It's been FOREVAH and a day since I've updated this. I don't care if I've already answered your review...it's gettin reanswered! So for our patented (not really) review responses heres...our random muse of the update...Veiwtiful Joe!
VJ-Henshin a go go baby yeah!
Scratch that cause he won't say too much else. Our random muse for the day is ohhh, let me check my muse list here. My highly tested method cannot fail!
Random-You're just flipping a coin over and over aren't you.
...So yeah, I'll answer the reveiws.
Wonderman- Yeah thanks wonderman, you're awesome too! Thanks for the flame! It's a little cold.
wolfy129- w00t thanks!
Shikage-tsaya-Thanks
Garetfire-Thanks man, mud does get iritating, eh? I'll take your advice for spellcheck, as from everyone. I've learned how to spell over these past few...months v.v;;.
Wolfy129(again)-Sorry for leaving you on that horrible cliff for these last few...months. Err yeah, hope you like the update!
Favri the Fisher-Awesome man, I've learned how to spell/learn to write in English decently. Thanks for the review!
Steamshipperlover-Yeah, it's kinda like that. Garet tries to save Mia, gets hurt, and he's left hanging with a hurt...something, close to Mia.
Bethany-Thanks
ErkTheSlayer-For some reason your pen name looks...familiar. Eh maybe it's just me.
Aya,angelofmars-Thanks, I agree!
(NOTE-despite all my claims of being able to spell, look out for spelling and grammar errors. Sorry for the trouble!)(NOTE2-Expect a short chapter)
Mia was still frozen in fear, Saturos glaring at her contemptuously, as she slowly collapsed to the ground. Raising a hand majesticly, embers gathering around his finger tips, an icy smile contorting upon his facial features. Suddenly he muttered, "Fireball." as the gathered crimson energy rushed from his hand, converging towards her. The young adept princess sheilded her face, bracing herself for the impact of the glowing projectiles. Suddenly she felt a puff of wind blow past her, and a sudden grunt of exertion. As she glanced up slightly, she saw Garet standing over her, facing towards Mia. A gasp slowly emitted from her, as he grinned crookedly at her. Swaying slighty, the world began to blurr over. The last thing he heard was from the blue villian. "Is this the one?"
Garet woke up, face down on a soft feathery matress. It seemed warmer than it usually did in the frozen kingdom of Imil. Garet rolled over, only to be met with a burning pain in his back. Suddenly memories flooded back to the young fire adept. The burning wounds upon his back made any move agony. Lancing pains shot through him, a cry of agony ringing out. "Garet, what's wrong, and why are you here?" Kay said, Garets older sister. Garet sat up gingerly, avoiding his burns. "It's nothin...wheres Isaac? Ivan? Jena? Where, wheres Mia!" Kay looked at him strangely, before answering him the best she could. "Well, um. Isaac and Ivan are with grandpa at the sanctum, but I don't know about Jenna, haven't seen her since before she left, and Mia? Do you mean the princess of Imil? I've NEVER seen her! Now...how did you get here!" Garet limped out quickly, trying to avoid answering how he was there.
Throwing the door wide open, Garet limped towards Ivan, Isaac, and his grandfather, the mayor of Vale, sitting on the ornately carved benched inside the sanctum. Seeing him, the three suddenly became silent. As Garet carefully sat down amidst them. "So...what's happened while I've been out?" "Later, first we've got to get your back healed with psyenergy. You took some nasty burns grandson." said the mayor, beckoning a healer towards them. The monkish healer nodded holding his hand to Garets burned back, a blue aura surrouding the healer. The monk's eyes closed slowly, as the aura suddenly transferred to Garet, before seaping into him, the pain and injuring soothed instantly. Isaac hesitated slightly before beginning as the healer left. "Garet we were just about to tell your grandpa what happened. You might wanna know."
"Garet, when we made it into the inner sanctum, two Proxians named Saturos and Mendari were waiting for us with a man named Felix. It seems as if they had been watching us, and were waiting for us. They have been trying to steal something called the elemental stars, items that can rerelease the true power of alchemy and djinn. It seems that an old proxian prophecy specified you, me, Ivan, and a few others, to take this on, and save the kingdom of Prox from incoming doom. They took Jenna, Kraden, and Mia. Said they would keep them for insurance. I'm not sure if this is true, because the Proxians were the ones that told me. Anyway, we've got to go to all four rocks and all four lighthouses. Gaia, Aqua, Magma, and Air's rock and the four elemental lighthouses. Did you get all of that?"
Garet stared at Isaac blankly before replying "Say what?"
The citadel of Prox was practically impentatrable. The capital of the frozen kingdom was also named Prox, surrounded by a mighty frost and flame proof wall. Being masters of craft, giant anti-siege weapons along with a network of tunnels underneath made the frozen wastelands capital unpenatrable. On one end of the city, the great Mars Lighthouse rose in it's magnificient splendor, it's top frozen and nigh unreachable. On the other end was the citadel itself. Rivaling the top of the lighthouse itself, adepts of all four elements had been brought in, to repel all elements. The citadel had a lsight golden sheen to it, as if proceeding a great age of prosperity. On the second highest floor sat the what should have been the rulers throne. The true king and queen of Prox was down below the citadel, in the horrible legendary dungeons, his throne usurped by none other than Saturos and Mendari. Their wicked minds were currently thinking up new schemes, and their current one was an insideous masterpiece, to restore the true laws of alchemy, sieze the golden djinni, and rule all of Weyard!
I had to end it on that. Sorry for any melodramtics or anything. Explanations will come, so don't worry about it. Heh hope the spelling and grammar was better! Oh do you like my little pet? It's a purple button named review. Pet it please.
