Operation D.O.W.N- U.N.D.E.R
Dangerous
Outback
Will
Not
Unleash
New
Devious
Enemies,
Right?
A/N: Sorry I didn't update. My computer didn't work with the crashing and the freezing... Well, anyways the quote of mine saying, "A long chapter. I know." is wrong. I just thought six pages on Microsoft Word would be long. Oh well... I'll be adding 3/4, 1/5 and 2/OC instead of 2/5 and 1/OC. Especially not Lizzie. I don't really like her. Well, thanks for the reviews, I guess. You should make do with what you get, right? Anyways, to answer a few reviews.
J (silence) Quill
2004-08-23
1
Signed
Oo
blush A "REALLY good reviewer", eh? Aw...
Dude!
Fellow Australian fanfic writer person-ish-ness, how shall I start
this and say what I need while maintaining my "REALLY good"
reviewerness? Well, I don't think this is a ripoff of my story,
similar, but not "ripoff", but I'm a little sniffly that
Number Three's still a "rainbow monkey lovin' Sheila"...aw,
but that's okay. But I'm very, very interested in seeing where
this goes, and flattered, so don't feel bad.
First of all, yes I do need help. What websites? Second of all, I'm going to TRY to make this story "SIMILAR" and third of all, just look at how long that review is.
Jon
2004-08-23
1
Anonymous
Numbah One dosen't have hair
Well, Jon, in my story, he does have hair! And doesn't is how I just spelt it there!
Disclaimer: I do not own KND because if I did, why would I be writing a story instead of a FANfic? Besides, I'd be rich, well, kind of.
Thanks to anonymous reviewer 2 lazy 2 log and signed reviewers Fuzzywuzzy 34, Cweek, SilverRainbow223, and Nako-chan. On with the story! (sarcastically) Yay!
The others ran to their rooms to get their presents about ten minutes ago, having time to ask their parents about the trip. How long did it take for Numbuh Three to get candy? Wallabee started to pace around, looking over the last-minute hung streamers and confetti. They were all wearing party hats, which at the sight of Numbuh Four was getting furious, but he started to get calm. After all, it was his soon to be girlfriend's birthday party, well at least that's what Wallabee was thinking. He started to pace around while the others were looking at the door, getting impatient by the second. Numbuh Two started to watch TV and Numbuhs One and Five followed suit. There was an awkward silence, not counting the TV, until Numbuh Four broke it.
"Ah'm gonna go see if Kuki's okay." Numbuh Four said, pointing to the door. He started to leave when the door hit him in the face.
"Hi, you guys!" Kuki yelled, not realizing she left Wallabee knocked out for a few seconds. she had some cake on a plate in her left hand and a bag of decorations in the other.
"Hi, Kuki." Wallabee said, mumbling and speaking gibberish for a while until he sat down in a chair.
"Happy birthday!" Numbuhs One, Two, and Five said, looking at her and then Wallabee again and again.
"Thanks, you guys!" she screamed. Numbuh Four was getting a headache and rubbing a little bump on his forehead, hidden by his blond bangs.
"Wow!" she shouted looking around the room until she saw Wallabee. "Are you okay, Numbuh Four?" she asked, looking at him weirdly.
"Yeah. Great. Happy birthday or whatever." he replied, holding up a gift bag.
"What did you get me, Numbuh Five?" she asked eagerly.
Numbuh Five brought her hands out from behind her back to reveal a green rainbow monkey with ruffled hair and a pipe sticking out from his mouth. Numbuh Three gasped for a while until she asked, "The new Lucky Gold Under The Rainbow Rainbow Monkey?"
"Yeah, the store guy told me this was the latest edition and..." Numbuh five said.
"Thanks!" Kuki screeched as she moved onto Numbuh Four.
"Ummm, can we make mine last?" he asked, blushing uncontrollably.
"Okay, Numbuh Four! Your present will probably be the best." Kuki said, shouting over the snickers of the others.
"What about you, Numbuh Two?" she asked. (A/N: Get it, the rhyming of you and two? Eh, forget it!)
"This!" he said, giving her a blue rainbow monkey with clouds on the stomach.
"Is that the Baby Blue Sky Cloud Rainbow Monkey?" she asked.
"Something like that, I think." he responded.
"What about you Numbuh One?" she asked, moving on.
"Here you go." he said, coughing and giving her a red rainbow monkey with flames on it.
"Is that the Burning Red Flame Lava Rainbow Monkey?" she asked.
"I don't know." he said with a puzzled look on his face.
"Oh well!" she said as she went to Numbuh Four.
"What did you get me, Wally?" she asked with a big smile on her face.
"Yeah, Wally!" Numbuh Two said, laughing.
"'Ere's yeh cruddy present." he said, shoving the gift bag in.
"My passport, a hotel key..." she said as she took the stuff out. "What's this for?"
"Here." he said, giving her the ticket.
"First class?!?!?!" she asked as she had a look of glee on her face.
"Yeah, my parents already agreed to it on the phone, I just have to take a bunch of pictures and stuff." Numbuh Five said.
"My mom says it's okay, too." Numbuh Two said. "Although Tommy REALLY whined about not going."
"My parents have agreed to it as well." Numbuh One said.
"Well, I just have to have my parents agree, too! Bye Wally!" she said, giving him a little kiss on the cheek that made him go red instantly. The door slammed and Hoagie asked, "Got yourself a little girlfriend, huh?"
