BJF's note

Yeah Sorry for the extreme stupidity of the last chapter.but it's necessary cause something going to happen and Peter's going to become a badass ticked off superhero well for awhile. But yeah I felt like making a clone of myself and punching it to a bloody pulp after the last chapter. I've been busy all week also with track and off season football and school and church and my coach is making me run six miles a day wow that's annoying. But here's the next chapter. Stupid coach. Yeah I say yeah way to much.

Twilight is a pain

Peter ran down the hall after lunch his backpack was flying back as he hurried to his Literature class. He had to skip three periods when his sense had gone crazy and his head began to throb uncontrollably. Now he was hurrying to get to a period before he was caught. Apparently a small crime which he found and stopped had caused his sense to ring, but he assumed it had been screwed up when he'd been hit in the head with a baseball bat the night before and so had caused a glitch.

As he ran down a short blond girl caught him. "There you are, Peter where were you in lab,"

"Oh sorry Felicia there was a uh disturbance," Peter said covering his absence.

"A disturbance, well must of been a pretty long disturbance, I can't finish the report without a lab partner and plus I had to dissect a I don't know what it was, all by myself. By the way this is the second time it's happened not counting the week when your uncle was killed."

"Yeah, yeah I know sorry now please I got to get to another class before I get to detention for skipping and really you didn't need to bring up my uncle." Felicia felt a little guilt for what she said.

"Okay sorry Peter, but don't do it again."

"Felicia there's two more weeks left in school. I highly doubt it's going to happen again."

"Yeah okay, right wait we've still got to do a lab report."

"Lab report, yeah oh right of course, we can do it after school in the library. But we got to do it fast I have well me, Harry, and MJ are going out to eat," he said.

"Finally," Felicia said.

"What," Peter asked.

"I've seen you ever since like when you've been starring at her. In lab, algebra, and history when your head's not implanted in the book asleep."

"Oh yeah, of course well it's nothing like that it's just well it's just like friendly, I mean like she'd like me I'm yeah never mind,"

"Whatever meet me in the library after school okay."

"Right see you sorry about missing lab."

After school Peter reluctantly headed towards the library sighing. He rounded the corner and stepped into Flash who startled took a step back. Then his face changed to a mad look.

"Parker." he said recalling the events of the day before.

"Hey, uh hi, your still mad. Got it, see ya'," Peter pushed past him and heard a mad grumble. Peter let a slight laugh escape him.

He continued on his way to the school library and opened the door to see Felicia Hardy tapping her foot a little impatiently waiting for Peter at a table.

"Your late, again." She said as Peter stepped in. Thought she was obnoxious Peter felt if his mind wasn't always on MJ he might feel something, but no.

"Yeah sorry Flash, yeah he's kind of pissed," he said.

"Whatever let's hurry up, you know your not the only one with something to do tonight,"

"Wow, you have something tonight that's impossible." he said sarcastically.

She didn't retort, but starred down at the page on the table mumbling the words she read. "Alright what did that just say."

"Let me see, oh yeah here I'll do this part just right the report on the dissecting your the one that did it." She sighed and began writing down the steps of the scientific method.

Thirty minutes later they were done and Peter got up putting his books away. "Alright see you Monday Felicia, I got to go."

"Yeah okay good luck, see you," she said as she gathered her things.

Peter stepped out of the building and saw it was already getting dark. He shivered in the brisk air as he went to catch the bus home. Breathing in he walked out onto the streets people were frantically trying to get home as twilight enveloped the blue sky. He once thought it would be so great to sit on top of a tall building and look at the sun setting as the stars appeared above. Lately he'd been getting to much of it.

He rushed through the traffic walking along the streets to get to a bus stopped. That's when his sense took over. The tingling sensation came back into his head and put vague images into his mind. His head felt as if it was speeding at a million miles per hour as it came into view of three men pulling up to a jewelry store.

Immediately he knew what was happening, he took off running as he dodged in it between lines of traffic. A few angry screams directed toward him, if he wasn't in a hurry he might of stopped and thought about how pissed off he should get since he was heading off to save or stop which ever was needed. He glanced at his watch as his feet kept their steady pace heading for a secluded alley. His watch read five o'clock, he felt relieved knowing he still had an hour before he had to meet at the cafe. Rushing to into the alley way he dropped his backpack hoping he'd remember where it was. He changed quickly and jumped into the air releasing a web line which snagged a building top.

At the same time a truck had pulled up to the store and three men stepped out. Two of them looked normal wearing suits any person in New York would. The other though was covered by a trench coat and a hat that only let silhouette of his face be shown.

"Hurry I'll be outside," the man in the trench coat called as a blue flash escaped the ends of his coat sleeve.

The other two nodded as they walked inside the jewelry store. A few men and women buying gifts for their boy/girl friend. The two men got in line as one slipped the gun from his pocket hiding it from everyone. Then all at once it shot up as he released a bullet to the ceiling of the building.

"Down everyone now," he screamed. The other fired to rounds at the security guards which told them to back off. Then approached the desk grabbing various pieces of jewelry from the tables and stuffing them into bags as he kept his gun wandering around the building.

Outside the man in the trench coat kept his back to the scene in the store. His eyes wandering as a police car pulled up and two officers jumped out and took cover behind their bulletproof doors.

