Love Revealed

Hello. My name is Sad Girl, and this is my first attempt at a fan fiction. I love to write, however, I don't think I am that good. So I could really use some reviews, and some advice on writting style, ect. ect. I would like to say there was actually an author who inspired me, just from the story I read of hers. That author is la8980, and the story is 'The Truth Behind Their Eyes'. If you haven't read it yet... you should! It's great! Ok... on with the story...

Sad Girl / Roses of Chaos

Chapter 1

The sun began to set beyond the horizon. It had been a long time since they watched the sun set together, just the two of them. Kagome glanced over at Inuyasha, then fixated back at the setting sun once more, with a smile across her soft lips.

Inuyasha's ears twitched slightly, as he let his muscles relax. He leaned back, putting all his body weight on his elbows. Silence filled the air as the last ember of sun fell behind the forest trees, not to be seen again until the early , anticipating morning. In its place climbed a full moon, as bright as the brilliant stars that blanketed the sky.

"What a beautiful night," Kagome said softly.

"Don't you think so Inuyasha?" She turned her head toward the white haired, dog-eared demon.

"I guess so," he said. "Just another night to me." He watched the stars flicker. They twinkled like her eyes. Only he could stare at the stars all he wanted. 'Her eyes,' he thought to himself,' are a different story.'

'What a grouch!' Kagome thought to herself. 'Leave it to him to try and spoil this special night." She laid back, her arms spread wide at her side. She stared at the stars as they twinkled, giving the impression they were dancing for her. They danced to celebrate the love she had for another. But Kagome knew better. She knew that Inuyasha had other things on his mind, and she was not apart of that. She closed her eyes and let out a small sigh.

Inuyasha's ears perked up. "Something wrong Kagome?" he asked her gently.

"No, no! Nothing's wrong. Why do you think that?" she asked him shyly.

"I don't know. Just curious I guess." he said in a deeper tone. They laid there for what they both thought was too short, but had actually been 2 hours before they heard laughter in the distance.

"That's a good one Shippo!" They heard the voice of Sango as she laughed even harder.

"I DO NOT sound like that!" Miroku hollered gleefully.

"Sounds like Shippo's at it again," Inuyasha proclaimed. "I suppose we should head back, but I really don't feel like getting up just yet." Kagome said in a soft, yet slightly irritated voice.

Inuyasha stood to his feet as Kagome laid there in the soft green grass upon the cliff. Her eyes were closed, and her head was cocked to the side, away from Inuyasha. Inuyasha admired the radiant sight as the moon light seemed to only shine upon her. His eyes trailed gently along every curve of her delicate body. Her arms had the perfect shape to them. 'All that arrow practice' he told himself. He looked at her full, pail pink lips and sighed to himself. 'If only I can taste your lips, if only for a moment.' A blush crept across his face, and he quickly turned to hide his embarrassment.

Kagome heard Inuyasha rustle in the loose leaves, and she slowly opened her eyes and looked in his direction. His silvery hair trailed across his broad shoulders and down his back. The wind began to blow gently. Inuyasha's hair flew in the soft breeze, revealing the nape of his neck for only a moment. 'How I would love to run my fingers through your hair, to wrap my arms around your neck and kiss you softly,' she told Inuyasha silently in her mind. As her thoughts wandered, screams of laughter rang through the silence.

Inuyasha turned around, bend down slightly, and held out his hand. "I'll help you up, Kagome." his voice deep, yet soft. The masculine sound sent her heart racing. All Inuyasha wanted to do was pull her up into his arms and hold her. He wanted to inhale the scent of her hair, feel her slender body pressed against his. He wanted to feel her embrace him with love, the same love he had for her. But he knew he could never do that. 'Kagome doesn't think of me like that! She is just here to collect the jewel shards. Then she is leaving forever, back to her own time.' A small frown threatened to reveal itself upon his face, but was easily extinguished by the site of his beloved Kagome.

Kagome grabbed his hand and he lifted her up to her feet. Her left arm unconsciously trailed up under his kimono sleeve, along his biceps. Inuyasha froze stiff. The feel of her soft touch along his arm sent him in a daze. Their eyes met, and neither could move. 'His arms feel as they were chiseled from marble,' Kagome thought to herself.

"Just like stars," Inuyasha whispered under his breath.

"Huh… what… did you say something Inuyasha?" Kagome asked, coming from her trance as she quickly removed her left hand from his bare bicep.

"No…nothing," he said awkwardly. "Let's get back to the others.

Ok, that's part one. Hope you liked it. I thought about just stopping the story there, but then something else popped in my head. Hope everyone likes part two.

Sad Girl / Roses of Chaos