Chapter 5... The Original.
Disclaimer: Gainax owns FLCL (Fooly Cooly or Furi Kuri) Chris owns Crobdan and Mayumi, I only own myself and all original characters and ideas. The song Last Resort is property of Papa Roach.
A/n: . This chapter and is dedicated to Chris (Crobdan), for he is the bastard who told me to write a story.
We all gazed up into the sky to see Suggula floating there in the air. "What a waste of a planet. I'd be doing these scum a favor by destroying their planet. Now where's Atomsk? Atomsk get your scaly bird fucking ass out here. NOW." Suggula was one dumb bastard."Atomsk you got to the count of ten-thousand, then I'll start destroying stuff." To get as powerful as he was, he had to sacrifice parts of his brain and his body. He sold his liver,colon,galbladder,bladder,kidneys,spleen,left lung,rigth ear, a vertabrae, two ribs, left hand left pinky, and his manhood. See how retarded he is."One,two,three,four,five,six..." Ten hours later... "Two thousand nine hundred ninety five, two thousand ni-" I was pissed, so I yelled out "SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU DAMNED MONKEY FUCKING, MAGGOT MOLESTING, COCK MUNCHING BITCH. Atomsk is dead. Now you will pay for your brothers mistakes and my brother's death." Suggula looks directly down at me and asks, "Who the fuck are you?" I glare at him and say. "Your brother was killed by my brother, but my brother lost his life in the process. Now it's your turn to die." He looks at me and smirks, then says, "I was the one who killed your brother. He was going to live before I decided to kill him." I shout at him "You bastard, you shall die for killing my brother." He looks at me as though I was a spoiled child that everyone hated.
I shout at Haruko, Crobdan, and Naota,"GET IN FIGHTING POSISITIONS " We all got in fighting posisitions, then flew up into the air. My body began to glow black. Haruko began to glow pink. Crobdan began to glow red. Naota began to glow green. "Do you four actually think you can beat me by glowing and having wings?" He began laughing after asking us the question. "Yes, because you didn't count on us having the powers of The Four Ancient Protectors." A look of pure terror quickly graced his ugly facial features. He thinks, 'No it can't be. They can't be the ones with the power.' Then he began to think out loud, "No matter I will still kill all of you and then destory this godforsaken backwood planet. Starting with her." he says pointing toward Eri. "No, please don't kill me." she cries out. He fires a energy blast out of his hands only to be slapped away by Naota's bass just as it was about to hit Eri. "YOU STUPID DOUCHEBAG CRACKHEADED DOG SLUT, YOU SHALL PAY FOR TRYING TO HURT ERI!" shouts Naota toward Suggula. He looked at them with no interest and looked toward Mayumi. He then sends a huge ass energy blast hurtling toward Mayumi. It was about ten inches from Mayumi, when Crobdan swatted it away with his bass. "SAME THING TO YOU THAT NAOTA SAID EXCEPT FOR MAYUMI!" shouts Crobdan. Crobdan and Naota then charge towards Suggula swinging their basses at him. Naota slams his bass into Suggula's side, while Crobdan slammed his bass into Suggula's crotch. Crobdan flies back a few feet to see why his attack had no effect. "Ha, you idiot, I've no manhood, I gave it up to have my power." he says dully. Naota and Crobdan attacked him all over the place. They were holding there own as their assault on Suggula continued for two hours straight until the point where they both were exhausted.
I look at Haruko as she looks at me. I then say, "It's our turn." She just nods to reply. We both go flying forward slamming our basses into Suggula repeatedly. "DIE MOTHERFUCKER!" I shout at him while slamming my bass into his head. From below me I hear a "Heeya" from Haruko as she slams his bass into his kneecap. This caused him to go down on one knee. Our hits weren't doing much damage to him since he was bigger than any building ever made. We, as in me, Haruko, Crobdan, and Naota, flew in all directions hitting him all over his body, trying to damage and defeat him. We all hit him in the ribs at the same time, causing him to spit up a huge amount of blood causing almost half of Mabase to flood in the red blood, although no damage was done to the city. "You'll shall pay for that." he shouts. He throws a huge energy blast towards me, but I knock it back at him, making it hit him in the kneecap, burning him badly. Haruko takes this chance to fly forward and attack him, but just as she was about to slam her bass into him he fires a huge energy blast at Haruko, sending her flying backwards, mildly injuring her. My bass flies out of my hands and straps itself to my back as I fly forward and catch Haruko in my arms and fly to the ground with her in my arms. I look down at her in my arms. "Haruko are you ok?" I ask quickly.. She looks me in the eyes, then says, "Brandon, don't worry I'm going to be okay. Now kill him." I gently lay her on the ground and stand up. I look at Suggula. "YOU FUCKING CUMGUZZILING QUEER BASTARD, YOU'RE IN MY WAY SO YOU MUST DIE" I shout extremely loudly at him. I flew up in the air. A look of pure hatred was plastered to my face. My body began to glow an even darker black. I pull my bass off my back and hold it in my left hand. I put my hand out and yell, "Basses come to me!" Crobdan's bass, Naota's bass and Haruko's bass came to me floating in mid-air. I took my bass and slammed it together with Haruko's bass making a double bass. I then did the same with Crobdan's bass and Naota's bass. Then I took the double basses and slammed them together. Then a huge black flash happened and smoke rose up everywhere. When the smoke cleared I stood there in mid-air with my body glowing midnight black and my eyes glowing deep, dark crimson red. In my hands there was now one single guitar. A Gibson SG Voodoo.
