Kidnapped Part 4!
By: CuteKitty
Me- OK, before I start my story, I have some stuff to say:
Rogal Dorn Archangel of Death- Thanks for the idea, I might do that a little bit.
Sour Schulyer- thanks I am glad you like it, Trimspa is a really dumb weight loss program and I think it is really retarded
C.A.M.E.O- You didn't review my story, but you flamed CutePuppy's. That was mean, and you shouldn't have done that.
Please don't flame any of my stories, because I have enough people not liking me as it is, and I don't need insults from people I don't know. People work hard on their stories, and I don't think flames should be sent. So if you have a flame, don't send it, or lay it down GENTLY. Don't go like YOUR STORY SUX! Instead, make a few suggestions on how to make it better!
Now, on with the story
I don't own YuGiOh, Trimspa, Static Shock, and public or private schools, or anything else
PART 4- FINDING OUT
Yugi and his friends approached the address Seto gave them. Trimspa must be really rich. They walked in and started looking around. That is when they saw it- a tall shadowy figure that was wearing a trench coat they defied gravity. "Hello there. I see you have come for Mai." It said. "Yeah, and who are you?" Joey asked in his 'tough guy' voice. "Me? I am the kidnapper!" It said. Then it stepped out of the shadows. "SETO KAIBA!" Everyone yelled in surprise. "You kidnapped your own brother?" Joey added. "…No. That was a joke. I DID kidnap Mai" Seto said. "Why?" Yugi asked. "Mokuba and I were bored." Seto said. "Nice reason!" Tristan said. "You will have to duel me in order to get her back." Seto said. "Fine! I will duel! Joey said. "Duel? Dueling is getting SO old. How about a fist fight?" Duke suggested. "I have always wanted to do that! So here goes!" Joey said, punching Kaiba right in the face. Kaiba punched him back, and they kept punching and kicking each other until Joey finally got Seto in a headlock. Mokuba and a bunch of his friends from public school walked by and saw them fighting. "COOL!" They all yelled. Then they got popcorn and stuff and watched in awe, since Mokuba wasn't used to this, because he just started public school and nothing like this ever happened in a snobby private school. "Start getting used to this, it's a daily thing in our school." Mokuba's friend said. "I noticed" Mokuba replied, thinking back to the fight between a Goth and a punk last week. That was bloody. This was too, and they all enjoyed it. Then Mai came in. "I AM DONE BEING ABUSED BY YOU!" She yelled, her eyes practically burned out. "HOW WERE THEY ABUSING YOU?" Joey yelled, kicking Seto in the stomach. "They-they-made me- w-w-watch…STATIC SHOCK!" Mai yelled in fear and pain. "THEY WHAT?" Joey yelled, punching Kaiba EXTRA hard. "Don't lay a hand on my gurlfriend….ANYWHERE!" Joey yelled, throwing Kaiba to the ground. "And YOU little guy," Joey said pointing to Mokuba. "You have got to stop worshipping your brother. Are you sure he didn't Michael Jackson on you?" Joey said. "EWWW NO! And I will not listen to you, jerk!" Mokuba said throwing popcorn at him. Joey growled but left with Mai and his friends.
How do you like it? I don't think this is the end; tell me if it should be. And also, if you are reading "Yugioh Romance" by my friend CutePuppy, she won't be updating for a long while because she is spending Spring Break in South Carolina visiting her grandparents and her grandparent's computer can only do e-mail I think, so she won't update for a LONG while. But if you didn't read it, you should! It is in my favorite stories list in my profile.
CuteKitty
