Yaki ni Naru
By Angelis Raye Kamura
Sakusha ni memo:
Konnichi wa, mina-san! It's been awhile since I have written this fan fiction, so – like always– bear with me on this! Gomen nasai, for the extremely long wait, if you were waiting anxiously for the fourth chapter to this fan fiction. I know that the grammar was a bit bad in the past, as well as the spelling issues. I know that I have addressed this before, but know that I am using a word processor that has spell check and grammar check, that will no longer be a problem! I was also hoping to get more reviews for this. My first FMA fan fiction is doing very well, considering I have never gotten that many reviews for just one chapter. I know that it's been a long time since you last read this, so go ahead and read the chapters before this, if needed. I almost have a different writing style every time that I want to start this story up again, it seems.
A warning to those out there who like shonen ai, but do not like to read lemons / yaoi, please avoid the first part of the chapter, until you run across something that looks like the following (that would mean that it is now safe to read) :
I would like your feed back and your opinion of my fan fiction: Devil and Angel, and tell me in a review of the story if you want me to continue it, or just delete it. I have only 3 reviews for it last time I checked, and two of them are from a friend who reads almost everything that I write. Please tell me your opinion, or it will be gone forever.
Chapter 4: Sekai no Sakkaku
World of Illusion/ Society's confusion
Omnipresent POV
"Masaka! I cannot believe that your Okaa-san knew about us!" Satoshi said, after Daisuke had gotten off the phone. "Masaka!"
"Un... well, at least she doesn't disapprove, or anything." Daisuke shook his head in wonder. At least she tells me up-front that she approves! "Ja... what do you want to do –."
Daisuke was interrupted by none other than Satoshi – who had finally found the hair tie he had been looking for when the red head had been on the phone. The smaller moaned in pleasure as the other undid his robe, pushing him onto the bed, pulling off his robe as well. Deciding that it was all right that the Niwa could stay over for another night, the two were going to make the best of it.
"Ah..." Daisuke moaned, as the taller started to lick his neck and the surrounding area. "Sato-chan!"
Satoshi continued to lick the other smaller teen, savoring the taste of him for a second time. The blunette started to tangle his fingers in Daisuke's dark red hair, causing him to moan again, even louder.
"Here's your second serving..." The detective breathed into Daisuke's ear.
Satoshi readjusted himself into a more comfortable position over the other to do this properly... again. Still kissing Daisuke gently, the taller readily started to push himself into the other as gentle as he knew how to. Steadily, the temperature in the room started to raise as they got more passionate and intimate until Satoshi finally climaxed into Daisuke, and a rush of pure bliss and ecstacy fill both of them.
"How was that...?" Satoshi implored, out of breath. "Compared to last time, at least."
"Ne... Sato-chan... I thought it was better than last time, but that could have been because we were tired from our walk here from the front of the complex and up the stairs." Daisuke reasoned, trying to catch his breath as well, as he curled up in his lover's embrace. "What time is it...? Just wondering."
"Ah... about 10:30 in the morning," Satoshi announced after looking at the clock for a second. "So, what do you plan on doing for the rest of today?"
"I thought that we could go to the park, or go to a restaurant... nothing fancy. Or maybe go to the art museum? We could even go to the mall!" The red head looked to his lover. "It's up to you."
"Why do you always make me decide? Ne, how about we go to the restaurant down the street from the mall, then go shopping. Maybe after that, we could spend the evening before dinner at the park or the art museum. What do you think?"
"You always do that!"
"Do what?"
"Make sure that we go to all the places that I want to go to. All the ones that I suggested, you always include in the plans."
"Haha! Well, those are the places I like to go to as well."
"Since when!"
"Since I started to go with you to those places."
There was silence for a short while, until Daisuke said that they should get into the shower if they planned on going anytime soon.
Once the two were dressed and ready to go, they headed to the front of the apartment complex where Satoshi parked his car. The ride to the restaurant was pleasant, filled with almost pointless, but cute, rambling from the dark haired teen about school and some of his other friends that were in a few of his classes.
"Welcome to the Garden View Restaurant," greeted the host standing at the door.
The two sat down in one of the small tables in the garden porch outside.
"It's a perfect day for this kind of thing!" Daisuke announced as a light breeze passed through the area.
"I agree completely," replied Satoshi, the wind starting to tangle his waist length, blond-ish-blue hair. He didn't mind, but pushed the thought of taking a long time that night to get all the tangles out. The down side to long hair. He thought.
"You look very sexy with your hair like that you know." Said a voice from behind to Satoshi.
"Dare no...?" Who the hell is this! Satoshi turned to face the person.
