Disclaimer—This is my first fan fic, so I hope it's okay. It's based on the anime InuYasha. Please give me constructive criticism, but no bashing/flaming please. I wish to add pictures to my deviantART account. I will add links when I do.
InuYasha and all related characters © Rumiko Takahashi
Chiarri © Me, Melanie Patterson, AKA TheSparks, otherwise Sparks
A group of 5 people were walking over a hill one was holding a cat. The hill was gaped in flowers of different varieties and colors.
"How beautiful!" someone had called out.
A male with silver-white hair and dog-like ears and golden eyes looked sharply to his left.
"What's wrong InuYasha?" a girl with long black hair and brown eyes wearing a white top with a red bow and a green skirt asked lovingly.
"I smell the blood of humans," he said while motioning them to go in that direction.
They made their way to a village. Many bodies lay on the floor, sheeted with blood.
"It looks as if another massacre has taken place!" exclaimed another girl with long black hair and brown eyes. She wore a kimono, the top was pink and the bottom was green.
Another male, this time with black hair wearing a flowing outfit and a staff in hand, noticed something to his right out of the corner of his gray eyes.
"Look it's a girl. I'll go attend to her needs," he said nonchalantly.
"MIROKU!" the other four yelled in chorus.
"You know every time you go womanizing, you lose all of Kagome and Sango's trust!" a small being with a fox-like tail and feet had told.
"Shippou's right..." Kagome said, a little upset.
"Come on, get serious guys," Sango started, "She just lost her whole village."
"Doesn't that seem peculiar to you? That she's the only one around?" Miroku questioned.
"You're right Miroku!" Kagome said.
They made their way over to the girl, who appeared to be praying over a grave. She had long brown hair, which was braided and reached to her lower back. She wore a purple kimono, spots of blood all over it. She looked over at the visitors and her blue eyes became visible.
"Hey, girl!" InuYasha yelled to her.
She ran up to them.
"What happened around here?" Shippou asked the girl.
She knelt down to Shippou's height.
"A strong demon by the name of Ryogata assassinated my village," she began, "I'm the only one left and I'm attempting to bury all of the bodies."
"Oh great! And I bet you want us to help, right?" InuYasha asked quite rudely.
The girl looked up at him. She had a look of shock on her face.
She whispered to herself, "Wait...white hair, dog ears, arrogant attitude, red clothing..."
Then her face lit up.
"You're InuYasha!"
She quickly took a look at his sword.
"Wait, that sword isn't the sword of death- it couldn't be!"
"What? Who are you calling arrogant?" he screamed. "And don't refer to me as a dog!"
InuYasha wielded his Tetsusaiga. Then it transformed.
"You are InuYasha after all!" she exclaimed. "I doubted you for a moment."
Curiously, Miroku asked, "How have you heard of InuYasha?"
InuYasha made a stuck-up look. "I guess my reputation precedes me."
They all sighed.
"There goes his ego," Kagome said.
InuYasha gave her a cold look.
"I can't believe it! It's you! Can you help me?"
"Just show me where this Ryogata resides." InuYasha demanded.
"...Sure, okay," she answered, a little confused.
They walked to a path on the North side of the village. They made their way over several hills, and around a mountain. They approached a cave and the girl pointed to it.
"Leave this to me," InuYasha said, "I can handle it."
Then he smelt something in the air.
"Wait a minute," he said.
He went up to a massive demon. It had three horns on its head and it had three tails. Then he kicked it.
"It's already dead!" He exclaimed.
"Oh, I forgot a little detail. I killed it already."
"THEN WHY THE HELL DID YOU HAVE US COME ALL THE WAY OVER HERE?" InuYasha yelled.
"You killed it?" Sango questioned extremely confused.
InuYasha realized what she had just said.
"Yeah, what did you think? It just keeled over and died?"
"But how?" Kagome asked.
The girl looked down.
"It's a really long story."
Shippou spoke up, "We have time."
"I'll make food and then tell you about it over dinner." The girl said.
They all agreed and she walked ahead of them.
Kagome looked toward Sango and noticed Sango looking back at her.
"Why do you think she's the only one?" Kagome whispered to her.
"I don't know, but we'll eventually find out."
Well, that was chapter one. I hope my writing didn't confuse you. I think it turned out really good. I really needed to revise word choice, grammar, and sentence structure. I think I'll ask some random InuYasha fans at school to revise all my chapters. They watch the show religiously! But I don't know them at all I hope this was enjoyable. Who is this girl? And how did she kill Ryogata? Look forward to chapter two soon!
