Fire's of the Mind


Voices


Death, one word, just one but oh so powerful; Humans, complex animals who have so much power in their dexterous digits, which they call fingers. Humans have discovered death to be inevitable and fear it which generates their fears for everything they do. Human's evolutionary progress did indeed have some disadvantages; we fear everything around us which includes each other. The greatest species of earth, bah, this is just a fabrication of our subconscious to make us feel more secure about ourselves, we are weak and vulnerable and you know it, don't be naïve enough to think we will last forever because we all must go sometime; then again why wait for death to catch us when we can bring it over forcefully onto ourselves. But we have our compassion and instinct to deal with, not to mention the fears that come with them. But the only reason we fear it in this form because of others who have died, the pain we felt because of their death, makes us believe it was pain they felt at that time but would it not be like turning off the light. But then again turning off the light makes it dark.

I hate the darkness; it brings back so many terrible memories, and it's so cold, why is it so cold? Please, tell me why, whenever I am surrounded by darkness I feel so lonely, cold and, scared; it's quiet in the dark, I can't see or hear anything but those thoughts which exist only in my mind. Nothing else but listen to my mind with no distractions around like phones and computers, mp3 players, normal people and my voice which seems to completely ignore what my mind and heart says, most of the time. This cold hurts, like the piercing cry of a howling child crying for a mother, I wish the mother comes soon then I can come out of this dark painful frozen world. Someone please stop the baby's cry, some one please save me, it hurts so much, please help.

What are you doing; Stop asking questions, stop feeling sorry for your self, stop lingering in the past, stop crying over spilt milk, stop screaming, stop talking, stop writing, stop looking at the screen, stop it, stop moving, stop that, look away from the phone, close the window, stop hiding how you feel, stop thinking, stop staring into your mind, express yourself , don't be calm, don't be contented with what you have, tell them what you want, show them your rage, your sadness, your engulfing jealousy and hate, tell them you can't live this life, tell them you can't cry no matter how hard you try, tell them you hurt yourself from the inside out, tell them you are always tired and can't sleep, TELL THEM, SHOW THEM, MAKE THEM SEE AND DON'T HOLD BACK.


So what do you think, it may become a one-shot if I am not happy enough about it to keep it going but I hope you like it and I hope it will do well I know it's short, but I got a lot of emotion into it so guess who its about and tell me what you thinks going to happen or your criticisms.


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