"Ohayou, Sato-kun!" The young man greeted, as he messed Satoshi's hair up even more by patting him on the top of his head.
"Ryou-kun!" Satoshi spluttered, finding the person to be none other than his foster-father's nephew, who was only a year older than him. He had known him growing up, but since Satoshi moved to his apartment three years before, they hadn't seen each other.
"I work here now! Isn't that great!" Ryou noticed the red head that was sitting across from his old friend. "So, who's your koibito, Sato-kun? Haven't seen him before. Does Hiwatari-san know about him?" Ryou asked slyly, brushing his shoulder-length brown hair back.
Satoshi flushed immediately, "This is Daisuke... Daisuke, this is Ryou, one of my foster-father's relations."
"Nephew, actually! I've know Sato-kun the day since Hiwatari-san adopted him! That was so long ago, huh?"
"Ohayou, Ryou-san," Daisuke greeted politely and properly, bowing his head slightly, and using a more mature voice than before. The way that Daisuke had said that reminded Satoshi with a pang of Dark, trying to fool someone into doing something... almost a like polite act that he put on whenever he wanted something, or just trying to make a good impression. You know how they say that the first impressions are the most crucial...
"Anyway! Nice to meet you, Daisuke... what was your last name?"
"Aren't you our waiter, Ryou-kun?" Satoshi insisted, getting slightly angry. He leaned close to the other's ear and whispered: "Don't you dare tell Tou-san, understand!"
"All right-y then. But you didn't tell me his last name..." Ryou pleaded.
"It's Niwa," Daisuke announced.
"Ni-Niwa!" Ryou sputtered.
"Ryou-kun... please. You're our waiter, right? Please act like it." Satoshi glared at his older friend, cold as ice.
"A-all right... what would you two like to drink?" Ryou blushed as he took down the order.
Later that day... at the park, after the museum
"I liked a lot of the stuff they had there, didn't you, Sato?" Daisuke asked cheerfully. "Sato? Are you all right? You've been kinda out of it since we saw Ryou-kun."
"Yeah... I know that I am. It's just that I never expected to see him again."
"Really? Why is that?"
"I really shouldn't tell you this."
"Come on... I'm your lover... What would be so important to keep from me?"
"I guess that you're right... Well, ironically... Ryou was the first one that I had ever come to like more than an acquaintance, and I mistook that feeling for love when I was about ten. He asked me if I loved him and I had said yes... He did everything with me... it only lasted a year, though. I told him near the end that I had mistaken the feeling that I had for him; he was extremely upset and vowed that he would make it impossible for me have a man that I would call my lover or boyfriend." Satoshi sighed heavily, looking at the ground. "When I had gotten the courage to ask, I asked Krad to erase what he had done to me from my mind, so that I wouldn't have to live with it the rest of my life. I know what he did to me, but I don't remember anything beyond that."
"What did he do to you?" Daisuke aksed, suddenly worried about what the other man named Ryou could have done to his lover.
"He raped me."
The redhead was shocked beyond belief – Ryou had raped Satoshi! So that was why Satoshi and Ryou acted so weird around each other? It really didn't make much sense, but Daisuke believed Satoshi and what he said. It was bad enough that he had Krad erase it from his memory, so it probably scarred him for the rest of his life after it had happened. Now Daisuke felt extremely sorry for his lover.
"I feel sorry for you... I have never had that happen to me, so I wouldn't know how it feels... but I do understand what it is and how you feel about it. I really am sorry for you." Daisuke voiced, looking up at the lighter boy.
"It's all right..." Satoshi smiled, looking down at the redhead next to him on the bench. "I don't really know how it feels any more either... so both of us have no idea. That's what's best, right?"
"Just not to dwell on something like that? Yeah."
Silence hung in the air for awhile, as the couple watched the sun set. It was beautiful... the clouds were alight with many interesting colors that painted the beautiful portrait of a sunset before them. The two curled up in each other's embrace, Satoshi – resting his chin on the smaller boy's head, Daisuke – his arms around his lover's waist, his head resting against the taller teen's chest.
"Kirei..." Satoshi whispered with awe.
"Mm..." Daisuke agreed.
"Aishiteru, Daisuke."
"Aishiteru."
AN:
Well, should I continue, or is this a good place to end the story? Might want to tie up the loose ends though... maybe create a conflict with Ryou? Who knows, but if you guys want me to make this is the end of this story, I will. Tell me what you think in your review, all right? I'm open to any suggestions for a sequel if you wish... but it still kinda sounds unfinished to me... so I think that I should continue. I just really don't know what to do! I need to know what you guys think about this before I do anything rash!
