LOKIEEEEEEEEE!my first rhyming poem!(laughs maniacally)i juz did it in the wee hours of the morning...heheh..congratulations to me!

okie since this is a special occasion i shall make a dedication

dedicated to yodai hiro and my fren AngelicAssassin99 (hopefully i spelt her nick correctly)..

Those Eyes That Take Me

Those beautiful frozen blue eyes that take me

In a handsome face so young with eyes so wise

In them I want to drown

As if in a spell I was bound

Looking like a lost soul

Those pools are seemingly so cold

I really wish to help

For him this utter love I felt

I want to be his light

And help him win his inner fight!

by
ym lee
24/03/2005
1.03am

A/N: this is a ...u guessed it...misao to aoshi poem...or rather i meant it to be..

ok i know this probably sounds stupid or pathetic or makes no sense at al...but hey please review...CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM is very much appreciated...thank you...