"Put your arms in the air now," the man made a smile concealed by the shadow he kept his face in. Slowly his hands rose as almost simultaneously another flash burst out of the end of his sleeve it was an electric shock released into the air that seized the metal the two cops had they fell to the ground.

By the time Peter reached the adjacent roof of the building the scene was in chaos. Gunshots were heard from inside the building blasting through the glass hitting the police cars.

Peter turned his attention to a man in a trench coat who was standing behind a pillar which apparently the cops were afraid of. Peter didn't make his presence known to anyone around the scene still studying it for possible ways of handling. All at once the man behind the pillar slipped out and Peter sensed an invisible electric shock go through the air towards a police car which it engulfed electrocuting the three police officers around it.

Oh so that's why their afraid of him. He kept his gaze around the scene. Finally he found it. He leaped across to the adjacent roof. and went in through the ventilation system. He slid down a web line and studied the lobby of which he was in.

Two hostiles were inside, one was walking around keeping watch on their hostages. He was uneasy, a little on edge knowing he was trapped. Peter could sense the fear and it made it even easier to creep up.

The other was handling an assault rifle of some kind firing random shots through the window. This is going to be easy. Peter slid down farther coming almost right on top of one of the hostiles. He had his back turned and so Peter took out a hand and shoved his head back against a wall. Then he jumped off the web and punched the criminal in the face. Thus getting rid of the first hostile. But before he was able to recover the other was on top of him. Three bullet flew straight at Peter which he barely dodged as they slammed into the wall. He flipped over the counter and snagged the man gun with a web line. He pulled it away the launched himself at him taking him down.

He stood up as his sense detected a bolt of electricity. Too late unfortunately suddenly he felt a cold sting run through his body. He clenched hard with his teeth as he dodged another one barely escaping its cold grasp.

"Spiderman I've been waiting to meet you for a while."

"Yeah well, ha guess you met me," Peter laughed sarcastically as he shot two webs at the man in the trench coat. But as he did another cold sting ran through his body.

"I'd advise you not to touch me Spiderman, you see a few weeks ago my body under went some changes as you can see."

Peter grasped his pulsing chest. "Yeah I can very well see that, so like what's your name anyway," he said trying to hide his pain. Then another cold shock hit him.

"Shocker if you really want to know."

Peter weakly picked himself up. Okay why didn't my sixth sense warn me that time. Then it buzzed for a late warning. Yeah a little late now, but thanks anyway. He thought.

"Shocker huh, good name fits you well. Personally I'd go for trench man, but Shocker's still pretty good."

Peter's sense warned him of another incoming strike, that he dodged. But as he landed at another spot he found his sense had not stopped ringing. No not again.

He grasped his head as it throbbed the ringing sensations blasting through his brain obviously it had not recovered from the hit with the baseball bat. Then another shock hit him.

"Have you ever felt a cold shock run through your body down your spine andall around,"

Peter conjured a faint laugh. "Huh I have now." He said breathing rapidly.

"I have Spiderman, I feel it all the time. Never ceasing ever going. Do you know how it feels."

"No, but judging by your crappy attitude I'm guessing pretty bad."

"Your a very funny character such a shame." Peter tried to stand as two powerful shocks struck his chest and he flew into a wall sending debris and brick on top of him.

MJ walked up in front of the cafe, and saw no one she knew. Looking around she saw a fancy sports car drive up. Harry. She thought as she found her assumption to be right. Harry stepped out. "Yeah thanks for the ride dad," he said.

He walked up to MJ. "Hey Peter here yet."

"No and I didn't see him at his house either, you seen him,"

"No he told me at school he had to go finish a lab report with Felicia, but he said he'd be done by four thirty. He's probably just late let's go in," Harry said.

"Okay," MJ smiled walking in.

Where am I. Peter's eyes danced up and down. All he could see was a dark mass in front of him. He tried moving his back, but found it hard to do he was caught underneath something. He tried to recall what happened. His chest was pounding and he felt a cold sting running through him all at once he remembered. Oh yeah Shocker.

He found one of his arms was free to an extent he could move it faintly where as the other was stuck. He grasped a cold hard and round object. He tried to pull it back finding it hard to do.

He decided his first priority was to get is other arm free. He moved his free hand slowly to his other arm. It was caught underneath at least ten heavy bricks. He began moving them one by one to the corner of the small space he was confined in by rubble. In a few slow minutes his arm was free. He slowly began to force his back up with his hands. Rubble began to shake and he broke free.

He was out, finally. He broke his legs free as a few praises lifted up from the crowd. He paid no attention, but ran out the door and shot a web he was off.

Harry and MJ were sat down and had began eating still waiting for Peter.

"Hey MJ," Harry said a little nervously.

"Yeah," she answered.

"Um well there's been something I've uh been meaning to ask you,"

Peter flew furiously through the streets in his normal clothes concealed by the darkness of the night. Rain had begun to fall and he was late. Really late, it was six forty five, but he still was planning to get their and tell him why he was late.

His back and everything was in great pain. He ignored it though as he landed in the parking lot by the cafe. He straightened up his clothes and walked inside as his hopes were suddenly destroyed. MJ and Harry were in the middle of a kiss. Peter wanted to die; he wanted to go jump off a building disappear.

He turned around and walked out he was lost, angry, sad. He didn't think he walked away out into the dark all by himself once again.