Suggula looked at the guitar and asks fearfully, "How'd you get that guitar. The Legendary Gibson SG Voodoo." I just smirked an evil smirk and flew forward and slammed the Voodoo into Suggula. This sent him flying backwards. I was possessed. I continued my vicious assault on Suggula making him bleed badly, while saying, "This is for B.D." I flew back so there was a medium/short distance between us. My eyes went back to normal, but my body still glowed. "You will die NOW!" I shout at him. I hold the guitar shot gun style with the neck aimed at Suggula. I began to play at the last "I'm losing my sight part in the song Last Resort." As I was doing this a huge black ball of energy began to form at the end of the neck of the guitar. As I finish playing the ball is huge enough to destroy Suggula. I yell, "DIE MONSTER!" as I shoot the ball of energy at him. It hit him and engulfed him, killing him instantly.
My body stopped glowing and my wings went back into my body, as did everyone else's. The guitars split apart and went back to their rightful owners. I fell to the ground from mid-air, because I had also used my own energy inside me to kill Suggula. Haruko had fully recovered and everyone ran over to where I was on the ground. "Brandon!" cries out Haruko kneeling down beside me. "Don't worry I'm okay. I just used up a lot of my own energy to help defeat Suggula." Then I went unconscious. Haruko smiled and said, "Come on get him back to the bakery, so he can rest." Crobdan picked me up as everyone made their way to the bakery.
Three Days Later-
I started to wake up. I reached over and found my bass beside me on the bed in perfect condition. I slowly sat up. I ask loudly, "Where am I?" Haruko jumps down off the top bunk and says, "You're in Naota's house, in Naota's room, on his bed. It's nice to see you're finally up." I look at her with a puzzled look, then ask, "How long have I been out?" Haruko smiles then says, "Three days." "Ok" I say nonchalantly. Then all of a sudden my body, Haruko's body, Crobdan's body, and Naota's body were surrounded by a black light. We were taken out side all of a sudden Atomsk's voice boomed in our heads, "Good the only one who could pose a total threat is dead. Now you four must die. The four of us felt the pain engulf our bodies. I roared out "Only kill me! I'm the only one who can defeat you!" "Yes, I see you're the only threat so now you die." He took all of his power from everyone else. "Sucker" I say. "What?" he roars. Black energy came out from my palms and all of his energy went into me. I floated to the ground. I turned looked at Haruko and said, "Here is your power." All of the energy flowed into Haruko out of me. I fell to my knees. "All my energy is gone, I gave it to you. I have no reason to live. Besides, my only reason to live is dead, so I'm going to her. Laecatia is her name." As I said this they watched as my body had a golden light around it, then disappeared. "Wow, goodbye friend" said Haruko after I was gone. "Naota, I have to confess… I love you." said Haruko. Naota's mouth hung open. Feelings from the past slowly came back to him and found his love for Haruko was true love. Unlike his love for Ninamori, which was only real because Naota needed someone after Haruko left. That was never real love. Crobdan saw Ninamori get up and slammed his bass into her skull and said "Score", as it rolled away. Naota ran to Haruko, threw his arms around her, picked her up, and kissed her. "I love you too Haruko." Haruko smiled and they kissed again.
Crobdan and Mayumi went back to Rahuria and got married. Naota and Haruko also got married and Haruko turned Naota into a Rahurian so he'd live forever with her. Life was sweet to them forever more.
Fin-
I hope those who have read the story have liked in some way. Next chapter is an alternate ending. Look for my writing in the future. Please Review.
