the "window" and saw...

Dom's Point of View

I couldn't concentrate through spy duty today. All I could think about was those two Scanra soldiers they had caught this morning. They had both seemed... so familiar, like he knew them. But that couldn't be the case, I make a point of avoiding familiarity with the enemy. (A/N: I couldn't help putting in a bit of POTC!!!)
Dom was aroused from his ponderings by a loud cry.
"The prisoners have escaped!!!!!!!!!" Yelled a voice from the main gates." Find the prisoners!!!!"
It occurred to Dom that the escaped prisoners might be Neal and Kel and he raced back to headquarters.

When Dom arrived, the group was just sitting down to lunch. He stood there for a few minutes, trying to catch his breath before speaking.

"Some prisoners gasp have just escaped from the gasp prison and...." He managed to gasp out before they all started getting excited and crowded around him, further increasing his difficulty in breathing. "I think we need to form a search party." He said.
As soon as he had finished explaining his plan, he found himself again surrounded by people. He decided to take all the help he could get and left one soldier, Merric with the prisoners.

5 hours later

The search party came back sullen and depressed, with each person taking the loss differently. Yuki was sobbing into any arm that would hold her. "I've lost my one and only love AND my best friend. How could this have happened?" She wailed. The soldiers patted her back uncomfortably, not used to emotional females.
Dom, on the other hand, was completely sober. He was staring straight ahead and ignoring anything that got it his way, choosing to knock into it instead of walking around it.
From their view at the window Kel and Neal could see the different reactions their friends were having towards their loss. Kel watched Dom interestedly. He had never really shown that much emotion towards Neal but he was really taking Neal's loss hard. She loved the opportunity to watch him but was sad that he was so depressed. Neal caught her gazing at Dom and snickered loudly. Kel silently pointed at Yuki and had to hold Neal back from running to embrace her. As the search party grew nearer, Dom hung his head lower and the men had to take away Dom's weapons for fear that he would hurt himself. It was as if he had just closed himself off from the world and could not fathom going back. Many of the soldiers exchanged knowing glances. They all saw how Dom's eyes sparkled when he was around Kel, how his whole personality changed in a matter of minutes. They hoped to find her soon, if not for her sake, for their commander's sake. The search party entered their headquarters and were dismayed at the sight of Merric tied and bound with the cords they had used on the soldiers. Then they saw two pairs of boots peeking out from under a curtain. One of the soldiers trudged over to the curtain and pulled it back.

(A/N, and here is where I would stop IF I was going to do a cliffie. However, because I proposed a deal to a few of my reviewers that I would not do a cliffie this time if they reviewed, I will continue.)

Everyone stood stunned as they looked at the very two people that they had just been searching for. Yuki was the first to recover and rushed upon Neal fussing over him. Kel snorted. "Get a room you two" she deadpanned. Neal shot her a look that clearly said not now. Kel was surprised when she was roughly clapped on the back by all the soldiers who were glad she was back to take care of their commander. She smiled at them and then caught a look at Dom. Dom was standing in the entrance of the headquarters with his mouth wide open and his eyes staring disbelievingly at Kel. All of a sudden he broke into a run, disregarding any thing in his path for the second time that day. Kel was again surprised as she was pulled into a huge bear hug with Dom who seemed to want to make sure she was alive by squeezing the life out of her. "Get a room you two" snickered Neal and the whole assembly laughed.

(A/N I think I'll end this chapter here. I've made a happy chappie (lol it rhymes!!!!) and its not a cliffie. THIS WILL NOT HOWEVER BE THE END!!!!!!! I have lots more wonderful things planned. Now, I must go to school (I finished this fanfic at 6:57 in the morning. ))

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL ONLY WRITE MORE IF I GET 15 REVIEWS. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!! Cheers,
Superdee