"SHE'S NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!" Wallabee yelled.
"She must be if you're denying it to such extreme measures." Abby said.
"What?" Numbuh Four asked.
"What she said, Numbuh Four, is that Numbuh Three must be your girlfriend because you always deny it every time we bring it up." Nigel said.
"WHAT?" Wallabee asked.
"Never mind." Hoagie said, sighing and eating some of the leftover birthday cake Kuki brought over.
At Kuki's House
"Back so soon?" her father asked, drying the dishes as her mother was cleaning them.
"Yeah, I thought you were going to spend time with your BOYFRIEND." Mushi said.
"MUSHI!" Kuki yelled.
"What boyfriend?" her father asked.
"He's not my boyfriend but-" Kuki said.
"But in your diary, you said he was so CUTE and..." Mushi said.
"Mushi, you shouldn't read your sister's diary BUT who's your boyfriend?" her mother asked.
"Well..." Kuki said. "His name is Wallabee Beatles."
"Isn't a wallabee an Australian animal?" Kuki's father asked.
"Well, he is Australian." Kuki said.
"Don't I know a Beatles who works near my office?" her mother asked.
"Yeah, he's the one who always brings Wally to 'Bring Your Daughter to Work Day'." Kuki said. They all laughed until Mushi asked, "So, IS he your boyfriend?"
"Maybe..." Kuki said.
"So, why did you come home so early?" her father asked again.
"Oh, yeah! Ummm, he gave me this for my birthday." Kuki said, grabbing her ticket and giving it to her father.
"Honey, this is first class!" her father shouted.
"I know." Kuki responded.
"How come I don't get to go?" Mushi whined.
"Now, it's her birthday." her mother said.
"You must be really special to this boy for him to give you this." Kuki's father said.
"Yeah, we all know he has a BIG crush on her." Mushi said.
"He does?" Kuki asked.
"Well, isn't it obvious?" Mushi asked.
"Is it?" Kuki asked.
"Well, you can go." Kuki's mother said.
"REALLY?" Kuki asked.
"Of course." her father said. "It's your birthday gift. But just stay safe." he said.
"OK!" she yelled. "Bye!" and Kuki slammed the door, skipping over to the treehouse.
It was about 6 PM when she came in and she saw Wallabee looking at her with big eyes.
"Where were you? I was so worried, Kuki!"
"I was just telling my parents. and since when did have you called me Kuki?" she asked.
"Ummm, since now?" he asked nervously. The others were making dinner and they both went into the kitchen.
"Hey you guys!" Kuki yelled.
"Hello, Numbuh Three." Nigel said.
"You want some PB&J? I'm making some." Abby said.
"You can have half of my grilled cheese sandwich, I can't eat anymore." Hoagie said.
"Since when can you NOT eat?" Abby asked.
"Hey!" Hoagie whined.
"I'll just make some noodles." Kuki said.
"I'll have that PB&J sandwich." Wallabee said.
"I'm on it." Abby said.
When they were done with their food (which was in about ten minutes), they were watching TV. Since it was her birthday and that time of the week, they had to endure Rainbow Monkey Babies, Rainbow Monkey Teenagers, and plain Rainbow Monkeys. After five minutes of watching them all "have fun" Wallabee couldn't take it anymore.
"I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!" he yelled as he started pulling on his hair to cover his ears.
"Well, it is her birthday." Nigel said. "Speaking of which, what would you like to do for your birthday? As KND tradition, your wish will come true!"
"I want..." she said.
"Something other than watching Rainbow Donkeys?" Wallabee asked.
"I wish that Numbuh Four will endure 5 hours of the Rainbow Monkey marathon!" Kuki shouted.
"WHAT?" he asked, getting very red.
"Oh, Numbuh Five has to see this." she said, putting on a smile and taking off her headphones.
"I AM NOT GOING TO WATCH RAINBOW DONKEYS FOR FIVE HOURS!" Wallabee yelled.
"Too bad, Numbuh Four. You'll have to do it." Nigel said over giggles from Kuki and Hoagie.
"Please, Wally?" Kuki asked with a puppy dog face.
"No, that is not going to convince me!" Wallabee yelled as he turned his face away.
"PLEASE?" she asked, coming closer to him.
"NO!" he yelled.
"PLEASE?" she asked a she turned his head. If you were looking from far away (which the rest of the sector were), it would look like they were kissing.
"ALL RIGHT!" he yelled.
"Yay!" she screamed, going back to watching TV.
After five hours of living up to his word, he finally switched the channel to wrestling. Nobody was even getting tired yet until Nigel said, "All right team, bedtime."
"What? It was just getting to the good part!" Wallabee whined as Hoagie turned off the TV.
"Too bad. Bedtime, now!" Nigel said, pointing to his room.
"Stupid Numbuh One and the Rainbow Donkeys..." Wallabee mumbled.
Wallabee was in his boxers and turned to his window. Soon, they would be going to Australia but he kind of wished only he and Kuki would go. He thought these sort of thoughts as he went to his bed. It was going to be a long time with all of the others. How can he spend some alone time with Kuki? He put his head on the pillow and slowly started to fall asleep.
A/N: PLEASE REVIEW!!!! Tell me if I made any grammatical errors, if my story's good/bad, and give me some ideas. Like, what is the purpose for Numbuh One going? Because I don't want to make it like Operation: AUSTRALIA when he goes to KND headquarters. Anyways, please review!
