LOKIEEEEEEEEE!my first rhyming poem!(laughs maniacally)i juz did it in the wee hours of the morning...heheh..congratulations to me!
okie since this is a special occasion i shall make a dedication
dedicated to yodai hiro and my fren AngelicAssassin99 (hopefully i spelt her nick correctly)..
Those Eyes That Take Me
Those beautiful frozen blue eyes that take me
In a handsome face so young with eyes so wise
In them I want to drown
As if in a spell I was bound
Looking like a lost soul
Those pools are seemingly so cold
I really wish to help
For him this utter love I felt
I want to be his light
And help him win his inner fight!
by
ym lee
24/03/2005
1.03am
A/N: this is a ...u guessed it...misao to aoshi poem...or rather i meant it to be..
ok i know this probably sounds stupid or pathetic or makes no sense at al...but hey please review...CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM is very much appreciated...thank you...
