Hi, thanks to Yami hitokiri for the review, but I live in England, and in the show, everyone calls Ryou Bakura, Bakura, and I've not seen any show where him home life is mentioned in enough detail for me to have known he lives in a flat on his own. Also Sonic Bird is NOT a flip effect, I own one and the text states: "When this card is summoned (excluding Special Summon), you may move 1 Ritual Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. The deck is then shuffled." whether this is the case in the show or not I don't know, but I went on what I could see on the card I have. But thanks anyway, it's a lot nicer than someone else's review for another one of my works; they said I shouldn't write anymore stories

Ok, chapter 4 is up, please R&R

Kala looked at the man in front of her, he had a duel disk and looked like the kind of person who could crush her in one blow. She pulled her new duel disk out of its box and put it on.

"I'm not exactly a pushover, I've got more up my sleeve than most people expect." she said, not letting her face show a flicker of emotion.

"Ok, I'll go first." he said putting his deck into the duel disk, she did the same, making sure her Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon was somewhere in her deck.

She drew her hand and looked at it: Stamping Destruction; Masked Dragon; Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon; Dragons Rage, and Red-Eyes Black Dragon. A plan had already formed in her mind as to what she was going to do.

He drew a card "Right, I'm gonna place my Battle Ox in attack mode, your turn, lets see what pathetic fur ball you've got." he sneered

She drew another Stamping Destruction Magic card "I place my Masked Dragon in defence mode, and end my turn." she said, placing the card on her duel disk.

He drew a card "Ok, Battle Ox attack, destroy her masked dragon." her dragon was gone, but it's effect was not.

"You've triggered my dragon's effect," Kala said, "When it's destroyed in battle, I got to summon a dragon with an attack of 1500 or less to the field, and I choose my Red-Eyes Black Chick, in defence mode."

"Ok, your move, not that your Dragon Chick will help you."

"Wrong, my Dragon Chick will help me crush you, because I now activate its effect, and sacrifice it to summon my Red-Eyes Black Dragon, then I sacrifice my Red-Eyes to summon my Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon, which also has an effect, it gains an extra 300 attack points for every dragon in my graveyard and I count 3, increasing my dragon's attack by 900 points from 2400 to 3300. Now Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon, attack and destroy his Battle Ox, looks like you lose 1600 life points."

"I've still got 2400 left, and I'm not through with you yet." he said, showing signs of anger.

"But nor have I, I place one card face down and end my turn." she said.

He drew again, "I summon one monster in defence mode, placing a Soul Tiger on the field. And I end my turn."

Kala drew Pot of Greed "I play Pot of Greed to draw to new cards." she drew Armed Dragon LV3 and Card Destruction. "Now I play Card Destruction, and we both have to discard our entire hands and draw the same number of cards again, and I had two dragons in my hand so my Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon gets another 600 attack points, making its total attack 3900." she discarded her hand and drew 4 new cards: Heavy Storm, De-Spell, Waboku, and Dian Keto the Cure Master. "Now I activate my face down card Dragon's rage, it means if one of my dragons attack a defence monster and their attack is higher than the defence monster's defence, the difference is still taken from your life points. Now my dragon attack. Oh dear only 600 life points left."

He drew "I place one card face down in defence mode and end my turn."

Kala drew her Harpie Lady 2, and smiled either way, she would win now, if it was an effect monster, her Harpie's effect would cancel it out, and if it had a high defence, her dragon would still be able to take it out with enough damage to her opponents life points for her to win, thanks to her Dragon's Rage Trap card.

"I play Harpie Lady 2 in attack mode, now my Harpie, attack his face down monster."

It was a Cyber Jar, "Too bad about my Harpie's special ability, she negates any flip effects from monsters she destroys, you're not the first person to have found that out the hard way, oh well, looks like I'm about to win, Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon, attack his life points directly. And it's over, I won, so bye." she walked away from the man who didn't seem to be able to come to terms with his loss, she turned round to look at him before turning into her street.

"What was up with him?" she wondered out loud, as she turned up her drive, when she got to her door there was a note inside the letter box. She picked it up and opened it, as she read her face turned pale and she dropped the paper.